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Hello,

Welcome to my very vague and, I have no doubt, hardly inspiring profile. If I were to drop you a little bit of information on myself it would be the following. I'm just past thirty, served my country for eight years in the military, and I am now working in another Federal Government branch that is less camouflage and more leaning towards Investigative work.

I have attended University, earned a degree, and travel as often as possible, especially if the destination has castles, love castles. I work hard, I play hard, and writing essentially allows me an opportunity to refocus energy away from my job and into something that keeps me sane.

I despise fancy talking know-it-all assholes and everyone who talks a good game from behind the safety of their monitor. It's the internet ladies and gentleman, you aren't tough, clever, or mysterious simply because you spend countless hours crafting thinly veiled insults to people.

If you have an RP idea, hit me up. I am interested in Nation States Roleplay, and Advanced Roleplaying. Truth be told, I'd probably try anything once, to the point I enjoy played a Professor at Hogwarts once. The poor fellow ended up getting eaten by a Dragon, it was aweful.

Want someone who will get into a roleplay and not give a damn if his character dies as long as it advances the plot? Someone who will not give two hoots if his nation gets overrun and his people enslaved as long as it was awesomely done? Someone who doesn't mind playing a bad guy that's going to lose in the end anyway? Someone who just enjoys writing for the sake of story telling?

Call me.

I am here to enjoy myself, create worlds, and basically have a place to forget the real world. If you're looking for someone like that, I'm your man.

Cheers,

Risen

Most Recent Posts

@RisenDead@ClocktowerEchos Not sure if I've done everything, but I've edited bits and added more things - in Overview, Culture, Economy/Industry, a part of the Military section, as well as added bits to each of my Heroes powers and changed two of their abilities as it were.

How are we looking now?


I hate Anime photos but thats pretty much my only beef with it now, which is not enough to mask my appreciation for the changes you've made. I'm still getting a "We're invading you all" feel from them, rather than "Oh my god, we're so tired of fighting, please leave us in peace", but that's being nit picky at this point. I am sure we can make it work!

I'm good with it if @ClockTowerEchos is happy.
@ClockTowerEchos

Posted a raid by the Dragoons on your Vanguard. Feel free to continue raiding the New Territory!.

@Lauder

I'll post something for the Orruks soon as I can! Sorry for the delay. You can also feel free to keep up the burning and pillaging.
The Empire of Rhune







Breakfast Room of the Empress

"Orruks and Beastmen, your majesty, burning in the Southern Reaches again, in the New Territory." An exhausted looking courier rider was sitting at the long table, the only other occupant being the Empress herself. A mug of water and food had been placed before him but he refused to eat until his report was complete. 'You have to admire that kind of dedication in a man.' The Empress did not say the words out loud but nodded, showing the man she was listening.

The Breakfast Room, as it was widely known, as a long room with windows all down one side that looked out over the menacing battlements of the Imperial City and towards the mountains beyond. It was tastefully decorated with fine wood panelled walls, rich carpets, and the table was made of a single slab of wood, the chairs intricately carved to show scenes of famous Imperial victories. The windows, reaching from floor to ceiling were broad and framed by purple drapes. There was no doubt that this room, like every other, was designed for however. Two cannons squatted on either side of the fireplace, muzzles aimed towards the far mountains, a stack of cannonballs for each resting in corners of the room should they be needed. The room reflected the Empress well, organized, tasteful, attractive, and ready for a fight.

"At least a dozen villages have been razed, much of the population captured and by all accounts eaten or enslaved." Huge black bags decorated the mans face just below his eyes and from the way he had walked in, the Empress could tell he had been on horseback for some time. "Field Marshal Aoyne was preparing to march south when I rode to carry her message. She has already dispatched the 13th Devonian Dragoons, and the 9th Bowridge Dragoons, to intercept, track, and harass the enemy. That is all your majesty."

"Thank you, and well done soldier." The Empress stood and the messenger instantly sprang to his feet but she waved him down to his meal. "Rest and recover soldier, you have earned it. When you are fit you can return to your unit." She snapped her fingers and a guardsman and lady-in-waiting appeared as if by magic. She pointe first to the guardsman and then lady-in-waiting. "Summon the General Staff. And a purse for our brave messenger. He is welcome to stay with unless until he is fit to travel."

The Lady-in-waiting nodded and hurried away, the guardsman pushing open the hanging drapes that closed off one end of the room. "They are assembled your majesty, and awaiting orders."

'As they should be.' She nodded her thanks to the guardsman and passed through the draped doorway into a narrow corridor that immediately offered stairs up and down, or a passage further along. These passages, known as the "Empresses Way" had been built to allow the Empress to move about the Castle to vital rooms quickly, without having to navigate the more opulent and lengthy hallways and great rooms beyond.

'Down we go.' She stepped quickly down the spiral staircase, her velvet slippers making no noise on the stone stairs. She dressed in a loose fitting pair of black pants, a purple shirt, and wearing a thing circlet of diamonds inlaid to silver on her brow. The Empresses of Rhune had never been ones for gaudy displays and she was not going to break with that fine tradition.




The New Territory - A Description

Beastmen. The diluted, disgusting, degenerate, disappointing and most of all, dastardly, of all the races to exist in the world. Their ability to appear almost at random had been an increasing problem for many generations and only intense patrols inside the Empires borders had prevented more than minor tribes managing to make their way into the homeland. This was different though. The New Territory, as it was labelled on Imperial maps, was a region along the border with the Orruks. It had been utterly obliterated by the Orruk invasion one hundred and eighty years before and had been left mostly empty as a buffer zone. But now, with the population straining at manageable levels within the Imperial borders, the Empress had decreed the New Territory available for settling once again, albeit with limited protection from Imperial Armies.

Ten of thousands had jumped at the opportunity to settle the land, land they did not have to purchase, and an exodus of humanity had left the cities and countryside of the Empire and moved south. For some twenty years they had been left in relative peace. The odd Orruk raid and Beastmen Horde, possibly even some Vermin from the under lands. Those raids had been isolated and easily contained and dealt with by the New Territory Regional Guard, also known as The Regionals. This adhoc military force was mostly volunteer and, save for some veterans, not particularly well trained.

The Regionals Commander, a bull of a man by the name of Shay Markin, has done his best to prepare the New Territory for the certain eventuality that they would be attacked. The recent destruction of villages has been dismissed by some as nothing more than "enthusiastic" actions by savages but Markin requested immediate aide from Field Marshal Aoyne, Commander of the Southern Imperial Armies. Help has arrived in the form of two Imperial Dragoon units who have made their name fighting skirmish actions against the Orruks.




The New Territory - To War!

Sergeant Algar, 2nd Company Senior NCO, of the 13th Devonian Dragoons, slowly slid his Carbine free of its holster. Around him, concealed by dense brush, a hundred or so Dragoons did the same, each man quietly checking the priming was secure. They were a grim lot, faces scarred by powder flash and blade, some missing ears, eyes, fingers, and even the odd nose. But they were fighters, soldiers who had paid for their reputation in blood and savagery. Even their horses matched the riders, armour scoured with a thousand failed cuts, skin nicked here and there, the odd ear half chopped off. None made any noise, horse nor man, for all knew that even a single whiney or spoken word might betray their presence to the Beastmen beyond.

The wind blew into their faces, the horses sniffing at the smell, a smell so strong even the far weaker senses of the human Dragoons could tell, Beastmen were close. They stank. They stank of horror, tears, blood, sweat, and shit. It was the smell that brought disgust and hatred to the forefront of every riders mind as they cradled their lethal short carbines.

Then, clear in the early morning air, a carbine shot sounded. The shooter was not aiming for the enemy but rather had been placed to alert the main force of Dragoons when the Beastmen had entered the killing ground. The Beastmen might have been warned but their scouts were dead, five of them nearby the waiting horsemen, looks of stupid surprise stamped on their faces, crossbow bolts jutting from their chests and throats. A trumpet screamed and the Dragoons charged.

They exploded from the woods less than fifty yards from the Beastmen vanguard. No fools, and certainly good fighters, the Beastmen had already began to turn towards the trumpet which had sounded from the wood on their far side. The first volley hit them from behind, sending the creatures into a panicked chaos as turned to face this new threat. No sooner had then done so than a second line of Dragoons appeared from the direction of the trumpet call and more bullets thudded home.

For a moment it was pure slaughter and pandemonium. Then a Minogor, enraged by his wounds, charged blindly through his comrades, trampling some beneath his hooves, as he drove straight towards the Sergeant.

Sergeant Algar did not panic. He moved with deliberate calm as he slid his carbine home into its leather holster and drew two pistols. He aimed one, pulled the trigger and watched the bullet hammer into the Minogors chest, slowing it down. The second bullet hit the crazed beast below the collarbone and stopped it dead in its tracks. It blinked for a moment and then slowly collapsed into the crushed crash, hooves kicking frantically for a moment and then going still.

The trumpet sounded again and the Dragoons turned their horses and vanished into woods once again. They rode hard until a line of horsemen loomed up out of the brush. The Beastmen, in hot pursuit, fast and dangerous, met a second blast of gunfire that further decimated their ranks. Then the humans were gone. Riding north to rejoin their comrades and regroup.

Beastmen could afford casualties, that much was true, but they could also feel fear and maybe, just maybe, they would not be so confident now.
@Aristo

I'm just writing up a post so I can't focus as much energy as I'd like on your question, but I also don't want you to think I don't care!

The current Empire of Rhune is bordered on all of it's current sides by mountains, so your steppes could once have been, as you suggest, a part of Rhune until you overran them. The border, as it stands, could now be where the Steppes buttress up into the mountains and the Imperial Fortresses proved to much for the Khan's armies to overcome, hence why we are now trade partners, occasionally allies, and sometimes skirmishing?

Edit: Aaaaaand posted!
@Vocab

Works for me! Let me know when you're done it and I'll look it over again. Thanks for taking the time to make the changes!
RD, yes you do have influence over the RP in my stead to a limited degree mate :P


So much imaginary and totally limited power... Must... Destroy... Peoples... Dreams...

@RisenDead Lets see... Ima go through each. I'm glad there are criticisms, though. Means I have thing to work on ^-^



What d'ya think?

EDIT: @ClocktowerEchos you too XD




I think I got it all. Much of it is semantics but if you go to war with someone, it's good for them to know that you're more than uber-cool/elite/killer of all things, and can actually be fought.

Just wanted to throw it out there that I like your faction, and I'm not trying to be a pain in the ass, I just want to make sure everyone can feel like it's kept to the same standard as theirs is. You may know, in your heart of hearts, you don't intend to play them as OP and are totally cool with losing, but others might not know that or see it that way.

Who feels like having a khaganate of Central-Asian-inspired steppe warriors and not!Chaos hardasses on their border? We could fight, or trade, or team up against the world!


Come border ze Empire of Rhune. We will kill you or trade with you any day of the week, sometimes both in the same day!

@Vocab

So... You won't like to hear this but, while these guys sound pretty freaking cool, I have some comments, though, in the end, it's up to @clocktowerechos. That said, here's my comments.

1. I'm getting "OP" all over the place in your guys, least of all the "blood turned to Ninja crystals" your Hero has.

2. I may also have missed something where Clock said it was cool to have literally "just" a war party, but I don't believe that's a thing in this RP. It's a Nationstates RP if I recall correctly.

3. "The 13th Vulpin Colonisation and Eradication Party is entirely funded by the King of Vulpin, King Izla. It recieves as much funding as required, including resources, military strength, and money. Should it be needed, Yulai may send out a message to Falreti Prime requesting more of specific items, which will be dispatched promptly, arriving within a minimum of a week after the message was received."
- If I can veto stuff, I'm vetoing this. Based solely on the fact that, given your writeup, these guys are unstoppable and basically are a re-skinned chaos without any of the dangers of being sucked into the void.

4. Lacking any "basic human connection". This RP is about endless war where you get to also write about how much it sucks, not just how your guys put boot to ass on everyone else and don't have to worry about a civilian population, etc. I am seeing nothing like that in your folks here.

5. Love the idea, they sound really cool, but they appear to have no weaknesses other than "We might get REALLY crazy and die, rather than mostly crazy." If they're fleeing their homeland and bringing young, old, culture, they want to survive, etc, I think they would be much more well rounded. A the moment they sound like an army with a love slave problem... Kinky I grant you, but missing the point of the RP.


However, as I said, I don't know if Clock is allowing me any actual "Influence" in the RP other than yhr cool little Orange band on the corner of all my posts.

Edit: Will also go through the posts and try to make sure the posts are updated. If character sheets are not done, I will remove your nation from the map by the end of the week.
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Where are you thinking of placing them? I might fall back to my idea of a not!Chaos Mongol-like people, sweeping from the northwest. I just down't know where to place them.


I believe it was decided that there would be no chaos in this RP.

Also, back home, should post today.
@RisenDead

Also expect a small raid from me in a bit


As long as you're prepared for retaliation! Bring down the thunder!
Solid post Clock. That can be a Rhunish village. I'll counter post when I'm home!
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