@Raddum
Yeah, I figured something like that happened. I'll still be good to post once things're active again, despite having my own role-play to run on the site now. My morale's been getting very bad lately due to my PC progressively making me lose more work that I need to recover, and the role-play I'm running is the only thing really keeping my mind state good enough to have even bothered sticking with this site.
Basically, that's my solution to the Cecil/Freya issue. I'll post up a reply with Cecil once it's taken care of.
The only other major topic of discussion was whether or not I'd reveal Mateus screwing with Cosmos' summoning directly or not (a.k.a. whether or not you think he should suggest it to Chaos as part of the IC, since I imagine Chaos and the others might find it confusing if the good guys all get messed around without an explanation and Mateus could also use this to build favour with the villains/Chaos).
Yeah, I figured something like that happened. I'll still be good to post once things're active again, despite having my own role-play to run on the site now. My morale's been getting very bad lately due to my PC progressively making me lose more work that I need to recover, and the role-play I'm running is the only thing really keeping my mind state good enough to have even bothered sticking with this site.
I've omitted Cecil's mention of the specific name of his world (a.k.a. Earth), in order to avoid killing the conversation before anything you said could happen. I'm thinking it makes sense that he's not quite as thorough about the details as I am, so it makes sense if he takes an extra post or two to think about saying it in comparison to me.
On your end, I think you need to write her response in a way that involves her only responding to his entire explanation after he's finished mentioning the Dragoon part as well. I actually did write his response pointing out that he only stopped for a brief moment between sentences to think about how to word himself, but I've taken the liberty of adding an extra line to emphasize that she wouldn't have had enough time to interrupt him.
This should get us back on track.
Basically, that's my solution to the Cecil/Freya issue. I'll post up a reply with Cecil once it's taken care of.
The only other major topic of discussion was whether or not I'd reveal Mateus screwing with Cosmos' summoning directly or not (a.k.a. whether or not you think he should suggest it to Chaos as part of the IC, since I imagine Chaos and the others might find it confusing if the good guys all get messed around without an explanation and Mateus could also use this to build favour with the villains/Chaos).