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Shall I pluck you a Lion's Tooth
As it strives towards the sun

Shall I count the circumference of a Day's Eye
And tell you there is twenty-one

Shall I gather the glory of morning
And fill a room with it's scent

Shall I wear a crown of mouse ear
In prayer that you won't forget

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Do not Fear, Spirit is Here!

Or something like that.
Lol, sounds like something someone might say to him.

'Wait - your name is Argent? I thought it was Agent, like Secret Agent Roan...'
Welcome back Silver! Yay!

Yeah, the old one closed because Phantom realied he'd made some serious mistakes in his plotline, information availability and rules for the characters - such as all of them having to have tragic backstories, which doesn't particularly lend towards team players.

We'll see what Phantom thinks of the idea for the posting order, but I don't particularly have a problem with it. It might be a bit difficult keeping track of whether the new round has started or not though.

I'll have a read through Tamn and see what you mean by her semblance and fighting style.

Edit: I'm not seeing a problem with the fighting style and semblance combination, as it seems to me that she'd use the second form of movement (the roller blading thing) to move very quickly towards and around her opponent, hitting them hard and then moving out of the way. Somewhat like a mix between Ruby and Weiss's fighting style, if you need an example.

Phantom's asleep right now anyway though, so it wouldn't be until sometime tomorrow that we'd be able to sit down and discuss Tamn even if you did get her submitted tonight. So don't stress and rush her through.
They've been added
Coolies, we're just trying to sort out bbcoding at the moment. It's not liking us lol

Edit: Done. He's attached to the CLaReT hider.
Okay Mad, let me know when you've updated his info and I'll add him to CLRT's team list.
@Madninja324

Okay Mad, just a few things to tweak.

First, can you specify how his aura is supposed to be unusual? Is it supposed to be unusually large? The sentence seems a bit unfinished on the character sheet.

Edit: Liking the fact that you pointed out how he has bad control with unusually large reserves.

With his fighting style, he seems to be very heavily based on a paladin type of character. With this in mind, we have a few suggestions.

For Michael, his sword, is to have it turn into a handcannon rather than an smg due to your paladin motif. A paladin is based more on slow but high damage rather than fast but low damage, so a shotgun or handcannon would fit better with this theme. Also, does he dual wield Michael and Raphael when they are both in gun form?

Edit: Wait, I see you answered that question. Okay. Cool. Do you still want to keep the SMG?

With the Semblance, we suggest either turn it into either a buff for himself and his teammates or a sort of hardlight shield, which would create a directed forcefield rather than a protective buffer. As his aura control grows, so too would his ability to protect his team mates. In the case of the visual effects; his aura control doesn't seem like it would be good enough to create complete angel wings to encompass the area. Perhaps it could start off as feathers floating around himself and his teammates and as his control gets better it forms the wing motif.

Edit: I see you updated the semblance. Makes sense, though we till think the wings might be a bit too much for his current lack of control. It might be better save for when he has better control.

Other than those few things, he's a decent character with plenty of room for character growth as the roleplay progresses. Do you have a preference for which team you'd like to go on? His initials will fit either NCTR or CLRT.

Edit: Whoops. Silver eyes in canon have been hinted as slightly important due to Ruby Rose having them. Might need to change them. Maybe you could go with a pale blue, or a glasz colour (which is a mix between blue, green and grey, and seem to change colour occasionally. It's a real thing too)
Well, all the people went home early, so I'm officially online for the day
@Against This

Phantom's sleeping right now. I can't talk for him, but it was my impression that this is his first time GMing. And may I point out that your IC posts only started two weeks ago? I know creating a character is hard and takes time, but this particular RP hasn't actually gone on for that long.

I will say that the reboot of this thread was not so flippant as you might think - he deliberated and we talked back and forth for almost a whole day, trying to work it so that we could continue this RP. The hard reboot was not an easy decision - and not one either of us wanted to make either. Also, you can use posts that you have already typed out for this thread - as long as they don't clash with the new information. Most of them should be right.

If you still decide you don't want to join the new thread, then I'm terribly sorry to see you go, and I'm sure Phantom will be too. If you change your mind, we'll be happy to have you.

@Fatal Error 1337

I'm sorry to see you go, though I can understand your frustrations. We were hoping that the new thread would be a bit more organised as well, which might help you with writing the IC posts. If you still wish to join, you're more than welcome.

The same goes for all members of this roleplay. If you want to give the new thread a shot, we'll gladly have you, and if you decide against it, we'll be very sorry to see you go. I hope to see you guys over there :)
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