@Athos, he sounds like an asshole. I love him.
@Fatal Error, probably carrying one too many weapons. Despite the weight-load being amazingly good in skyrim (a full set of plate armour and 3 ebony battle-axes, no problem!) I'm going for a more realistic equipment weight and distribution method. The two-handed sword, the shield and the bow are usually held on the back when not in use. So cut one of them and I'll let the other two slide.
@Pyro V, I'm not sure I'm comfortable with anyone knowing the thu'um for what could arguably be said is the strongest shout. Only greybeards have knowledge of the thu'um, and they sacrifice their ability of speech to learn it. Please cut that part out, and she'll be fine.