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Awesome.

Character posted.

As a side note, I am reworking the characters history.

This won't effect his abilities at all.... I'm just excited to be rewriting it and wanted to tell someone.
I'd be happy to clarify.

He is spinning on the ball of his left foot, which has been his lead foot the whole time. My apologies for not clarifying. Since the staff is in his left hand I pictured him sweeping the staff behind him as he spun. The staff remains vertical during the entire movement and still fairly close to his body, the end not far away from his left foot.

The staff isn't actually a block against the weapon, Ryuku's spin removed him from that danger. The purpose of the staff is to be placed there as a barrier, so that she just can't spin and swipe the blade at him.

Since you didn't clarify which side of her body the stab came from I wasn't exactly which way to spin.

The end result of his movement would be spinning out of the way while setting up a barrier to her blade, and striking out at the side of her head from her right and behind.

Hopefully that clears things up.
Cursing could have very well been something else The First Mate enjoyed nearly as much as booze, the sea, women and treasure. He hadn't slowed down in the slightest and even when there was no-one to curse at he did not stop, he merely invented words to add to his already colorful repertoire of insults. To him, it was merely another form of motivation.

“... and another thing you whoresons! I'll take me widdlin' knife and carve your back-side so it's as ugly as your front-side. AND I DON'T EVEN GOT A WIDDLIN' KNIFE!!!” He took the extra effort to reach down for a handful of sand and throw it in no particular direction.

It was when he turned to yell at the ship that he was met with a very large abundance of water. He had only the time to blink for the warm salty water dropped him to his rear and soak him once again from head to toe. It did manage something else as well, it got him to shut up.

He sat there a moment, extremely confused, when he heard a womens voice from near the ship. He looked up, water dripping from his hair and face. He took a moment to look around and then point to himself, though he said nothing, merely sat there in his own wetness, sand clinging to him everywhere. Everywhere!



Lich's, in D&D terms, can still be defeated even killed temporarily. They simply return to where ever their phylactery is. So ya know, cutting him in-half or cleaving the head off could still kill him...at least for the purposes of the tournament.
Booze. The sea. Treasure. Women. These were all things that The First Mate had come to love, though not necessarily in that order. They were things he was constantly chasing, searching before, or traveling on. Earlier he had been in the company of all four, and what a grand celebration it had been. At least, he was fairly sure it had been grand, he didn't exactly remember the details, though he had woken up with two lasses on each arm in the large galley that he had procured earlier in the weak.

The unfortunate part had been not that he woke up, but how he had woken up. Wood creaking and groaning, the ship tossing and turning and the sharp pain of his face smacking the floor or... had it been the ceiling? He couldn't remember. What he did remember was the feeling of the warm water as the ship broke around him. He hadn't been sure exactly what happened, only that they had stopped moving.



The First Mate had done his best to get topside, but a broken mast blocked his exit. Cursing like pirate, not a bloody sailor, he reached out his will to the water he stood knee deep in. With an effort of will he used the water to shatter the starboard side of the ship, light poured in and he let out a cry of pain. Hangovers were a bitch.

He dropped from the hole a moment later, landing in knee deep water. He belted on the weapons he had been carrying and stood standing there for a moment in nothing but his britches and a sword-belt, left hand covering his eyes as he gazed around, trying to make sense out of all of this confusion.

“Which one of ye bloody idiots ran'er aground!?” He screamed, stomping in the water for extra effect as he headed towards dry land so that he could properly assess the damage. “Which one of ye sank the... the...” He looked to the side of the ship where its name was clearly visible. Yet, he couldn't read it, though he knew the second half of the named started with a P.

“Sunk... the P ship!?” Clearly it hadn't registered to The First Mate that much of his crew was likely dead, or were running off behind. That, or he simply didn't care to notice as he waved his arms about and continue to scream incoherent swear-words at any and everything.
@yoshua171

I responded. Please let me know if anything needs clarification.

Ryuku had not expected teleportation, he had been taught that it was a dangerous technique and so it was not one he had ever bothered to learn. Clearly his opponent had a understanding of her inner energies that may even surpass his own. The thrill of facing such an opponent sent shivers through Ryuku's body. Loose or win, he would give it everything he had.

As a user of Qi, a fairly adept one at that, he could sense the energy charged kunai when they had passed and so while he had no expected her to simply appear attacking, he was not caught unable to defend himself when he sensed the switch in energy, he moved as quickly as he possibly could.

The whole of his staff would sweep behind him as he pivoted on the ball of his left foot. He maintained perfect balance during his rotation, which would have been enough on its own to carry him out of the blades path. But for Ryuku, every action served a purpose, each step in this dance was merely one of many, of a greater whole.

His sweeping staff was not an attack, though with how close they were to one another it would take minimal effort to extend his left arm slightly and attempt to strike his opponent. Rather it was an obstacle, remaining between him and the Wakizashi should the stab be turned into an attempt to slice at him as he turned. His attack came about with the spin, his right hand striking out in a palm strike that was aimed at the right side of the girls head, specifically at her temple, one well aimed strike could, in theory, remove her from the fight.

It was all timed with perfection, the block with the staff, the strike with his right hand and the placement of his right foot back on the ground after the spin to lend the power to the technique that he needed. His gathering of Qi slowed with his shift from defense to offensive, but it was still there, Qi pooling for the use in one of his many techniques when he deemed necessary.
Sounds good to me.
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