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Yarri was sitting in her cabin and waiting. Under normal circumstances, she was a very patient person – you cannot be a good hunter without the ability to remain still for long periods of time. But this was a different kind of waiting. Waiting for something that she couldn’t possibly influence. Waiting trapped in a small room on a small ship in the middle of nothing, nowhere to run or hide if things go sideways. Waiting for a possible death.

She growled angrily and for the millionth time swore to herself she would never go on another boat ever again. Shaela jumped up to her feet and hissed, sensing danger. Just a second later, Yarri could feel it too – the ship was going a bit up and shaking. There was a loud noise from all the water trying to tear the ship apart and then silence, followed by loud cheering. ‘Hmm, this wasn’t that bad,’ Yarri thought, before glancing at Shaela.

The cougar was alerted, growling, her ears lying flat towards the back of her head and the fur on her back and tail bristled. Yarri froze. She didn’t remember seeing Shaela this horrified before. She quickly jumped up and collected her weapons, tying them closely together and then to a strap around her body. She rushed out of the cabin and then stood in the corridor, unsure of what to do.

The sea decided it for her – suddenly the floor jumped up, throwing her to the ceiling, then back down and then everything rotated around, sending her flying around like a ragged doll. When things finally stood still, Yarri got up on her shaky legs. There was a light blinking right beneath her feet. The ship really did turn upside down, which meant it would quickly start filling up with water. Suppressing the horrifying thought that the ship is already halfway to the bottom of the ocean, with just a few bubbles of air remaining below the deck, she turned around to look for Shaela.

The cougar jumped out of the cabin door, slightly bloodied from hitting something, but alive and without serious injuries. “Fuck this ship,” Yarri mumbled, remembering that the captain said to go to the escape hatches. Fortunately, there were glowing arrows to guide the way. “Fuck the ocean.” There were some bodies lying on the ground, one man clearly dead with his head hanging in a sharp angle, and a young woman, unconscious, but breathing. Yarri picked her up, muttering all the curses she knew, and continued to the escape hatch.

Finally getting to the hatch, she saw one of the crewmembers, helping people get out of the ship, giving them life jackets. There were a few small boats around the hatch and people were boarding them. “Did you check the B2 corridor?” the crewmember yelled at another one, who was coming to the hatch, supporting two bleeding and limping people.

The man just shook his head. “It is starting to fill with water, there is no time.”

“Which way is it?” Yarri shouted at the crewmembers.

“There is no time!”

“Just shut up and show me the way!”

The crewmember just shook his head and pointed to one of the corridors. “It is the second one to the left. We can’t wait much longer.”

“Then don’t. Take Shaela on a boat if there is space.” She handed the unconscious girl to him and sent the cougar out of the hatch. ‘Why the hell am I doing this?’ she thought, running around the corridor and checking rooms. There were already few inches of cold water on the ground and its level seemed to be increasing faster than she would like. All of the rooms she had checked were empty. She kicked the door to the last cabin, finding two kids kneeling beside their father. The man had a badly broken leg, a piece of the bone was sticking out bellow his knew.

“Save my children,” he mumbled when he saw her.

“To hell with this.” She quickly grabbed him and put him over her shoulder, making him scream loudly when his injured leg moved. “Run by the arrows, I will help your father,” she told the kids. “NOW!” she yelled when they hesitated, making them dart out of the cabin.

Yarri was much slower now, the man wasn’t of the lightest and the fact that she had to wade knee-high water also didn’t help much. Grunting and panting heavily she made it to the escape hatch, relieved to see that the kids were entering the last boat. The man she was carrying was silent now, she hoped that he had only lost his consciousness. The crewmember to whom she talked before jumped back to the ship, helping her with the man. The hatch was now barely above the sea level and as Yarri jumped out of the ship, the water started pouring in.

They put the father into the boat and the crewmember jumped in, grabbing a paddle. “Come on!” he yelled at her, but Yarri, waist down in the water by then, suddenly felt a strong pull back. The ship started to sink fast, creating a swirling vortex of water currents. She didn’t have time to scream out or even take a deeper breath as she was pulled under water and dragged mercilessly back to the escape hatch.
Acting more from an instinct than some conscious thought, she took out a dagger and shoved it to the ship’s hull. She must have been lucky to hit some gap between the platings, because the dagger went in. She desperately held to it with both hands, the only thought on her mind being that if she would get sucked back into the ship, she would end up at the bottom of the sea with it.

When the crazy currents finally calmed down a little, Yarri faced a new problem – she was being dragged down with the ship now, already several meters deep. She bounced off the hull as hard as she could towards the light that signalized the water surface. Her lungs were burning already, her brain desperately ordering her mouth to open and breathe in.

‘Well I could sure use the stupid life jacked now,’ she thought as she finally pierced the water surface. Breathing heavily, she tried to keep her head above water. Looking around, she saw some wreckage from the ship, and, to her huge relief, a boat heading towards her. When they pulled her in, she could just lie there, coughing and panting.

She must have fallen asleep for a bit, because when she opened her eyes, the boat was already ashore, its passengers walking around, confused and shaken. The crewmembers were trying to organize things and to make sure that everyone’s injuries would be taken care of. She sighed with relief when she saw Shaela running towards her. She scratched her under the chin. “Let’s not do ‘that’ again.”

Yarri looked around. Under other circumstances the beach could be considered a beautiful place. Now, filled with people, boats, wreckage and also what seemed to be a line of dead bodies, you wouldn’t probably consider it a great vacation destination. The beach ended at the tree line and Yarri headed towards it. She wasn’t really sure of what to do – her conscience commanded her to stay here and help take care of the people, especially as it seemed that the nearest civilization is rather far away from here. But she rarely listened to her conscience. In fact, until a few hours ago, she didn’t even know she had one. The smart thing would be to just disappear. Especially since the hunters were on board, at she saw at least one of them survived.

Still hesitant, she examined the edge of the forest, looking for signs of danger. Or signs of potential food. Shaela followed her quietly, carefully sniffing every tree and every rock.
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Well I think I found a way to play a female character in this female not-so-friendly world, without being a cheap copy of Lagertha. And I think the two hours of my worktime investigating the Nordic mythology and the Vǫlur were exceptionally well spent.


@Wick Is this one going to turn into a novel too? :) I am thinking about joining, but just cant come up with a character idea I would like.
@Connor I mean absolutely no discrespect, but could you write more punctuation into your texts? I know I struggle with it all the time as English isnt my first language, but I just try to put a comma or a semicolon here and there to separate things up a bit.

I was reading this bit maybe five times, before I realized there are like three different sentences jammed together.

The Bandit yelled commands into the radio jack acting on instinct drew the only weapon he had and slammed it into the bandits clavicle but as the man collapsed he fired a shot off from a pistol and hit jack right in the left eye jack was left conscious and tried to patch his wounds quickly the man would be no threat as he knew that he was already blacking out from blood loss.


And also in regards to your character - it is probably not my place to criticize, but having a person that is good both with melee weapons and guns AND at the same time knows "how to heal almost any injury" seems kinda OP.
@The Narrator hopeful bump? :)


Lucy



Lucy sighed when Arte sent her to kitchen. “Seriously?” she mumbled to herself, when she saw what Kric was doing. Skinning squirrels. Awesome. She took a large apron, so she wouldn’t get her best dress dirty. It would be rather hard to find some customers with stains of squirrel blood all over her.

She frowned at Krick. He was pretty, under other circumstances she would certainly go for a flirt with him. But she had known him for a while and knew him very well, him and his little tricks he liked to play on people. That’s why she was most suspicious when he offered her money. So much money. Compared to what she would normally have to do to earn that sum, skinning squirrels didn’t seem so bad. But this was Krick. A deal with a tiny devil is a deal with the devil nonetheless. ‘But it is soooo much money,’ she thought desperately.

Her thoughts were interrupted by Angle entering the kitchen. Lucy never understood why would someone like Angle choose to live and work in this tavern. If she could fly wherever she wanted to, she sure as hell wouldn’t end up in a place like this. Hands covered in squirrel guts. Ugh.

“I have the squirrels covered,” she said quickly and grabbed the pouch from the imp’s hand, wondering how soon she would regret it. “Maybe help Kric with the vegetables.”
This seems very interesting.
What is the timeframe here - how long after the fog arrived is this situated? What about more primitive weapons like bows, spears, etc. - would those be useful, or completely outshined by guns? The fog comes and goes to places, or is it a permanent thing in some areas? What about normal animals, are there some still left in the wild, or were all killed/mutated by the fog?
Also, I am not from US, and I have a rather rough idea where Seattle and Pennsylvania are located. But according to googlemaps there is over 2600 miles between the two places. I assume the plan isnt the walk the entire distance on foot, so there are some vehicles still operational?
Yarri was stunned by a show of disrespect from some of her soon-to-be companions. How could someone talk like that to the king? But he didn’t seem offended, so Yarri kept her mouth shut. Perhaps this was the way things were at court.

She was incredibly relieved at the notion of more soldiers coming along. Keeping in mind the decription of the monsters, this would have otherwise been rather short journey, ending badly for all participants. She frowned when the king talked about horses. Of course, she expected it but that didn’t make her any happier. She wasn’t very fond of horses, to put it mildly. Riding slowly without falling was possible for her, but only if the horse chose to cooperate. But she sure as hell wouldn’t be going in a carriage.

She followed the knight to the stables, having Luna wait outside. “Do you have some um… nicer horses?” she asked him nervously, seeing one rather aggressive stallion. “I’m not an expert rider.”

He smiled at her. “I think I have one just for you,” he said and pointed at one brown mare in the corner. “Her name is Bella and she has the nicest personality I’ve seen in a horse in a long time. Or humans for that matter,” he laughed.

‘That doesn’t look so scary,’ Yarri thought, approaching the horse slowly. “Hey there. You aren’t going to try and kill me, right?” She patted the mare’s head carefully, giving her an apple from a barrel standing nearby. Bella neighed quietly and nuzzled her hand, searching for more apples. ‘Well it doesn’t get any better than that. It could get much worse though.’

Yarri took a saddle and the stablemaster helped her put it on the horse, showing her how to do it herself next time. After she took a deep breath, gathering her courage, she climbed into the saddle. The knight was right, Bella didn’t make any attempt to throw her off and Yarri was eternally grateful for that. She guided the horse out of the stables, completely forgetting about Luna waiting at the entrance.

Bella didn’t seem to appreciate a wolf running towards her. She let out a panicked neigh and started to jump around. “Luna! No! Sit!” Yarri yelled, desperately trying to calm the horse and not get thrown out of the saddle. “Hey, girl, it’s all fine,” she whispered to Bella’s ear, gently stroking her neck. After a while the mare finally calmed down.

‘Damn these animals. This is going to be a very fun trip,’ Yarri thought sarcastically. Still, she was proud that she didn’t fall down into the mud. That probably wouldn’t be a best way to introduce herself to her companions.
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