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Reina stood with her hands balled and stuck deep into her jacket pockets. She stared at the shifting crowd ahead of her uncomfortably, glancing over at her father next to her as the man cleared his throat. He looked as incredulous as she felt.

"Wow, guess you're something of a celebrity now, Rein," he said.

The girl looked back to the crowd without replying. She had suspected that something like this might eventually happen--a sensible occurence when one associates with one of the most popular heroes in the country. She had even thought about how she should carry and present herself in front of cameras, to start building her image as a hero on the right foot.

This though... it was a little much, and a little soon. While the crowd wasn't necessarily there for her, she was part of the reason for it, and there was little doubt she'd be veritably swarmed the moment she stepped towards the building and was recognized.

Reina's father spoke again, breaking her from her thoughts.

"I'll walk with you to the door, alright?" he said, the concern in his voice apparent--at the moment, the girl wasn't doing a great job of hiding her nerves.

She shook her head. "No, it's okay." She gave her father a small smile, as reassuring as she could manage, and he nodded in response, understanding. She wanted her first public appearance as a potential hero to be as strong as she could manage; appearing to be babysat during it wouldn't help.

Reina wasn't ready for this, she thought, but before letting herself hesitate she gave her father a small wave and started to quickly make her way into the crowd and to the hero agency. Her thoughts focused on her quirk, keeping her gravitational field as close to neutral as possible--she found herself dreading the thought of slipping up and causing someone to lose their balance and injure themselves, especially now of all times.

"Excuse me," she said repeatedly as she pushed through the crowd, apologizing as her orbs made contact with people. She swallowed hard, keeping her head down as she strained to keep her gravity as consistently weak as possible.

"Ms. Mori? Ms. Reina Mori!"

As focused on her quirk as she was, she jumped slightly at being called out by name, turning her head quickly to see a middle-aged woman with a microphone being followed by a camera man.

Here we go... she thought, preparing herself to speak as confidently as she could. She could make a good first impression, she had too.

And then she realized she had turned tail and was pushing through the crowd directly away from the reporter that had recognized her.

"Ms. Mori! the reporter called again, clearly trying to catch up.

What... what the hell was wrong with her? Reina had made direct eye contact with the reporter. It was completely clear she had seen the woman and knew she was calling to her. The girl tried to stuff her hands further into her pockets, feeling trapped by the decision she had taken with no thought. She really didn't feel like facing the reporter after that, but the woman wasn't giving up, having called Reina's name two more times already.

Annoyingly persistent. Reina bit the corner of her mouth in embarrassed frustration and decided it was best to cut her losses. Fighting to keep herself from visibly shaking, she turned around to face the camera that was following her.

The girl's eyes widened as she saw there were three cameras pushing towards her now, as well as two more reporters--the first reporter's yelling had brought some extra greatly unwanted attention clearly.

Weak gravity, weak gravity, weak gravity...

Reina all but shut down as they pounced on her, a deer caught in the headlights as three competing questions came at once. It took all she had to fight the instinct to push them all away with her quirk. Why were they interested in her, of all people? Surely there were others recruited by Tumble that were more deserving of the attention of these cameras.

"Excuse me?..." she managed, having understood none of the overlapping questions through the noise of the crowd.

All three came at the same time again, causing a twinge of annoyance to replace some of the anxiety that had gripped the girl. Her eyes narrowed and she managed to look the reporters in the eyes.

"One at a time," she said, far more forcefully than she thought she could manage, even taking the reporters aback slightly--that was fine, forceful was better than pathetically meek. She eyed the first reporter who had found her, indicating she had the first question.

The first two questions were nothing much. The woman asked about the incident Reina had been caught up in a month before, and the second reporter asked for her thoughts on what Tumble was trying to accomplish with the sudden recruitment of her and the others. Reina answered them as best she could, settling down quickly as she began to force herself to get over the fact that she didn't feel like this attention was deserved. She wasn't as eloquent as she would've hoped, but she thought she at least didn't make a fool of herself. She turned to the third reporter to hear him out.

"You've been rejected by numerous high-profile hero academies in the past--how does it feel to be picked up by Tumble despite that?" he asked.

The girl stopped, glancing away from him immediately as the sting of the question hit. These people had really dug into her past. A part of a hero's job that she'd have to accept if she hoped to become one... but it felt violating.

Why do you care?

I'm nobody.

I know I shouldn't be here.

I know I'm not strong enough.

Reina bit her lip, at least raising her head but looking away from the cameras as she answered.

"I'm grateful to her for the chance. I'll work hard to try not to waste it." Professional and truthful, if a little curt. The girl had plenty more to say, but now was not the time--if there even was any appropriate time to voice her thoughts.

She wanted to be elsewhere now more than ever. With an unenthusiastic nod of farewell to the reporters, she quickly made an exit through the crowd towards the hero agency, hoping they'd leave her alone.
Sheet up for review o7
Hey Windel, sorry for disappearing like I did. I got solidly slapped in the face by life a couple times, but I should have said I'd be gone for a while.

Anyways, if this is still going, and I've still got a spot, I'd like to try hopping back in if that's alright with you.
Derpestein said
Those two people mean well but...Jesus you two. "The people bitching about having to make minor changes to their character sheets are the kind of people you should just ignore. If they can't spare five extra minutes, you can bet they won't be active during the actual RP" I hope you realise how much of a ********** ****** ***** *** [Unbelievably Censored] that makes you look, Riegal. I know you two mean well and want to make the GM feel good but, seriously? 'Bitching'?


I'm sorry you feel that way. I'll use 'complaining' next time, if that makes you happy.
VarionusNW said
Now I feel like an ass. I've been having some problems IRL, so I don't know why the hell I tried to rush this out. I see my mistakes, and will be backing out of this due to feeling like a piece of shit. If you guys want to continue this yourselves, go ahead, I'm just going to sit here and learn from my mistakes.


Don't feel bad. Everyone's overreacting. Tone and voice doesn't carry perfectly through text, and for whatever reason a few people assumed you were angry and rude when - to me, at least - it was clear you weren't.

So you didn't clarify how mages use magic, whatever. Someone brought it up, and you took the suggestion and fixed it. The people bitching about having to make minor changes to their character sheets are the kind of people you should just ignore. If they can't spare five extra minutes, you can bet they won't be active during the actual RP.

Honestly, the only thing you've done "wrong" is giving broad statements about what's wrong in general with the submitted character sheets, instead of looking at each sheet individually and telling the player what they need to change to get accepted.
Updated my first post with the finished CS here.
VitaVitaAR said
Okay, it's a bit late so I might be missing something, but it doesn't look like his spells involve actual spells. More just touching the objects. There needs to be some kind of spell there, even if he recites it in his head. It's how Western Magic(and onmyodo sort of) work.


So all I need to do is add some sort of incantation? The way his magic works beyond that is fine? That should be simple enough to add, I just need to think of something for him to say.

Oh, and can a Magi recite an incantation once and use the corresponding spell multiple times without having to re-say the incantation, or would that require a Magic Trait?
I had a hard time writing up his personality, for whatever reason, but here it is.

Name: Nathan Patel
Age: 22

Personality:
Nathan tends to seem like an aloof person who's always kind of out-of-it. This is because he's always visualizing the room he is in from every possible angle, due to his magic.
This constant focus on his surroundings means he'll often miss bits of conversation, giving others the impression that he's an airhead. He's kind to his colleagues, and is always willing to help them out.

He's also quite competitive, a result of all the time he spent with his older brother. If he had his way, he'd be the one to solve every case the agency got. Receiving praise and recognition from his colleagues and superiors is one of the things he lives for.

He strongly believes in the law, and will get violent and angry with criminals no matter their reasons for doing what they did. You commit a crime, you're considered scum in his book. He does everything he can to keep innocent people safe, but if he has to endanger lives to catch a criminal, he will if he feels it's worth it. Above all though, he will listen to a superior's orders, no matter how he may feel about them.

Abilities:
Nathan's affinity is Gravity, specializing in 'control' magic. His spell repertoire is extremely limited, as he is only capable of using two spells effectively. And even those two spells are just variations of the same thing.

Both spells involve placing 'seals' on any object. When placing a seal, Nathan decides how to change the way gravity pulls on it. Will up be down? Will it go shooting forwards? Alternatively, he can give the object it's own gravitational pull, though this requires far more magic. The more seals he places on an object, the stronger the effect.

When touching an object, he can place a seal on it instantly. As the distance between him and the object grows, however, the length of time needed to place a seal on it exponentially increases.

Finally, he can place seals and leave them dormant until he wants them to activate. This allows him to set traps and the like.

Despite only having two spells, he can hold his own in a fight by getting creative. His favorite thing to do is to place seals on himself, as he can do so quickly and without a second thought. For example, in a hand-to-hand fight, he can place a seal on his first and change it's gravitational pull to give his punches extra strength and speed. He'll also change his gravity to help him move out of the way of oncoming hits, jump higher, and survive high falls, among other things.

Weapons/Equipment:
Nathan always has plenty of coins on him that he'll place seals on to turn them into surprise projectiles. He also has a basic magazine-fed handgun.

Brief Backstory:

Nathan was born in London, England to a family full of magi, the second eldest of five children. As his father was always away due to his job, Nathan and his older brother, Isaac, were the only boys in the house. The two stuck together and spent a lot of time with each other as a result of this.

After turning 18 and graduating, Nathan joined the local police force and began to study part time at a nearby college, majoring in accounting.

During this time, Isaac developed an obsession with Yokai, and went to Japan to see them in person. Soon after, the family lost contact with him, and eventually believed him to be dead, though no body could be found.

Unable to accept that Isaac was gone, Nathan quit his job and schooling, leaving for Japan to search for him. His family was opposed to this, but he largely ignored them.

He soon found out about the existence of Fu Sonzai no Gensō, and immediately applied, as he was low on cash and the prospect of being able to use his magic to keep peace excited him.
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