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4 yrs ago
I heard Lord Wraith does off-brand car commercials in Japan.
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7 yrs ago
Vanjie......Vaaaanjie. VAAAAANNNJIE!
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8 yrs ago
Silly me silly me, for tuttling like we could make something beautifully. And the hands of my man, dusted in bedlam and false promises --while I delved in with love abundances
9 yrs ago
Ooops....where did the time go and it's the Holidays?
9 yrs ago
Surprise bitches, betcha thought you'd seen the last of me

Bio

I think I'll come back to this relatively soon...but then again, knowing me, I probably won't.

I guess the main point of this is to say: damn, I was gone for over a year from this place. I spent a good bit of inconsistent time on Iwaku, but I kinda missed my roots and the place I originally called home.

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does this mean your going to post soon? lol


<Snipped quote by Hillan>

Well, Stein? What'll it be? We need answers.


I think that was worth the wait, no? K'thnks.

<Snipped quote by Heathen>

I will fight you so much, too.


Hater
Ilani better come through bitch yaaasss.


Thank you hun. <3
Ilani Marie Jackson







Pointe Bordeaux, Town Hall
March 18, 2016


The fever of Madness spread easily through the town of Bordeaux. Carried on the waves of heat from a southern sun and given the fertile ground to grow by the humidity, a growing number of people were beginning to pitch themselves into a frenzy. Ilani could see it as she looked over the crowd before her. Fear and Confusion sprinkled their essence into the mix, and with a little push of Greed, they swirl to make one mass:

Hatred.

It was almost palpable as Ilani looked over the mass in City Hall. Heat seemed to emanate from the crowd as well as hang in the air. A moist and muggy heat that robbed you of your strength to exercise good sense. But Il could also see the specks of Greed that stood in the crowd. Hints of Fairchild Electronics promoters and vendors, profiting more at their own showcase. An involuntary shudder ran over Ilani and she questioned her commitment to her actions today.

That question was short lived as the warehouse took hold of her thoughts for the briefest of moments, and she felt the cold chill of a dilapidated room instead of the heat of Pointe Bordeaux’s City Hall.

’And frankly, this is bullshit anyway,’ she thought to herself as she eyed the hate rally before her.

“Illy, girl, you alright?” Alex asked, peering from behind the camera. Ilani’s camerawoman shook her head disapprovingly, “If you tell me you forgot to hydrate before we went out again, I’m gonna kick your ass.”

Ilani clicked her tongue, rolling her eyes and suppressing a smile. “Thanks for the love, Al. No I’m fine, just one of those jitter rolls. Now are you ready to get the camera rolling? Let’s get this going.” She eyed the darkening sky. The humidity was always the worst before a storm. And this one looked bad. That was one speck of good in this chaos of today. Maybe the rally would get rained out.

Alex lifted her camera and nodded. “Yeah, but what is the plan exactly? I’m not sure what we’re going for.”

Ilani adjusted her blazer with a smooth movement as she began walking. A slight intensely excited gait met her heeled feet as she neared the crowd, each clack of her heel meant with purpose and precision. It was her first story since she’d taken time off, and she was excited to go all in. “A classic angle. We’re going to paint the similarities between their ignorance and hysteria and the ignorance of the past. The LGBTQ, Black America, any minority really. Show the public how much of a witch hunt this is becoming, based off of what’s mainly been misconception. Just...get this.” She nodded to a modestly dressed and covered woman on the fringe of the more condensed mass, the central stage just in view. She held a picket sign, reading “To Hell With the Hypes.”

“Excuse me? Miss?” Ilani spoke up as she neared her. The moment the woman turned, she was met with a bright eyed and engaged Ilani Marie Jackson.

“Y..yes? Can I help you?” She looked around nervously and almost panicked when she saw the camera.

“Nono, it’s okay,” Ilani reassured her. “We’re doing a piece on the community in times of crisis such as this. We’d love to get a little bit from you as part of it. Something to show how the town is banding together.”

The woman’s shoulders un-hunched themselves and she gave Ilani a smile. “Of course, I would be able to give a few moments.”

“Thank you!” Ilani told the woman excitedly. There was a glint in her eye, the look of a predator as Ilani continued on. “So, to start off with, can I get your name? Just your first is fine, if you prefer.” Ilani gestured for Alex to come in and get into position.

“Neema,” the woman said, nodding her head slightly in introduction.

“So Neema, you’re here today for the Fairchild product reveal?”

“Yes of course. I’m very excited,” Neema told her. Ilani eyed around her, noting the growing crowd. Even more people were showing up? This was ridiculous.

“So, you’ve known and been following the efforts of Fairchild Electronics?” Ilani asked.

“Oh yes, I think the Hyperhumans are a threat we must stand firm against,” a small accent began to creep up as the woman spoke passionately. “For the safety of our community and our families. We have all seen what one of them can be capable of.”

Ilani nodded her head, a furrowed brow of affirmation prompting the woman to continue. “You have a strong resolve Miss Neema. Do you give any weight to the claims of some saying that we should understand them instead of hunt them?”

Neema seemed to balk at the question, momentarily silent. “Not at all! I came to this country for safety and a better life. I will not have it ruined by some...deviation of the human being. Can you imagine if one of those made it into a school and...well, I fear the harm and damage they could do. Blow up a school, infect it, set fire to it. You name it!”

Ilani narrowed her eyes and gave a quick smirk, verbally pouncing. “Ma’am, do you mean to tell me that you’ve had extensive interaction with Hyperhumans?”

“Well..no, but...you’ve seen the news. I don’t want them near me or my kids. They’re dangerous,” the woman puffed up her chest, tugging at both of her sleeves.

“It’s interesting you say that, ma’am. It’s almost the exact same sentiment voiced at a rally here on September 18, 2001. Did you attend that rally?” Ilani asked.

“Wha? I--No, I didn’t. Why do you ask?”

“That rally was a vigil and hate rally used to fuel distrust among the Muslim American community, following the 9/11 attacks. Sentiments such as yours and the apparent danger of ‘Jihad terrorists’ were rampant that day.”

Neema tugged at her hijab anxiously, lowering her sign. “What are you trying to imply?”

Ilani took a step forward. “Only that you’ve only seen one display of something you’ve never heard of. Now, you supposedly fear for your life because of one extremist of a minority group. You hate a group you don’t know, but you assume they’re dangerous.”

“I think I’m done with this conversation now,” Neema told her curtly after a stunned pause. She looked around quickly for an exit before hurrying off.

“Damn,” Alex spoke up, lowering the camera, “how do you always do that? Get into the nitty gritty so easily?”

“It’s a curse,” Ilani shrugged, already moving again. “Now, we’re on to the next one.” Her strut was a little more pronounced as she moved further into the crowd, a hunger growing.
I changed Ilani's motivation in her CS (for anyone who's interested). It's still KIND OF open ended, but it ends on a different tone which I like. And I like this variation much better.
I think the reason August and that other bartender don't like Marcus is because the motherfucker doesn't tip.
For anyone who has read the posts but needs a quick refresher, the IC OP has a summary of the events that have happened in the IC thus far with each player's posts broken down into bite sized chunks. Just in case you need to brush up quickly before submitting a post.


I like the sentiment, but I don't know how overtly crazy I am about it. It would make things SO much easier. But what if it negates from players actually reading the posts?
<Snipped quote by Wade Wilson>

Yes you have a nice 'snap' to your writing, the way Rick Allen especially was written was always refreshing. You very clearly had a sense of character with him and a clear depiction in your mind.

I mean you can google day in and day out about how to get the most of your writing but reading a flight manual doesn't ensure you can fly a plane. In my experience the only thing that gets you the most out of writing is more writing. Plus there's no point in comparing yourself to those around you, comparing yourself is more often than not going to lead to you putting your writing down and discouraging yourself. I always just look for things I like in writing and try to emulate them. I've often been told I have a natural knack for detail so I often use that to my advantage especially when it comes to GMing, but I really struggle with creating inner turmoil and conflict for my characters. Something that I've always greatly admired @Stein for. @Hillan on the other hand I've always admired for the flow his combat scenes have, they feel very much like you're right there blow for blow.

I've been RPing with both of these guys for the greater part of five years though. @Roman has always pushed me to create better characters as I find he never chooses something 'trendy' or 'easy' per say. Roman always reinvents the wheel each and every time he makes a character. If it wasn't for Roman we'd have metahumans or mutants instead of Hyperhumans.

There's numerous more RPers I could mention and brag about what they're great at but my point here is never to give up because you don't feel you're a good writer. If you have a drive to write and you're willing to learn, surround yourself with those whose writing you enjoy and eventually they'll rub off on you and who knows? Maybe they'll learn something from you too.


GAaaaaaaaaaaaaaay

....

No but really. This was really sweet.

10/10 Would/Have read again.
<Snipped quote by Stein>

That'd be nice dear.


God, you've been around Teeny and I too long
Ilani Marie Jackson


| NAME(S): |
Ilani Marie Jackson

| NICKNAME(S): |
Marie, Illy, Il, Lani​

ALIAS(ES):
Sly Spectre

| D.O.B.: |
08/21/1990

| AGE: |
25​

| SEX: |
No thank you.​

| SEXUALITY: |
Heterosexual

| APPEARANCE: |
So like, this bitch is giving you Black Furiosa realness. She's slick and subtle, a slight Tinkerbell coyness to her. But, she's got that look in her amber eyes that if you cross her, she will DRAG YO ASS FO FILTH! Giving you all types of fierceness, she COME THRU on a bitch with her legs for days and years of bitch stompin, pounding the pavement...and sports have toned her body.

Her hair stays short and crisp, giving you some androgyny realness. And you see that fucking part in her hair, curved like a swinging backhand? She stays on that style. Her nose stud is subtle, something she can take in or out, but enough of a SHBLAM! when she wants it to be.

| H-CLASS: |
MINERVA

| ABILITIES: |
Ilani's MINERVA-Class powers manifest primarily in her Occipital lobe and have led to a variety of applications.

Enhanced Occipital Lobe:


Remote Viewing:


(Slightly) Enhanced Coordination: The proximity of the occipital lobe to the spinal cord has made Ilani's hand-eye coordination more proficient as well. Her movements are precise and she has a greater awareness of her body when her powers are active (in the areas of body position, speed and strength).

Distorted Vision:


Linked Vision:

SKILLS:
-Superior Marksmanship: Maybe a byproduct of her powers, but Ilani has held a slight affinity for accuracy based activities since birth. After becoming accustomed to any ranged weapon, she can fire with superb accuracy and precision.
-Superior Perception: Ilani can be very aware of her surroundings, subconsciously taking in everything for an easy conscious recall. Illusions and mind tricks are typically ineffective against her, as she can usually notice when the process begins or even where it starts from.
-Reporter’s Eye: Even without her abilities, Illy can see a story anywhere. She notices inconsistencies in people and things. Puzzles present little challenges to her and her critical thinking skills are something to note.
-Retention: Though not eidetic, Ilani has an uncanny memory. Her recall is impressive and she has memorized entire scripts and poems in a matter of minutes.

| BACKSTORY: |







| MOTIVATION/OBJECTIVE: |
Illy stayed the rest of the night, shocked and in complete silence. She counted 15 bodies of charred remains being wheeled out as the authorities made it on the scene. Erick's was among them, and Illy wept for him.

The incident that night was never reported. It never made the news or any paper and officially, it was faulty wiring with no reported deaths. That told Illy everything she needed to know. 15 people dead and no one cared. No one knew. No one spoke for them.
---

The silence of their deaths slowly suffocated a piece of Ilani. Up until that incident, the hatred harbored in fear and shadowed grievances toward Hyperhuman's had been somewhat veiled to Ilani. Though she had been exposed to the hatred via stories and articles, something about the current predicament of the Hyperhuman in the current world had been ignored by her. But no longer.

She spent her own pocket eternity sitting in the abandoned warehouse, switching between different position of pained contortions as she wept and grieved. The charred smell stuck in her nose for hours, and her mind envisioned wafts of burnt hair and charred flesh. Her cries became hoarse after the fifth hour. The tears stopped flowing after six. At nine, her throat produced only strained and tight expulsions of air as she continued to sob out the overwhelming pain. No proper motivation to move from her current nexus of depression and into a hate filled world fell upon Ilani for a total of 14 hours.

----

That was six months ago.

It's been 6 months since that night. Ilani has spoken of the night to no one and has carried it with her. Who could she trust? Who would even care? Ilani feared the answer to each question more than the other. The hatred seemed pointless to Ilani, but what could she do now?


| REFERENCE POST(S): |
Vigilance: Rise of the Mavericks: IllAdvised, Angel and Feral heed their Call to Arms as Mavericks for a city who has laid in want. But, can they stand against their own demons?
Vigilance: Blood and Justice: Resident Magni and drunk Sarks Hummel can’t catch a break in this city. Things were much easier across the Pond. The persistent rain and his missing personal assistant aren’t making things much easier.
The new Eidolons: In the realm of Elenthalheim, all is not as it seems of the society, fighting for survival. Deep in the heart, they prepare for the day when their world will need them most. And that day is rapidly approaching.

EXTRA: Vigilance: Rise of the Mavericks: Want to know what it’s like inside the mind of a sultan serving the face of a god? Take a glimpse at a juicy snippet inside the life of Raja.

| NOTES: |
WIP
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