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Unless I have reason to look, such as a requested edit that needs to be confirmed, I rarely look at CS's more than once or twice unless I REALLY like the character... or if it's mine.

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Green, I don't know how you were as nice as you were. I bow to your superior kindness.

Now if you would be so kind as to post in Necropoli, I won't have to tear your lips off and pleasure myself with them.

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I check those things. I am a rather thorough reviewer. I would have seen it when next I checked the sheet. Which was going to be here in a little while. But the secondary post drew my attention to just that, the secondary post... rather than the edit you made in the CS.

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You couldn't just edit the post... why?

Aurora - OOC

Asuras said
Derp.

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ImportantNobody said
Maybe the thirty minutes stun requires much longer charge time and overloads the gun for a long time? Or I could just remove the option to have it last that long it if that's not good enough.

No, man. As I said, at full-charge, I am fine with it KO-ing a person for a half hour or longer. So that's totally fine. No need to remove that. But perhaps a short charge-up period to reach full-charge would be logical.

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Also, Someone other than me will need to review DQ's character. I saw it... and had to restrain myself. If I review that character, I cannot promise I would be polite about it in any way shape or form. No offense intended, DQ... just... I can't take it seriously, and that irks me a lot more than it should.

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These rings multiply the attacks dealt by the part of the body they surround. Not like, multiplying the force, the rings simply travel after the blow and strike the target in imediate succession once the blow collides.

I think that's something like from the Anime known as "Toriko". In that, the main character, Toriko, has an ability called the "Spike Punch". The ability basically is a strong punch, that hits with the force of the initial attack once, then again, then again, and so on... a multiple of times equal to what he can perform at that point on the series. Basically, delivering the same attack multiple times in quick succession to the same exact area, causing significant damage compared to a standard attack.

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Green said Beta, does your dude have body heat?

Ysolda? Yes. Exalted are basically humans that gained superpowers from an immortal celestial soul that merged with theirs. So yeah, they have body heat similar to a normal human. If you're asking about her Essence Armor or Anima, those do not put off any heat, just light.

As for the CS's that need reviewed, I shall get to work reviewing ImpNo's character sheet in a moment. I am finishing up work on a new character for a different RP.

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Decided I can do the review first.

Really, ImpNo... the only issue I could find is the duration of the Stun Ray. Standard hit knocking someone out for a half hour? That's AWFULLY potent in combat. Maybe make it similar to a stungun, but with a KO effect rather than a shocky-shocky? Where it KOs you for maybe a minute or so on a standard hit, and maybe like... an hour or two hours tops on full-blast? If you're quick, a full minute is plenty of time to capitalize. Be that tying someone up, running away, kicking them in the head a few times, etc. Or on full power, more than enough time to tie them up and get them in a van or transporter or whatever.

Seem legit?

Other than that, looks fine. Short backstory, but I can look past that pretty easily.

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LeeRoy said
You said that you didn't want to be in charge of realms, Beta, so I assumed you didn't want it yo.

I said I would be fine with reviewing characters, but NOT with GMing a realm.