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Yeah, even on the old guild they really sucked.

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Damn, these hiders suck.

Well, using multiple hiders do.

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Vorenus

Name: Vorenus Trilorn
Age: 25
Gender: Male

Race: Imperial
Appearance:
Job: Imperial Legate

Skills: Vorenus is an unskilled soldier and has no lust for battle and would avoid it if he could. He is decent with a sword and shield, but he prefers the use of a bow as it provides more distance. He has an interest in magic, especially the restoration school and considers it his finest ability.

Personality: Vorenus is polite and courteous and would make a better politician than a soldier. He values caution above all else, and dislikes risks which makes others view him as a coward. As a legate he plans every detail accordingly and is very patient to get correct results. He is untested as battle commander, and knows he only got his title because his father is a general within the Imperial Legion. This makes his authority questionable, and many men his elder openly question his orders. Vorenus' main problem is that he is soft. His gentle heart makes war more complex than it needs to be. Vorenus does have extended knowledge of law, noble families and his history and also has some amount of cunning with tactics despite popular belief.

History: As a child Vorenus was diligent and studied hard. The other kids would always mock him as he always preferred to have his head in a book. He disliked holding swords and shields, but his father had him groomed for command at an early age, and any complaint he had about his training was quickly beat out of him during combat. No matter how hard his swords-master hit him however, the smell of a book was always more appealing than the smell of blood.

Being the son of a general carries weight however, and Vorenus was rarely actually punished for his lack of discipline and climbed the ranks with each passing winter. It made soldiers envious of him and they openly challenge his authority and were quick to criticize him.

When the darkness began to swallow the Imperial City Vorenus was the only legate present. He quickly gathered his soldiers and made evacuation the priority. The White Tower, however, was not to be secured and rather than lose any more soldiers Vorenus abandoned the empire to his doom and went north with his men to Bruma.

Starting Point: Bruma

Wont-Back-Down

Name: Won't-Back-Down
Age: 37
Gender: Male

Race: Argonian
Appearance:
Job: Imperial Legate

Skills: Won't-Back-Down is a born soldier. Fighting comes natural to him, and he favours the use of large weapons such as war hammers and battle axes. He has a strong constitution that allows him to wear heavy armour for long periods of time. He is poor with a bow, and finds it equally difficult at being discreet. He does not have any patience for magic, but respects and fears its power.

Personality: Won't-Back-Down is stubborn to a fault. He will fight to the bitter end and beyond. He has a high opinion of himself and shows great pride in his rank within the Legion. He has little patience for racism, having faced it for most of his life and is not afraid to call bigots out. From his soldiers he expects no less than one hundred percent. Laziness and failure is punished, while success and strength is respected. Despite being viewed as a hardass, he is quick to smile and joke with people below his rank.
History: Won't-Back-Down has the pride of being spat upon by Ulfric Stormcloak himself. He was an unblooded boy when the rebel Jarl raised his flags in rebellion against the Empire, and Won't-Back-Down was the only Argonian who despised the blatant racism on his people enough to finally take up arms against the Nords.

The rebellion was squashed with the Argonian seeing much of combat and war. Bards wrote tragedies of war and death, but for Won't-Back-Down it was an exhilarating rush. There was a fire in his heart that craved violence, and with it came a desire to ride his horse into a sea of men and crash down upon them to bash some heads in. The Argonian became famous for his love of combat and his stubborn nature, and was dubbed 'Won't-Back-Down', he took the name with pride.

Years passed, and the Argonian climbed the ranks within the legion. He worked twice as hard as any Imperial or Nord to obtain the rank of Legate. When the Thalmor attacked Leyawiin, Won't-Back-Down took his first ever defeat on the battlefield and retreated to Bravil. He has yet to forgive himself for his failure. The time and resources he wasted trying to repel the attack was disastrous.

Starting Point: Bravil

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I have a character being made who starts in Bruma, but yeah, it is looking like Bravil is the more popular starting point.

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Just one major problem with your character sheet, Enalais, and that's the history.

This is the beginning of the second war with the Dominion. The Dominion and the Empire were at a stalemate since the White-Gold Concordat, which has effectively been broken right now for the first time, so your history doesn't fit. Also, as I said to Serinaty, work on your grammar and punctuation please. Fix the profile up and I shall review again.

I'd also suggest lowering some of those master skills, as for his age that's stretching. Don't be afraid to give him a few flaws.

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You can make more than one character right now if you wish. I'll be making two.

Villains are always endearing..., I always eventually get attached regardless of how vile they are, lol.

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Athos said
Don't worry, you'll probably be back before HOAL is

lmfao

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Ah, Aza. Sometimes I swear we share the same mind.

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Enalais said
My question is how will you prevent abuse or someone being overpowered and also how are we not going to break lore like having 4 dragon borns?

Common sense and trust. It has crossed my mind, but I expect people to know the limits of their character and what is, forgive me, stupid. If I need to step in I will. But as of right now I don't see a problem.

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@Athos, shut your mouth, dirty slut.

@Serinaty, despite being an ass Athos brings up decent points. I don't mind bad grammar and punctuation, as everyone has to learn sometime. Hopefully if this rp is to last you will expand and grow as we continue. There's no need to edit your CS, just... try your best to follow the advice Athos has given in the future. I do see a history though, so I dunno what Athos was smoking, so accepted.

@TO4T, it's fine, really. Accepted. I love the history, it's nothing like I really expected.

I should note right now that I haven't really planned ahead (Besides my opening IC posts) and will pretty much be winging it, that's pretty much how I GM, so different personalities are very much welcome. I will cut in as The Ideal masters/Thalmor/Other Npcs if no one else wishes to take up the mantle, ultimately I'd like this to be a group RP and not just me directing the events of the story. As with my experience I feel like that is what most people are comfortable with.