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7 yrs ago
Current Been practicing drawing for a few months now. Biggest tip I can give so far is copy, copy, copy. It really helps you learn the basics in a very hands on way,
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7 yrs ago
Finally caught up on Rick and Morty. Pretty good shit. It's not every day a cartoon reminds me of my existential crisis.
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7 yrs ago
The Boarder Patrol in Vermont has more important matters than illegal Mexicans. They have to stop the White Walkers.
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7 yrs ago
Unborn babies are essentially mech pilots, right?
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7 yrs ago
You know what's worse then radio Country Music? Country Music Radio hosts.

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@Skepic That looks a hell of a lot better. I imagine some tensions coming in with Tori's falcon wings those...


Indeed, this will be good!


Okay, so this CS is pretty much done. I'll probably flush out the bio a lot more when I get the chance later tonight, but it's pretty much done.
@skepic
You make a valid point with the counter-WMD thing. I'm still leery, but you make a good argument.

The smokescreen being turned into a non-white phosphorus blanket smokescreen is much better, perhaps a passive mist that she can ramp up when she wishes would be fine.

Grenade to be removed entirely. I reckon with a bit more finalizing on the actual specifics of the main ability, this can work much better. I assume she's an emitter class?


Yep, the worst the smoke will do is give you a cough, cause... ya know, smoke and all. xD But seriously, its a passive ability. And yeah, she's an emitter. I'll get everything cleaned up probably tonight, if not, tomorrow.
Please do not be scared by the wall of text, I mean well.

@Dannyrulx
Alright, alright, I'm willing to work with toning it down a notch. However, I do take some issue with a few points you've made. However, I didn't see any mention in the first post about PMing you about quirks or anything for that matter.

First and foremost is the WMD argument. In a world filled with people who could have powers ranging from animal like mutations to literally teleportation themselves in a flash, why is this an issue? It just strikes me as strange that'd you'd specifically mention its WMD status. It's not like she can just create nuclear weapons or something. I think that the white phosphorous power can be equally terrifying and balanced ability if we discuss it. Simply writing it off due to the fact that its "illegal" to use in our reality/modern day times seems a little unfair.

Secondly, I agree that the grenade point is a little much. I sort of through it in there last minute before I had to briefly go. I'm more than happy to remove that entirely from the list of the capabilities of her quirk. As for the other two, I think I'd be fine with tweaking the second on to be a pure smokescreen type ability, completely passive instead of harmful.

Okay, so it wasn't the wall I was expecting, what am I, a presidential candidate or something? (I'll see myself out)

Will use for now then. Thanks!
Okay, I'll admit.... you might have peaked my interest.... CS coming soon.

*Begins to sweat upon realizing there is no CS*

So uh.... Ehem.... for some individuals that may or may not be new... uhh... mind sending a template my way?
rushed post was rushed, but I kept to my word for once. Posted
Krauss lagged purposefully behind, shaking his head. It would be any wonder in his mind, if they all made it out of this alive. The sound of Edward tumbling over himself through a brush line caused Krauss to refocus on the situation at hand. Before them was the mouth of a cave and in front of that..... what?

He blinked.

What. The. Fuck.

A man, a man that Krauss swears was never on the boat, dressed in, let's say, a rather flashy outfit, posed with a smile before the group. He claimed to be a magician, and looked as if he was about to give a performance, when he was suddnely grabbed and dragged into the back of the cave.

With that, Krauss through up his hands, and began to walk back the beach. "Well I don't know about you guys, but I think the sailors put something in our drinks and cause I'm seeing things. Either way, I'm not sticking around to figure out whether this is all real or not, so in the event that I'm wrong and this is my reality, it'd be best for me to warm up the engines." With that, Krauss, for a lack of a better phrase, got the fuck out of there. Making his way back to the beach, Krauss ran up to the captain.

"Well sir, we may have a situation on our hands, and its just as crazy as you think this will sound. So, I'm just gonna summarize, Edward, that reporter, stumbled literally upon a cave where a man dressed as a magician proclaimed his show before being suddenly dragged into said cave by an unseen force. With that, I'm gonna go get the plane running in case we need to get off this beach fast."
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