Scarescrow

Divinus: The God RP, Mk. III. Finished in Record Time™!

@Kho If you died, who is god of intimacy?

Divinus: The God RP, Mk. III. Finished in Record Time™!

@BBeast
Thank you for the review, here is the response.

Adam

As a tangential issue though, a couple of us have qualms about the use of Powerlisting Wiki in the abilities section (a habit which you appear to have picked up from other players, so we don't hold that against you). The ability's blurb should be a self-contained description of the power, whereas in this case, the blurb alone fails to clearly state what the power does and its extent or limitations. While Worship Inducement is a fitting power for Adam, it could be improved by specifying how Adam can exercise this power and to what extent (bearing in mind that normal demigods can't even read minds, let alone dominate mortals to their will. While Adam's Portfolio makes him an exception, it can't be too extreme without costing Might).

I also have another power to recommend, and that is some ability which lets Adam identify a mortal's greatest desires. Of course, the list of Portfolio abilities does not have to be comprehensive, but it is something for you to consider.

Yeah, I must have admitted. The ability is quite bad when I look back. Point taken. Thankfully, I am making another ability before the review was up and hopefully have the new ability in the next draft.

We presume that you and Loki have talked about Adam's origins and already have plans for your origin story (if not, get planning). However, beyond that, we have no idea what you intend to do with Adam. We're concerned that you might disappear on us. As such, we'd like you to tell us a little bit about what you plan to do after Adam is born.

Yeah, do you remember the Ainz's appendage that you send it to some remote islands/sandbars? Yeah, it is Adam.

And with how things turn out, here is my current plan:

• Introduce love to all beings. This love, however, is not the sentient loves that we are used to. It is the drive or biological love, mating, survive, kind of that. The effect it has, hopefully, is some of the creation should not behave the way they are designed. Take an example of Phystene's plants. Her portfolio allows her to raise plants and let them die to her wills. Now, she could still do it, but some plants ( 1% of the crops) will refuse to die. And the more they grew and reproduced, the less control she has over those rebellious plants. But this doesn't apply to her only. Parvus' s insects are also the same. Basically, this introduces the chance of a being to withdrawn from the idea of dying for its creator.
• After that, I create the drive for evolution. Basically, this means that the beings that got affected will desire to be better than staying the same. So, for the plants, it will kill each other on a larger scale for nutrients and sunlight. The bugs would be more prone to devour each other than act in unison. Same for bacteria.
• After that, I create the first predator. If everyone is creating producers and no one is really planning to create the top of the food chain, I don't mind creating something that dominates the ecosystems.
• Creating gold and ruby veins
• Save up for whatever I have for the next turn, 2 turns for portfolio acquisition and a dozen fp more to make his Heaven on Earth-esque city. Maybe I would create sentient beings, maybe more of something to work forward "idolization" portfolio.

Also, the grammar is still rather shaky, with weird tense and plurals throughout. Would we be correct in guessing that English is not your first language? Despite this, your writing is typically readable, although it is possible that we (and the other players) might have to stop and clarify things with you if any parts of your posts are ambiguous. While we definitely don't have time to proofread everything for you, I can give you some specific feedback on your CS if you would like. And grammar aside, I can see that you have the ideas for writing elaborate prose.

By this point, sure. My eyes can't catch any problems but I guess that is because of my background. So sure.

Divinus: The God RP, Mk. III. Finished in Record Time™!

@BBeast@Muttonhawk@Cyclone Here it is, just throw me the hammer.

The Tongue

Adam

King not born by blood, blood by kings be proud.

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Who am I?

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Who am I?

I am the forever growing greed, unsatisfied by what I am having. I am the unchained desire, imbued with destruction but pure in nature. I am the restless soul, wander in places to search for meaning and well-being. I am the “bright future” that would never come, a lie in another sea of lies. I am cruelty. I am the World. I am the Tongue.

_{T I T L E S}

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First Demigod, Brother of Fools, Demon’s Tongue, The Shepherd

_{G E N D E R}

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Male

_{A L I G N M E N T}

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Lawful Evil

_{P O R T F O L I O}

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What is love’s capabilities? Can it moves mountains, drains seas, and endures the test of time like other things? Is it tangible and has definite value? Yet why do people flocked after it likes flies over an open honey jar? Couldn’t they realize the danger of drowning once they get too deep? Love is pure, they think. Love is good, they assume. To love is to have a cause to die for. To love is to be obsessed by the idea of sacrificing. And all Adam could ever do is giving these people a reason to die for. Gold, love, fame, and a plethora of other things are within his control. All you need to do is chase after it; grind yourself to the brink of destruction and deprivation, and give in to the “bright future“ that would come in some day.

_{A B I L I T I E S}

---

• Worshipped Inducement: A symbol. It has always been a symbol. It will always be a symbol. More than anything, the bright future is always the best symbols there are in existence. The desire of perfection, of knowledge, of fame, of power, of love, all resides in that “bright future.” As long as the people are still looking forward to the future, reaching for that forever growing image of tomorrow, then they are looking forward to him. They worshipped Adam, for he represented that bright future, the unending climb that would someday be fruitful. And the more they grind their gears for that climb, the more they believe in him.
  
  But still, there is a limitation to this, mainly in obsession itself. Most fears for their lives and scurried away at the first hint of dangers. Only a few, a minority, one in a thousand would stay behind to witness the truth. And only a thousand of that thousandth would be obsessive enough to throw their lives for Adam. As such, Adam’s disciples are valuable things, sometimes even outweigh the artifacts that he had created for them.

---

_Appearance

See me as if you see your god.
Love me as you love your family.
Obsess over me as you would over richness.
And above all, be prideful for being a servant of mine.

_{P E R S O N A L I T Y}

---

It is hard to define one being with one word, seeing how a being, even the simplest one, could possess a multitude of facets that a single word is not enough to describe. However when it came to Adam, the First Spawn of Anzillu, one could only feel a single thing when staring in his appearance. Pride. It would have dwarfed the sun in size and brightness if it were to materialize. However, he treated everyone equally, both gods and mortals. It is unknown if he degrades everything around to be a lesser of himself, but he certainly thinks himself to be the epitome on this plane of existence.

But pride alone does not provide the whole picture of Adam. If anything, it is just the backdrop for other characteristics of him to shine. Agony, confuse, anger, and joy he had tasted. Regret and self-doubt he had experienced. He worked with a calculated mind that is often obstructed by emotions and sway with feelings for others. Unlike his father, who appeared to be apathy toward all things, Adam is too empathetic toward those he counted as his people. He treated fairly to his demon kinds, those that are unable to feel and understand his caring. He treated fairly to the mortals, always giving them a chance between turning into his disciples or stand with pride as his enemies. Adam is benevolent, and he loves all, just as much as he loves himself.

Though there is one thing to take note of, maybe it was because of his physiology, flesh that came into existence by the urge to devour, Adam also has in him this hunger. However, unlike the Abhorrent, who is lustful for devour realities, Adam lusts to taste the souls. But not every soul would fit his bills. After all, he doesn't want to eat shit. Only the most virtuous and saintly are whom Adam goes after. In case there are none that would fit his bill, Adam wouldn't mind raising some for his own. What does other usually said about their own stock? It is always juicier than others.

_{M U S I C P I E C E}

---

_{C H A N T}

Oh heed our prayer the Lord up high, who throne above the star yet walk among the feebles, Son of Anzulli, the first being, the Shepherd, the Tongue, and eldest brother of many to come, .
Heed our call as your humble servants ask for guidance.

_{C O D E W O R D}

---

Entropic and Entropic.

Scare's CS

N'Chaera

N’Chaera

Without realities, possibilities are shallow jokes. Without possibilities, realities are trees without stems.

_{T I T L E S}

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Streak of Lights in a Starry Night

_{G E N D E R}

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Female

_{A L I G N M E N T}

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Lawful Good

_{S P H E R E}

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Noc - The Concerto at Night, Home of Falling Stars

TYPE: Celestial
LOCATION: Above Galbar, directly beneath the Barrier
DESCRIPTION:
As big as Galbar itself and less than atom thick, Noc, Home of Falling Stars, only revealed itself after the sun has set beneath the horizon. If the Sky of Pyres manifested itself as the stars, and the Great Darkness as the void between them, then Noc is home of the meteorites that come crashing against Galbar’s atmosphere, leaving a trail of dust and ice behind it. Sometimes, over hundred generations or more, a light will come from Noc, outshined Aelios over a brief period of time before falling into the Great Darkness’ grasp.

But what is Noc? For how could a place, as big as Galbar but less than an atom thick, could produce the light of what is called as “supernova” in our world’s term? And in regards to physics and chemistry, what is the possibility of an area with a density less than an atom per cubic kilometer possessed an abundant number of meteorites to throw into Galbar’s atmosphere. What is Math, the highest symbol of order, means in a place that lack of reason? A place that devoid gravity, yet all things just fall toward Galbar, as if there were some mysterious angel pushing the objects. A place that lacks directions, up is just as well as down and left is nothing more than a term that Vakk — with his overly complicated nature — set up as right.

And yet, here is where N’Chaera called home. To a certain degree, her home is sweet. Freshly knitted webs being replaced on the daily basis, connecting the alternate realities to Galbar to prevent them from drifting into the void or be spoiled. Webs for floors. Webs for ceilings. In a sense, Noc is just a nest of a spider. Webs spanned where N’Chaera eight fiery eyes laid upon, dotted with various realities that she secured. But as a resting place for a god, her houses lacked of the expected amenities. For as far as the eyes could see (which is quite far, considering there are almost no singularities to obstruct the views) there aren’t no cellars of wine, no fountains made of a single slab of marble or exquisite faunas and floras. All that belong to her is a normal size wardrobe and a rusty broken mirror in a corner.

_{P O R T F O L I O}

---

Possibilities. Even the term in itself bear the uncertainty. Would it happen? Would it not? If it happens, what next? If it doesn’t, what follows? The future is never sealed or set in stone for a specific thing to happen, thus the creation of possibility. The idea that something might happen or it might not promise an unprecedented amount of freedom in which reality lacks. And yet, without reality, possibilities are flames without fuel. To understand possibilities, one must first understand the reality oneself inhabited to only — if the chances provided — free from the shackle of “now” and lost in the sea of “what if.”
_{A B I L I T I E S}

---

• Possibilities Embodiment: N’Chaera is the embodiment of Galba’s possible future results and consequences that stemmed from the Architecture opening the Rift and allowing other forces, godly or not, to intervene. As such, if mortal beings were to see at N’Chaera’s true form, what they will see are themselves in “alternate realities,” making alternative decisions. This may also applied to other fellows gods, but at the expense of herself.
• Alternate Future Display: If she so wished, N’Chaera could display alternate realities where different actions and solutions had been taken. But do note, she does not foreseeing. And sometimes, there are things whose futures are unwritten.

---

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_Appearance

Glowing eyes to scare the child. Two set of hands, of men or monsters?. Four pairs of legs, the major fear. A feminine body, the Lilith’s kin. Truly, the monster that appear before the mirror is a hideous one.
_{P E R S O N A L I T Y}

---

Comparing to other goods, N’Chaera’s personality is quite mellow. She carries no intentions to baffle her peers with ridiculous riddles to solve. She doesn’t intend being nice at first before revealing herself to having some kind of mental problem. No, she doesn’t join war for the sake of joining war and killing people although the thoughts do make her to chuckle. She doesn’t hate the entropic natures in some of her peers, although it does get on her nerves sometimes. Overall, she is just a very mellow god who enjoys peace.

Every day, if there is nothing to be done and all the holes had been fixed, she would enjoy a cup of tea with some snacks beside her. And then, she would began to knit some clothes, using the silk she created. Very rarely, when she is in the mood, the goddess would bring the canvas that she made and tries to draw a scene to ease her trouble mind. And while all these activities made N’Chaera to be a person of her own, she does enjoy good companies over an afternoon break.

But of course, a mellow personality comes with its own problem. Unlike others, who might not consider the aftermath of using their tongue to stab other, N’Chaera is more careful with her words. The thing sounded nice until she decided to change the subject from everything that cause discord. And as you and I know, that is not how a problem being solve. Sweeping the trash and piling it under the rug solve nothing but letting the problem to become more complex. She knows the heart of the problem lies within herself, and did nothing. Only when the situation is dire, and entropy is the supreme law of the land does N’Chaera decided to do something. And that, her avoidance in time of challenges, is the most significant flaw that sometimes outshined N’Chaera best characteristics.

_{M U S I C P I E C E}

---

_{C H A N T}

Oh, Queen of Arachnid,
Overseer of Possibilities,
Weaver of Celestials,
Heed your faithful servant’s prayer…

_{C O D E W O R D}

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The code of this sheet is funded and provided by the kind-hearted Vec, all copyrights infringement belong to him/her and who she/he stolen from.

The Tongue

Adam

King not born by blood, blood by kings be proud.

---

Who am I?

---

Who am I?

I am the forever growing greed, unsatisfied by what I am having. I am the unchained desire, imbued with destruction but pure in nature. I am the restless soul, wander in places to search for meaning and well-being. I am the “bright future” that would never come, a lie in another sea of lies. I am cruelty. I am the World. I am the Tongue.

_{T I T L E S}

---

First Demigod, Brother of Fools, Demon’s Tongue, The Shepherd

_{G E N D E R}

---

Male

_{A L I G N M E N T}

---

Lawful Evil

_{P O R T F O L I O}

---

What is love’s capabilities? Can it moves mountains, drains seas, and endures the test of time like other things? Is it tangible and has definite value? Yet why do people flocked after it likes flies over an open honey jar? Couldn’t they realize the danger of drowning once they get too deep? Love is pure, they think. Love is good, they assume. To love is to have a cause to die for. To love is to be obsessed by the idea of sacrificing. And all Adam could ever do is giving these people a reason to die for. Gold, love, fame, and a plethora of other things are within his control. All you need to do is chase after it; grind yourself to the brink of destruction and deprivation, and give in to the “bright future“ that would come in some day.

_{A B I L I T I E S}

---

• Worshipped Inducement: A symbol. It has always been a symbol. It will always be a symbol. More than anything, the bright future is always the best symbols there are in existence. The desire of perfection, of knowledge, of fame, of power, of love, all resides in that “bright future.” As long as the people are still looking forward to the future, reaching for that forever growing image of tomorrow, then they are looking forward to him. They worshipped Adam, for he represented that bright future, the unending climb that would someday be fruitful. And the more they grind their gears for that climb, the more they believe in him.
  
  But still, there is a limitation to this, mainly in obsession itself. Most fears for their lives and scurried away at the first hint of dangers. Only a few, a minority, one in a thousand would stay behind to witness the truth. And only a thousand of that thousandth would be obsessive enough to throw their lives for Adam. As such, Adam’s disciples are valuable things, sometimes even outweigh the artifacts that he had created for them.

---

_Appearance

See me as if you see your god.
Love me as you love your family.
Obsess over me as you would over richness.
And above all, be prideful for being a servant of mine.

_{P E R S O N A L I T Y}

---

It is hard to define one being with one word, seeing how a being, even the simplest one, could possess a multitude of facets that a single word is not enough to describe. However when it came to Adam, the First Spawn of Anzillu, one could only feel a single thing when staring in his appearance. Pride. It would have dwarfed the sun in size and brightness if it were to materialize. However, he treated everyone equally, both gods and mortals. It is unknown if he degrades everything around to be a lesser of himself, but he certainly thinks himself to be the epitome on this plane of existence.

But pride alone does not provide the whole picture of Adam. If anything, it is just the backdrop for other characteristics of him to shine. Agony, confuse, anger, and joy he had tasted. Regret and self-doubt he had experienced. He worked with a calculated mind that is often obstructed by emotions and sway with feelings for others. Unlike his father, who appeared to be apathy toward all things, Adam is too empathetic toward those he counted as his people. He treated fairly to his demon kinds, those that are unable to feel and understand his caring. He treated fairly to the mortals, always giving them a chance between turning into his disciples or stand with pride as his enemies. Adam is benevolent, and he loves all, just as much as he loves himself.

Though there is one thing to take note of, maybe it was because of his physiology, flesh that came into existence by the urge to devour, Adam also has in him this hunger. However, unlike the Abhorrent, who is lustful for devour realities, Adam lusts to taste the souls. But not every soul would fit his bills. After all, he doesn't want to eat shit. Only the most virtuous and saintly are whom Adam goes after. In case there are none that would fit his bill, Adam wouldn't mind raising some for his own. What does other usually said about their own stock? It is always juicier than others.

_{M U S I C P I E C E}

---

_{C H A N T}

Oh heed our prayer the Lord up high, who throne above the star yet walk among the feebles, Son of Anzulli, the first being, the Shepherd, the Tongue, and eldest brother of many to come, .
Heed our call as your humble servants ask for guidance.

_{C O D E W O R D}

---

Entropic and Entropic.

Divinus: The God RP, Mk. III. Finished in Record Time™!

@Cyclone
Respond

Hider

It's clear that you've made substantial effort here, as is attested by the emotion and detail. I really do appreciate that, but I'll be blunt and say that there are still major issues with the sheet itself and with the design that need to be addressed.

I'll start off with the grammar. As a way to jokingly lighten the mood of an otherwise serious review whilst also trying to help by pointing out the errors I see, I usually have a 'mandatory nitpicking' line that I put in these reviews. But in your sheet, there are just too many grammatical mistakes to list. Normally I can just brush off typos or grammatical mistakes (I'd be a hypocrite not to; I hate editing and proofreading my own stuff, and I'm sure that sometimes it shows) but in the case of your sheet there are so many that it became distracting. This is troubling because it is indicative of what we might expect from your IC posts, and I'm sure you're aware that this RP is going in the Advanced Section. RPGuild's own description of the section spares me the words, "Must make a dedicated effort to minimize typographical errors and to use good grammar."

Now, if you didn't proofread, then obviously doing so would be a start. If it's still a struggle, there are programs like Grammarly that some people have had great success with. Double Capybara in particular has stated that Grammarly was a great help; maybe Capy can tell you about it on the Discord.

No debate here. Must admit, grammar was never my strong point.

That aside, I'll now move on to the Portfolio. A god of Time/Possibilities/Fate is extremely difficult to pull off. In Divinus we had one guy make a god called Vowzra that was a god of Time that saw the future, but this only worked because Vowzra saw many possible futures, was incredibly cryptic, and the guy who wrote Vowzra was the GM. As you have it, Possibilities seems incredibly vague and I truly don't think you'll be able to make it work. If You have ideas then by all means we GMs will hear them and provide more feedback, but for now I would strongly suggest changing your Portfolio to something more manageable and concrete like Luck or Probability.

Actually, I was originally planning for her to go after for Imagination. But GoldenEagle took dream. And yes, I am planning for her to go after luck right now. So yeah, point taken.

This leads us into the Sphere. I clearly see the imagery between a spider's webs, N'Chaera's arachnid appearance, and 'threads' of Fate or possibility. The metaphor there is nice, but this falls apart in terms of practicality when you say that it's less than an atom thick; you can elaborate more upon your intent by that phrase, but it seems like it may as well not even exist. And for effects it's the source of meteorites and supernovae--what? Why? How? I don't even see how such things connect at all to Possibilities, a spiderweb, or N'Chaera. One of my fellow GMs pointed out that you spent more time describing what Noc isn't rather than what it actually is; perhaps that's the problem. Maybe you need to start with a more concrete idea as your foundation for a Sphere, and then build up a god and Portfolio from there.

I hope you don't take this personally or feel that I'm unfairly harping on you. All three of us GMs would be more than willing to continue working with you or to give you further feedback on new ideas or any changes, but for now the sheet has to be rejected.

Yeah, actually, the word choice in there is all intentional. The realm itself is model after quarks and gluons, particles that shouldn’t be even 1/10th of an atom, hence the “less than an atom thick.” And yes, I do intention for Noc to be almost unrealistic for its meddling with the alternate universes. I my mind, alternate universe are like particlesthat popping in and out of existence, exist for a few nano of a second before smashed by another antiparticle. Thus, in this way, the Galbar universe is at least equivalence in term of physics and chemistry. But because it is based on gluons and quarks, something that are still very limited in understanding, I found it is much easier to define Noc as what it is not rather than what it is.

Next in line, supernova. Now, don’t quote me on this, if anything blame my professor, but I guess in some extreme case, where a particle would popped out into existence near an extremely large black hole, the gravitational attraction of the black hole would be strong enough to pull the antiparticle away from the particle, thus, I guess, in someway, violate the law. But hey, it ain’t fantasy if you can’t interpret the mechanic. And from here is where I pull my bullshitery. Noc, in a way, act as a mean to stop these alternate realities from their miniscule lifespan. And when these particles don’t get destroy, they released energy. Due to itself being a world yet pounded into something so small, the energy is mainly released in light, hence the supernova. Meteorites, on the other hand, are also alternate realities. But what stop them from being a supernova is because of the whole lotta bullshitery that I am working on. But yeah, I can understand how it cause confusion.

Overall, point taken.

Divinus: The Divine RP, Mk. III

N'Chaera

N’Chaera

Without realities, possibilities are shallow jokes. Without possibilities, realities are trees without stems.

_{T I T L E S}

---

Streak of Lights in a Starry Night

_{G E N D E R}

---

Female

_{A L I G N M E N T}

---

Lawful Good

_{S P H E R E}

---

Noc - The Concerto at Night, Home of Falling Stars

TYPE: Celestial
LOCATION: Above Galbar, directly beneath the Barrier
DESCRIPTION:
As big as Galbar itself and less than atom thick, Noc, Home of Falling Stars, only revealed itself after the sun has set beneath the horizon. If the Sky of Pyres manifested itself as the stars, and the Great Darkness as the void between them, then Noc is home of the meteorites that come crashing against Galbar’s atmosphere, leaving a trail of dust and ice behind it. Sometimes, over hundred generations or more, a light will come from Noc, outshined Aelios over a brief period of time before falling into the Great Darkness’ grasp.
But what is Noc? For how could a place, as big as Galbar but less than an atom thick, could produce the light of what is called as “supernova” in our world’s term? And in regards to physics and chemistry, what is the possibility of an area with a density less than an atom per cubic kilometer possessed an abundant number of meteorites to throw into Galbar’s atmosphere. What is Math, the highest symbol of order, means in a place that lack of reason? A place that devoid gravity, yet all things just fall toward Galbar, as if there were some mysterious angel pushing the objects. A place that lacks directions, up is just as well as down and left is nothing more than a term that Vakk — with his overly complicated nature — set up as right.
And yet, here is where N’Chaera called home. To a certain degree, her home is sweet. Freshly knitted webs being replaced on the daily basis, connecting the alternate realities to Galbar to prevent them from drifting into the void or be spoiled. Webs for floors. Webs for ceilings. Noc, in some morbid and jaws dropping senses, is a nest of a spider. Webs spanned where N’Chaera eight fiery eyes laid upon, dotted with various realities that she secured. But as a resting place for a god, her houses lacked of the expected amenities. For as far as the eyes could see (which is quite far, considering there are almost no singularities to obstruct the views) there aren’t no cellars of wine, no fountains made of a single slab of marble or exquisite faunas and floras. All that belong to her is a normal size wardrobe and a rusty broken mirror in a corner.

_{P O R T F O L I O}

---

Possibilities. Even the term in itself bear the uncertainty. Would it happen? Would it not? If it happens, what next? If it doesn’t, what follows? The future is never sealed or set in stone for a specific thing to happen, thus the creation of possibility. The idea that something might happen or it might not promise an unprecedented amount of freedom in which reality lacks. And yet, without reality, possibilities are flames without fuel. To understand possibilities, one must first understand the reality oneself inhabited to only — if the chances provided — free from the shackle of “now” and lost in the sea of “what if.”
_{A B I L I T I E S}

---

• Possibilities Embodiment: N’Chaera is the embodiment of Galba’s possible future results and consequences that stemmed from the Architecture opening the Rift and allowing other forces, godly or not, to intervene. As such, if mortal beings were to see at N’Chaera’s true form, what they will see are themselves in “alternate realities,” making alternative decisions. This may also applied to other fellows gods, but at the expense of herself.
• Alternate Future Display: If she so wished, N’Chaera could display alternate realities where different actions and solutions had been taken. But do note, she does not foreseeing. And sometimes, there are things whose futures are unwritten.

---

---

_Appearance

And what do I see in that fracture mirror over there? “A monster,” you said? And yes, I comply to your judgement. “A hideous one, if you ever asked me,” I said in response before wiping the tears. Glowing eyes to scare the child. Two set of hands, of men or monsters?. Four pairs of legs, the major fear. A feminine body, the Lilith’s kin.

_{P E R S O N A L I T Y}

---

Comparing to other goods, N’Chaera’s personality is quite mellow. And if you have to pick a person that resemble her the most, a housewife would probably do the trick. She carries no intetions to baffle her peers with ridiculous riddles to solve. She doesn’t intend being nice at first before revealing herself to having some kind of mental problem. No, she doesn’t join war for the sake of joining war and killing people although the thoughts do make her to chuckle. She doesn’t hate the entropy in the system, although it does get on her nerves. Overall, she is just a very mellow god who enjoys peace.

Every day, if there is nothing to be done and all the holes had been fixed, she would enjoy a cup of tea with some snacks beside her. And then, she would began to knit some clothes, using the silk she created. Very rarely, when she is in the mood, the goddess would bring the canvas that she made and tries to draw a scene to ease her trouble mind. And while all these activities made N’Chaera to be a person of her own, she does enjoy good companies over an afternoon break.

But of course, a mellow personality comes with its own problem. Unlike others, who might not consider the aftermath of using their tongue to stab other, N’Chaera is more careful with her words. The thing sounded nice until she decided to change the subject from everything that cause discord. And as you and I know, that is not how a problem being solve. Sweeping the trash and piling it under the rug solve nothing but letting the problem to become more complex. She knows the heart of the problem lies within herself, and did nothing. Only when the situation is dire, and entropy is the supreme law of the land does N’Chaera decided to do something. And that, her avoidance in time of challenges, is the most significant flaw that sometimes outshined N’Chaera best characteristics.

_{M U S I C P I E C E}

---

_{C H A N T}

Oh, Queen of Arachnid
Overseer of Possibilities,
Weaver of Celestials,
Heed your faithful servant’s prayer…

_{C O D E W O R D}

---

The code of this sheet is funded and provided by the kind-hearted Vec, all copyrights infringement belong to him/her and who she/he stolen from.

I'm done. Now, I can sleep for 2 hours.

Vivid Recollections Season 2: Into The False Light [COMPLETE]

@Ruler Inc Yes, I was just about to ask. So, how do I enter the scene?

Vivid Recollections Season 2: Into The False Light [COMPLETE]

@Ruler Inc So, the more people that believe my power is strong, the stronger my power become?

Vivid Recollections Season 2: Into The False Light [COMPLETE]

@Ruler IncYes, thank you.