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My Character Sheets | Santa Somabra | Maximum Comics | Verthaven | These roleplays are from roughly 2 years ago.



Hello all! I'm an Advanced RPer. I've been RPing for quite a while now...since I was a kid. I'm expecting a Bachelors in English this coming May (don't ask how; my skill as a creative writer has taken a seemingly irreparable blow after an encounter with major depression) as well as a minor in Psychology. I am an avid animal lover, photographer, and writer. I do a restricted amount of dabbling in drawing and painting.

About two years ago, I stopped using RP guild. It was for a myriad of reasons, but the topmost ones are major depression, the passing of my parrot (pictured as my banner at the top of my bio), and a relationship issue.

I'm back now!

Roleplaying always kept me at the top of my literate game. My vocabulary took a huge blow during my depression, and I'm eager to refine it. I've spent the last two years fixing my life, and I'd love for roleplaying to be an active part of my daily routine again!




Types of literature I'm interested in (in order of interest):
-Adult Fiction
-Science Fiction
-Fantasy
-Thriller
-Manga

My general interests and hobbies:
-Reading
-Writing
-Animal Welfare and Rights
-People Welfare and Rights
-Drawing (Amateur)
-Video Games
-Photography

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I'd like to see some detail develop in her as we go, and the GM consensus was that a specific higher power would be appreciated. That being said, neither is completely necessary for now since those are both extra things we can find out as we go along, so put her in the Character Sheets. Accepted!


Can you guys elaborate on the specific higher power? It's no problem to do so, but I'm not sure if I understand what you guys mean by that.

Umm...for detail, if ya'll don't mind, I was thinking of like, continuously fleshing out and adding to her personality as we go (of course I'd GM one of you my additions prior to adding them). So like, perhaps towards the end of the year, her personality's undergone a change, and so I strike out what's not relevant any more (if something's not relevant), put a [ hr ] and say like "Year 2018-2019 so and so is coming in this year a bit changed" and adding on what has changed.

If that's okay with you guys. If not, I can write her out completely, no problemo! I just though eleven year olds tend to simultaneously have the personality of sticks (good sticks, and bad sticks), and it would be better to have her...like, well, develop as the years go on.
@Strawberry425 I think the real problem is that there's no real standard or guideline for advanced or casual. Only subjective guidelines. Personally, if I ran things, I'd split the site in two: a section for the people who make one liners, and a section the people who write paragraphs.


I think my big beef right now, to be more specific, is character and plot depth. I've never really been a big supporter of the length standard. Depth is what matters to me, and it's so very frustrating to see players who write without depth now joining Advanced in such high numbers. And sure, I'm sure some of them actually are totally willing to improve and learn and will probably make awesome, thoughtful, writers someday. But there's a whole other hoard of them that believe they've reached the pinnacle of perfection, and having to deal with those people is frustrating. Never mind the fact that these people will bring in, er, similar allies to help them in their quest to eliminate what I think is a critical part of Advanced roleplaying. I am just very frustrated with this right now....



On another note, I have another, more personal, rant, but this one goes in hiders.

EDIT: I'm very tired, so I apologize in advance if I messed up anywhere.




Are you guys too packed now? I was about to whip up a CS, but if there's no more room...
What I do notice is that many Casual RPs should probably be moved towards the Advanced forum based on the general depth and length of the posts but people are too afraid to make their threads there as the Casual area has the most user activity out of the three tiers (12/34/9 viewers in Free/Casual/Advance). Adding to that, Advance does come across as an area that has no limitations to depth and length with some High Casual users possibly feeling afraid of accidentally getting into an RP that is beyond their capabilities or required to read posts that stretch on for several paragraphs.


This is the part that sucks, and I think, a problem that has been going on in Guild for years. Things have definitely changed since Guild went down and came back up. One thing that has not changed is capable roleplayers being intimidated by the "Advanced" label. It's pretty suck ass. Before Guild went down, I had only just started RPing in Advanced. So I know exactly how those frightened RPers feel joining an Advanced RP. But, what I've noticed, is a lot of the people most scared to migrate to advanced are also talented and capable of doing so. They're just underestimating themselves.

ON the other hand, we now also, for some reason (and this is going to sound rude), have less capable roleplayers, who have too much confidence stuck up their buttholes to realize they're not exactly on par with the writing that Advanced standards indicate. So, they're clogging up all the space these shy writers could be taking up instead. This other group should be focused on improving their skill, not flaunting what they don't have.

Branching off from this. I wondered if a thread check could work where after 10 or 15 IC posts if the character count is above a certain number (let's say 5,000, ie approx 900 words, for argument sake) it could suggest to the GM that the RP be migrated from the Casual to Advance where they check 'ok' to move it or 'no' to discard the message. It could be used as a bit of a teaching tool to help show the difference is requirement while also helping to populate the Advance section a bit more.


I think this would be both a good and a bad idea. If depth was not such a crucial part to Advanced writing, I feel like this could truly work, and maybe, add some really fresh faces to the Advanced section. But since word count alone doesn't necessarily indicate any amount of literacy or deep writing, you might still end up with that roleplayer who's ego is inflated because he/she/whatever they prefer writes really long posts, as opposed to posts with meaning.

I've noticed this as well, but at this point I don't even remember what the old Advanced quality really was. I like to think my own roleplay(s) adhere to ye olde standard. Do they really, though? I don't know.


I remember Advanced writers as being scary, with big sticks up their asses, and I remember Advanced posts as being long, long, long, long, and sometimes with depth, and sometimes without. Either way, I feel like it was more stringent back then, even if not everyone in the section was an amazing writer. Also more elitist. Back then, three of four people used to be browsing the Advanced roleplaying section. Nowadays, at any given time, you can see up fourteen people on at the same time. I like it better this way though. More variety. It's just disappointing to see that with the good comes the bad, but I guess that's to be expected.

Either way, I've seen like, one of your RPs, which I think just recently, was the Elder Scrolls RP. I considered joining, by not only do I feel booked, I also never played any Elder Scrolls game 'cept for Skyrim. But, it looked like an Advanced Roleplay to me, I think


Nyxvira's golden eyes steadily grazed over Chase's face; her plump lips formed an amused smile. The werewolf shifted in his seat, uncomfortable with the attention. His eyes darted back and forth rapidly as he pretended to appraise the decorative appearance of the Golden Dragon's interior.

Behind him, Johanssen had sidled up to be closer to the assembly. He could feel the heat of her smaller body against his back as she came to a stop just before his chair. The warmth was comforting in the AC chilled environment, and Chase accepted it gladly. A gentle sense of calm seeped through Chase's clothes, and with some concentration, he tried to ward it away. Now was not the time to feel rainbowish.

"The lads tell me she's parading around Dawn Peek Heights, stomping about on some fountain." The old man's voice broke the brief silence that had blanketed the tense and awkward group. His thin wrist signaled to the smartphone clutched in his other, equally withered, hand.

Dawn Peaks, Chase thought, grimacing ever so slightly. It was a district of Somabra that Chase had infrequently visited. Maybe once or twice in childhood, when his parents had been feeling particularly generous and in the mood to spoil their brood of two, but never as a werewolf. It's noisy climate and posh, flashy, businessmen were the neon highlighted markers that warned away people like Chase; average Joes whose average-ness would only become inflated when they arrived, poorly dressed, to a high class supermarket like Whole Foods.

“Make your way discreetly through the back entrance, keeping your arms where we can see them." The skeletal undead's spoke, his ivory white dome as impassive as ever, the small cracked indents in his skull stiff and unmovable, his voice strict, and unfriendly, "We’ve got a taxi to take you where you need to go. The driver will give you a Python with silver bullets. Ameilkas is built like so many brick shithouses, but silver should still stop her in her tracks.”

Chase nodded methodically as the instructions were doled out to him like a well recited grocery list. Silver bullets...silver anything...made the werewolf nervous, and rightly so. He had almost instantaneously decided to defer possession of the killing weapon to Johanssen, whose venomous, revenge stricken mind would have no problem pulling the trigger when the time came.

“If you’re planning on trying to sneak your way in to her little group, then forget it.” The Asian woman's raspy voice piped up, “She’ll be able to smell the city on you, and the Hunters despise city wolves.”

Chase would have liked to believe the woman's rederick was aimed more so at Johanssen than himself. If there was one thing Chase knew, it was that country werewolves loathed city werewolves. And while Chase didn't count himself as an active participant in the flourishing city life around him, he still stuck close to its tightly built neighborhoods and tall, towering, skyscrapers. The city's heavy metallic scent would reek from his fur.

Chase glanced back at Johanssen, whose face was the spitting image of painted steel. Her eyes looked cold and indifferent. Piercing blue in color, and presently with pinholes for pupils, they slowly settled on Chase's face and a silent preparedness passed between them.

“I’ll have my people drop Ann off somewhere out-of-the-way, once we’ve had confirmation that you’ve held up your end of our little bargain. Make sure you’re nice and thorough, or you’ll get your lady love back in pieces through the mailbox.”

Johanssen blanched, and in a brief moment of weakness, the steely facade dropped. Her eyes flickered frantically to Ann, curled in a fetal position at the feet of her captors. Her body shuddered ever so slightly, and Chase knew she would need to vomit before they left. The small palpitations on her smooth long neck told Chase she was swallowing frenetically, and her paled skin tinged green ever so slightly. Then she focused on the back of Chase's head, and the green melted back under her bronzed skin.

Nyx's stare rested on the two undead and the sly goblin that had slipped in at the very last moment.

“You two and your…little green friend get your arses over to the Red Lights district. Some prozzies, and a good slice of my weekly income, need saving.”

For a moment, she seemed to appraise the goblin, and Chase thought he could understand why. The wily creatures were adept spies; he would be a handy asset if ever one was needed.

"Now, if you'll all excuse me; I have a hot tub that needs my attention." She leered at the group, and her lusty gaze lingered longingly on Chase, "I'll have my guys text you the address."

Chase gave a strained smile.




Chase didn't bother with the unneeded phrases, the "are you ok"s and the "it'll be alright"s. Maybe in another situation, those would have worked. But not here, not now.

We made our way to the back entrance in silence, our hands clamped by our sides dutifully, afraid to move a finger an inch out of place, terrified it would place a bullet in the center of Ann's forehead. Behind us, we were leaving two zombies, a goblin, that nasty beast of a woman and her posy, and most importantly, the person I loved.

Outside, the warm air felt uncomfortable against my already clammy skin. Chase moved forward, but I raised a finger for him to wait.

I ebbed slowly towards the dumpster leaning against the Golden Dragon's brick wall backside. Prying its heavy, green, debris splattered lid up, I peeked my head over its edge. Then I let out most of the contents of my stomach, along with some bitter tasting yellowish green bile. Chase allowed me to retch uselessly for a few seconds, before gently take me the arm and guiding me to the front of the Dragon, where our taxi awaited us.

A black, privately hired taxi, rested ominously by the sidewalk. It's back door was flung open, flanked threateningly by two of Nyx's darkly dressed muscle men. Their guns, shining black rifles cradled comfortably in the crook of their arms, glinted maliciously under the glare from the walkway lights.

One of the men's wide palms gestured in a big swooping side arch, pointedly resting on the entrance of the black taxi. Chase and I piled in, Chase sparing a backward glance for their nastily carved faces. The door slammed shut behind, and in no time, the car was jetting off with a pronounced screech.

The driver, an Arabic man with a sharp, hawk nose, and a stiff black mustache, groped around haphazardly in the passenger seat for something, his other hand balanced precariously on the driver's wheel of his taxi. When his hand came up into our view, he was holding the silver tinted barrel of the Python Nyx had promised us.

We stared at for moments before he snapped in a thick accent, "Well take it, one of you!"

My hand jerked forward and I snatched the weapon from the man's flat, calloused, brown hand. Next to me, Chase shifted away. He had always been particular about silver. It all made sense now.

I holstered the gun on my utility belt, as I liked to think of it.

The flurried drive went by in silence, with me and Chase occasionally exchanging worried, tense glances. Towards the end of our speedy adventure, our driver began speaking to us quickly in his low, accented voice.

"I'm going to drop you at Dawn Peeks, entrance," He said, gesturing to where the buildings began to become increasingly official looking, "You walk."

The taxi came to an abrupt and jolting halt where our driver seemed to mark as far as he would go. It was very near to Dawn Peeks' entrance; he had done us the courtesy of driving a few feet beyond the big green sign that indicated we had arrived at "Dawn Peek Heights". We were hurried out, and then in a puff of gritty brown dust, our taxi had sped away to safety.

"How do we find her?" I asked, looking around at what was a relatively empty street.

"We listen for the screams, and watch for the people. Besides, one of them mentioned she was at some fountain. So let's look for a fountain."


Chase's super hearing dragged us along in our endeavors. Eventually, we were greeted with sparse flocks of people, screaming and running, dragging comparatively heavy feet away from the source of their distress. In the distance, eerie howls pierced the air, sending chills down my spine.

Chase and I weaved through the loose rushed crowds with as much speed and vigor as we could muster, but sometimes there's just no easy way to get around a frenzied crowd.

At some point, we converged, and managed to make our way to a secluded alleyway; our meet up before the confrontation.

"They can't be too far away from here." His handsome face was covered in sweat, and I wondered if his nerves were getting to him. Chase, if you knew him, wasn't typically a nervous guy. A little bold, pretty stubborn, but also very laid back. Watching him squirm at the idea of confronting werewolves...his own kin...was both, sadly, amusing and nerve wracking.

My hand traveled the gun strapped at my waist. This was our Hail Mary (and if I believed in religion, maybe that would have given me a stronger push).

Chase had always been a smart guy. Sure, we'd done some illicit stuff. Sure, we'd hooked up with some pretty dirty guys. We'd taken frequent trips on Somabra's sprawling underground railroad of unlawful activity. But he had never let us get close to danger. He didn't like the idea any better than I did. I mean, really, who out there wanted to needlessly throw their lives away?

He grinned at me, and it took me so forcefully by surprise that I felt tears welling up on the side of my eyes.

"Don't cry," He said, snorting. His lips trembled, wanting to say something else. Maybe, this was the time for the "it'll be ok"s. At least, in some cliche movie, it would be that time. That time where the characters sentence themselves to death by uttering that one sealing phrase; "it'll be ok."

So I can see him zipping his lips shut and throwing the key away. We won't silence ourselves to that faith.

"Can we hug," He muttered. Oh god, he's so corny. I wanted to say, "This is no time for hugs, Chase." But I didn't. Instead we embraced, briefly, but tightly. He patted my head like an old grandpa, and I snorted dumbly into his tear stained blue shirt.

"I have a plan," He said, as we broke apart.

"We use the buildings," He motioned to side entrance of one of the buildings flanking our alleyway, "Get a high vantage point, see if we can take her out from there."

"And what about her lackeys," I said nervously, the howling in the background growing louder and more pronounced. Chase's eyes seemed to zone out, look off into some faraway world.

"I'll deal with them, as best as I can, I promise." I hadn't felt like such a little kid in a long time. I wasn't cut out for this business. He wasn't really cut out for this business anyway. But he was willingly to sacrifice himself if it meant one of us came out alive. And by one of us, he meant in his mind, me.




"Remember, don't turn on the lights."

"I know," Johanssen scowled, her pretty face contorting into a look disbelief.

"I'm not doubting you," Chase said, smilingly teasingly. She rolled her eyes. In an eerie silence, they carefully picked their way through the cluttered remains of what looked to have been a pretty respectable office. No blood smears, or splattered entrails. Just the telltale signs of the rush for freedom.

People had heard the call of the Hunters and fled. Chase didn't blame them.

"They're close by." He muttered. They were on the fourth floor of a glassy skyscraper. The building overlooked the plaza where Ameilkas and her lackeys could be seen gallivanting around on the plaza's semi-crippled fountain.

"She's ugly," Johanssen said, her nose crinkling at the sight of the white furred she-wolf, her lips lopsided in a half-amused smile. Chase grinned back. Because, the very opposite could be said to be true. It wasn't so much Ameilkas's big rippling muscles that got to Chase; rather it was the beauty of her white glossy fur, blanched to an almost heavenly white by the soft moonlight.

"How many bullets?" Chase asked, jerking his head in the direction of Johanssen's hips.

"Three," She was looking out of the window skeptically, and her lips began moving without sound. Praying. Johanssen had never been a big believer in religion; and neither had Chase for that matter. A lot of the city was without religion, or God for that matter.

"What if it misses," She whispered, leveling the silver revolver ever so slightly, her line of sight zeroing in on the target.

"Then we have one big fucking problem."
Hmm...this one is going to sound pretty bitchy. Like really bitchy. Like, bitchtastic ™.

But umm...like why is the "Advanced" quality of writing going down so much? Or rather, why is the requirement bar being set lower and lower? And no, not just length; I went into a whole tirade about length a few pages ago. I mean, like, overall quality.

What is this new "Low Advanced" shit that I'm seeing? High Casual. It's called High Casual. Like, I think I kind of liked it better when Advanced writers here were renowned for being snobbish, pretentious, bitches. My kind of people.

Stop trying to re-brand an existing sector of roleplay to make yourself sound better. I mean, this just relates back to the same effing people who correlate some minute, singular, talent with being an Advanced writer, when being Advanced constitutes an amalgamation of things. And I mean, you don't have to be a pro in every single one of these things, but god, just trying to utilize them is enough for me. But when you swagger on in here like you own the place with some bullshit, cockamamie, shallow writing, that very well still belongs in its little High Casual side of the world, well then, you have released my beast. Like mama. Do you not, maybe, realize that Advanced writers are able to muster up a certain something, something in their characters that causes them, to you know, be considered Advanced characters? Like, thoughtful actions, deeper conflicts, thoughtful characters, plots not convoluted by merely psychical activity. Not "he did this," "she did this," for five hundred pages. Not, "let me just respond to this other post and leave it at that." Not, "let me happily ignore the characters I don't like in favor of writing some repetitive shallow bullshit to that one person I've happened to connect with."

I do see that some people are doing this to garner more attention for their roleplays. I guess the motto is, if it won't work as a High Casual, maybe it'll work as a Low Advanced, and vice versa. And I'm sure that works, because I've seen it work.

And now, I'm not saying every High Casual roleplayer is some bullshit roleplayer. Some of them are pretty talented, and some of them, I think, could push themselves into Advanced if they tried. But, by inviting such a standard as Low Advanced, into a sector that, previously, was so rigid on quality, what you are inviting into said sector are writers who are, potentially, even lesser than High Casual.

Because, we all know High Casual roleplays still garner the attention of players who should be more aptly called, Casual roleplayers. We should also all know, that, as roleplays tend to do, in a myriad of applications there will always be those few roleplayers that shouldn't have applied. And it's up to the GM to weed them out, but if the GM chooses not to do so, then, what really can you do. So ultimately, even in an Advanced roleplays, you'll end up with High Casual roleplayers. And the cycle continues in all tiers...

I mean, on the other hand, by inviting writers with lower standards, you could, possibly, help them refine their standard of writing. Engaging with Advanced roleplayers, and even their peers, can push on the evolution of a little blooming writer. Turn a little toddling roleplayer into a big cantering adult. And then you'd have more Advanced roleplayers with revolutionary roleplay ideas, popping up out of nowhere, stupidly giving away original information that other writers could happily plagiarize and create into successful series, because let's face it, if big authors can plagiarize other big authors without repercussions, putting your ideas out here is really asking for it. But either way, new writers, yayyyy. So I guess there are two sides to the coin, as there usually is.

Since I just defeated my own argument, I'm not really sure why I'm here.

Of course, like I said, this is, ultimately, just bitchy. I could very well leave the little stinkers alone and let them do as they pleased. Not like they're hurting anyone. Well me, a little. Because, I mean, when I hop on into the Advanced section, I expect to see Advanced RPs with literate writers.

Oh well. Anyway I had to bitch about it. Just a little.







| Identity |

Selina Kyle

| Alias |

Catwoman

| Origin & Backstory |






| Attributes |

Original Fighting Style (Derivative of Martial Arts)

Thievery/Cat Burglary

Flexibility

Whip

| Character Notes |

Acquaintances

  • Batman
  • Holly Robinson
  • Poison Ivy
  • Harley Quinn


| Character Goals |

"Be rich. Money, money, money."

Selina is young. What semblance of a privileged life that she did have was stripped from her when she was ten. The subsequent eleven years were spent in poverty and, frequently, desperation. What would you do, if you realized you could do something?

So, yes, she is young, and she is naive, and she is selfish. The world is ripe for her picking, and as far as she considers it, she doesn't have to share with everyone. As a result, to say she desires to help superheroes in any way is a long shot. She works on a 'me' agenda, where her well-being comes first and foremost, with the only exceptions being children and other similarly young and deprived women, both of which she has tender spots for.

It could also be said that she feels safe in her present position. Vigilantes can deal with the world's people and the world's problems.
Ok, to name names.

I <3
@potatochipgolem
@Kingfisher

Since I've only recently come back on Guild, I'm still a little shaky on faces. But people I admire:
@tsukune
@Mr Allen J

Pretty much everyone from my current RP. I really like the way they all write and if we got to know each other better, I'd totally RP with them on other stuff.
@drewccapp
@McHaggis
@Obscene Symphony
@Raxacoricofallapatorius
@Penguinimus
@The Mad Hatter Life constraints cause her to not be able to go through with the RP, but she seemed like an awesome person anyway.

Ohhh a lot of people in Old Guild. Right before Guild went down, I stopped logging on because I couldn't balance schoolwork with RPing. So I remember not what their usernames were. Then when it came back on I was briefly active, could not find any of my old buddies, and disappeared again.

Now that I'm back...I'd probably consider doing 1x1's with two people who I've come to really like as RP'ers. And that's saying a lot, since I usually don't do 1x1s.

Ohhh, I did have a great buddy on another RP site I think in the time we knew each other, we went on quite a the RP journey together. Kind of sad she just disappeared one day. Guess it happens
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