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9 yrs ago
Current Dreams are just a reality away from memories.
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I see you like stalking too eh? Just know that while you're reading this, I'm reading all your posts from 5 months ago and silently judging your taste. Ha Ha. Or not.

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@Mr Allen J 'Course. And the burn will get worse with the intensity of the current, yes? Just making sure so we will have absolutely no misunderstanding.
@Mr Allen J
*touches chin* Hmm, sounds good I suppose. Just to clarify so we won't have any misunderstandings: so when he shoots lightning out of his hands or when he tries to taze someone with his bare hands, he will get burn, but when he charges up and runs around, he won't get burn. But when he charges up and runs around shooting lightning, he will get burn. Is this okay?
Alright, added burn when using power and staying in charged state for too long. Anything else needs adjustment?
@Naril You can write as many characters if you want - even if it's one. lol

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@RedDusk Only having to touch someone to induce lethal currents is a limit. lol

Something like getting burned from electricity, violent twitching/muscle spasms, and vision/hearing problems would be weaknesses.

Also, I changed my avatar/sig set.


Ya. You have a point. I should stop trying to coddle him.
Also, I love Transistor. It is one of the most beautiful thing the gaming world has to offer. I still keep the sound track on my phone.

@Mr Allen J Alrighty. This time, I fixed the back story, changed NEST to other still active organizations and deepened his connections with the Allegiance. Also, I added more weakness: he will need direct physical contact to induce a lethal current, he will also be weakened when charging and it takes a while to charge up. I don't mind adding more if you still feel he is too powerful.
@Mr Allen J Holy. I picked a different age. Must have mucked that up when I was transfering to the new sheet.
As for more weaknesses, how about more delay? I will add them later. In bed atm.


@Mr Allen J Alrighty, fixed.
@Mr Allen JHmm. I thought I did. Dang. I think I picked up mine from your old thread. Oops. Will fix.
@tsukune Same here, though I moved. Still, back when I was in the Free section, I got left behind a whole lot. Not by entire pages, but well, it still bugged me.
@FernStone Dang, did you sleep for a whole month or something?
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