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@Nathan:

- I have nothing against her being Takigakure as you explained it nicely in the story
- Make the Elemental Affinity clean as Alice stated, please - just to avoid confusion and unpleasant moments in the future + " The extra equipment part " - as with the previous, we want to avoid confusion
- Every character must have some weaknesses, even ANBU
- Explain and fix the custom techniques
- Every summon needs a history, be it a Ninja Tiger or a Peacock

@Lilly:

It might have been harsh, it might have been not - balance above all things, and especially here when we all want to enjoy the story with balanced characters.
Hiroshi Hon & Sayuri Cho
Konohagakure Team Six


Team Six, new formation!


" Sayuri! You will be late again!"

The red haired girl gritted her teeth at those words, as they belonged to the ones she heard most often. But this time, they were totally unjustified - she had more than an hour until she had to meet her new team and teacher. Her team is going to be the old team of her uncle, Team Six with a new Sensei - Hiroshi Hon, also a relative to her uncle. So all that remained were her teammates - she was excited about the prospect of meeting them but kind of nervous about working together with them - so far, she had to do everything alone and got used to it. But then again, having somebody reliable at her side, covering her back and entrust her back to be covered to Sayuri. She will have to work extra hard not to disappoint her family, her aunt and uncle. Smiling and worrying at the same time, she finished working on her final scroll - two of them contained a net, another one several explosive tags, and the last filled with two dozens of kunai and shuriken sealed in it.

Smiling and carefully placing it into their respective places on her belt, After those, she picked up her other tools - her kunai and shuriken pouch with wires. Carefully checking her katana, she then proceeded to zip her sweater a bit and then placed her katana on her back. Satisfied that she had everything, she left a note to her parents that she is leaving. Opening her window and taking the first leap, she hought she heard complains about her never using the door. Smirking a bit at the thought, she made her way towards the Hon Compound, where she is to meet her Sensei, Hiroshi and her new teammate. What is she going to be like? Will she be likeable? Will she be annoying? Will she like Sayuri? Will their Sensei be alright? THese and more popped up in her head as she made her way towards the compound.

The Hon Compound


Hiroshi was sitting inside of one of the dojo in the compound. He was sitting in the middle of a circle composed of several smaller rings, each one containing an animal - horse, snake, crane, tiger, praying mantis, lion, dragon and a bear. Several small notes were written arond each one of them. Next to Hiroshi was Hirudora, one of the famed ninja tigers." That´s interesting, Hiroshi. I see that you worked on it so much, but can you imagine using it in actual combat?" The tiger spoke up with a deep, slow voice - a wise voice that Hiroshi respected each time he heard it." I thought about it, Hirudora. While it looked promising, it is not suitable for actual combat. But it excels in preparing you for combat. Preparation is the key to victory, Hirudora. We all know that." His companion remained silent for a while, as if considering the words it just heard." True. I´ll take my leave now and get myself prepared for the next time, Hiroshi."

Hirudora disappeared in a puff of smoke, leaving Hiroshi alone. The circles represented a new way of finding inner balance - and by finding that, finding an edge over one´s adversaries. He worked on it for the past few days, but he also prepared for being a Sensei once again, leading a two member team. Both of them will be kunoichi - Chinatsu Hon, one of his own kin and a fellow wolf of whom he had great expectations, and also just happened to be his niece. The second member of his team will be Sayuri Cho, Aiko´s niece, of whom he also had great expectations. A promising team what he was very happy to train and give them everything they can ask for, and maybe even more. They were to arrive any minute for their very first mission as a team - a very dangerous one. The mission will thoroughly test their ability to rely on each other, as well as on their own skills. Just as he thought this, Hiroshi was turned his head to the sound of knocking on his door.

" Looks like Team Six is assembling. "
I updated Sayuri with the Konoha earphone communicator as I forgot to include it on the first try.

Could anyone review her and Chinatsu, please? I already gave her my stamp of approval, and when Lilly ads one last tech we came up together with, I will be ready to review her again.
Masami Hyuuga
Konohagakure Genin, Team 9


Thinking together was a must do for this mission, that was true. Working together with Mia and Shikaroku seemed a bit tricky when they fought against the giant turtle, but the very fact that they accomplished the mission proved it taht it was possible. Still, Masami had a bit heavy heart against Mia for saying what she just said." Working together like a team means we will share crucial information. But your way of thinking is correct, we have to cover as much ... area ... as possible. Or just the important ones. Let me think for a while."

Locating paper tags. She was expecting something else from Hiron, but then again - when it was coming from him, even collecting paper tags could prove to be a problematic task. Masami thought that her Byakugan would give her an edge, but she doubted their Sensei would ignore something so obvious as her all seeing eyes. No, there is bound to be a trick or trap ... well, knowing Hiron, more than one trap waiting for them. Looking from her teammates to her Sensei and back, she was thinking hard about where to start their search. The training doubts were not that much of a field to cover. And if Hiron placed the tags himself, there was a chance that Mia´s ninken could pick up their scent. But that was ... questionable at the best.

While she was out from the village of a mission, Masami thought they should focus and search through the training field thoroughly. Turning Shikaroku and Mia, she came up with some ideas." Mia! Is there a possibility your ninken could pick up a scent and help us find the tags? I doubt my Byakugan would be able to pick them up - that would be way too easy. I guess ... we should go with Mia´s plan. Use clones and any other means to cover as large an are as we can. Let´s get to it!"
Ryoku Samidare
The Third Amekage


" Just as I thought ... the quiet before the storm."


Ryoku was observing the Four Tails since he and his group arrived to confront the beast. He was glad it happened a bit outside of the village that was struggling so hard to rebuild. The lake situated nearby would give him a good advantage, since his Water Release would become that much powerful. Looking to his left and right, he saw brave men and women that gathered to defend their homes. Their strength will be more than needed - even if Ryoku was the Amekage, a Tailed Beast was still a daunting challenge. After a while of observing and thinking, the Four Tails made it´s first move - one that spurred Ryoku into immediate action. Several salvos of lava were flying towards Amegakure, while the Four Tails was roaring it´s intentions. Ryoku closed his eyes and made a quick succession of seals.

" Water Release: Stormy Blockade! " . A large amount of water was summoned from the sky, directly hitting the lava based attacks of the Four Tails and averting most of the damage from the village. At this thought, Ryoku was hesitating - he knew he could not protect his village entirely from the beast, so with a heavy heart, he decided to focus on the beast alone. Cancelling the technique just as the Four Tails started to charge towards his small group, Ryoku briefly considered his next move. " I see you are not playing with us, Four Tails. However ... ", Ryoku started to form a lengthy series of handseals, and while he could do the technique he wanted to perform with a smaller number of seals, this time he was aiming for power." ... don´t underestimate the Amekage! Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique!"

An enormous water dragon formed from all the water that fell down in Ryoku´s previous technique. Counting on his comrades to take care of the huge wave that was the result of the Yonbi´s roar, he directed a dragon towards the charging beast. Ryoku was bracing for the impact of his technique, but was also thinking about his next move, should the Water Dragon be insufficient to stop the beast - which most likely will be the case.

He was not going to let the Four Tails do as he pleases.
@Lilly:

While the sheet looks nice to me, there are a few points I am not really OK with. They are the following:
- too many positive entries in the Skills/Abilities pool and a Deep Chakra reserve, which I take is meant as a larger one
- the limit for starting Genin techniques is 4x D - Rank and two times a C - Rank technique

It is a nice sheet in overal. See to these points, notify me or I will check it out as soon a I can tomorrow!

UPDATE!!
@Lilly:

I have never seen such a quick reaction. Looks good to me, I approve of it!
Well, if not ... I will have several empty scrolls with me. The need to improvise is rising.
I would like to go all clichey and stuff, but I´ll just get right to the point - I have been slowly returning to RPG the last week and now, if possible, I would like to announce that I am ready to jump into Corrected & Connected at the first possibility granted to me.
@J8:

The Sealing Scrolls in her inventory means that she is skilled in using them and are empty and ready to be used. I planned on sealing things to them prior each mission, so they will be filled with various stuff before each mission.

Now, I am not sure if this is what you wanted to hear, my Employe Of The Year (brain) is already asleep.
Masami Hyuuga
Konohagakure Genin, Team 9


" No! Move out of the way ... this is urgent ... thank you ... MOVE IT! "

Masami was making her way to the meeting point at her top speed - Hiron-sensei made it clean that being late would not be tolerated, especially on this occasion. And yet there she was, already being late and only starting to approach the meeting point. Taking the streets today was a mistake, but now she had to make her way through the busy, crowded streets - often finding the most narrow spots to pass through. Apologizing a lot, pushing people even more, but she had to make it in time, or to face the wrath of Hiron - something she would not like to experience. At a crossroads, she was forced to jump over a cart hauled by animals, earning some weird looks and gestures from the onlookers, even some applaus. However, she could not stop to enjoy them, otherwise Hiron will enjoy scolding her.

Luckily for her, the streets have cleaned up, and within another minute or two, she was approaching the point. And her stomach frowned when she realized that she will be the last one to arrive to the point. She did so with a sprint from all of her strength and stopped, trying to catch her breath." My ... my apologies, Hiron-sensei. I got carried away with my everyday exercises and ... I lost the track of time. I swear it will not happen, I am really sorry." she then turned to Mia and Shikaroku." I-I hope you doing great, Mia, Shikaroku. I look forward to our another mission."
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