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Charter was rather surprised at Grimwing's reaction, that the pegasus did not seem to notice the unicorn's comment about meeting an alicorn. In general, the Scholar didn't tell anypony about that, especially in the Moon and Stars. It was a good way for the Inquisitors to take you in for questioning. He didn't tell the crew for the reason that he didn't want to worry them. After a big shock, they might think he was mad.

Perhaps you already are

Besides, who was going to believe that a bald alicorn mare had given him, a lowly journeycolt, her blessing?

In any case, Charter placed a sack of goods on his back, and followed Grimwing down to the Market. He marveled at the sea pony's city, and was curious about what they sold. 'The ocean holds great riches', said mom. What do the sea ponies have for wares? Exotic creatures of the deep? Shells and corals that no pony could reach? Or perhaps magic not seen above the waters? Grimwing's song seemed very appropriate for the cavernous city, it's echo enhancing the weighty history of the place.

But the calm was shattered when the Scholar noticed a shadow at the corner of his eye. He stopped and turned around, but found nothing at first. But in the shadow of an alley, he saw The Face again. Gasping, he stepped back, but the sight was gone. Shaking his head, Charter continued to follow the sailors to the market.

"Hey Grimwing, when we get done, I need to tell you something," he said. "It's about Lord Wave, and his sister Sliver Sweeper."
Did a bit of changing in my new post, but nothing really major. Just thought Tail would probably want to warn any pony handling her hidden claws.
Dancer took the weapons from her wings, allowing Snow Tail to remove the coat and armor. "Hold these gauntlets on the open end, and never touch the hoof end," said Tail as she lay the armor on the ground.

"Why," asked Dancer.

"Because those gauntlets are a special weapon, and I don't want you to injure yourself on accident."

Soon the mercenary stood in the bright sun bereft of any clothing. She wasn't embarrassed, but she did feel a bit nude - A solider without armor tended to feel that way. "Kind of nice, though, to finally feel the wind," she said to herself. The Scholar set the weapons and belongings on the coat, which was on the driest spot nearby. Dancer continued her examination, noting a few bruises and scrapes on the legs and wings. But all seemed well. Torrential introduced himself.

Meanwhile, Tail face began to blush when Torrential mentioned Patty. "No apology necessary - my mind was a bit dazed. For a moment I thought you were a good friend of mine. Your eyes they remind me of him," she said. Dancer smiled at Torrential's manners. A true gentlepony if there ever was one she thought.

But when Tail saw his horn, she became fearful. But it was not fear of some enemy, but the fear of obedience that took her. And the anxiety of dealing with a force beyond her power. She bowed down into the mud, an act Tail would have avoided any other moment. "You're of the Lady's kin!", she said.

Dancer was rather surprised at the remark, trying to figure out what Tail was here for. But then the mercenary began to speak: "Oh great one, I and my company has sworn fealty to Sliver Sweeper, Chambermaid of the Third Verse. She of the azure tail, the grey coat that shines due to her power, and the mark of four gold rings. With our lives will serve the Lady in her endeavors."

The Oath! It's the similar to the one I swore the day I was received her blessing , thought Dancer.

Tail continued. "In addition, we took an oath to aid the Lady Sweeper's kin when called for. We shall not take up arms, nor allow any harm to come to the alicorns. We are yours to command. This we have sworn." There was some silence, before Tail raised her head up to look into Torrential's eyes. "I guess that sort of answers your question, Lord Torrential. I don't normally work with the Scholars, but I answer to the same big boss Star Dancer does."
Hmmm, the more I think about it, the more I feel I should shorten my recent entry regarding Star Dancer, so Torrential can get some input.

Edit: The original idea was to get Snow Tail to introduce herself as not to bog down the story, but I fear I'm going too fast.
Bright_Ops said
Not my longest post, but its there.


Sweet. Sometimes brevity is the way to go.

I got my response up. Ponytinus is the ponified version of the philosopher Plotinus. The quotes that Tail and Dancer use are from one of Plotinus' Enneads.
Snow Tail eyes seemed to focus as a shadow descended upon her. When the world appear to finally steady, she beheld a titian of a pony standing above her. He was clad in a coat and hat, his eyes seemed to be concerned for her. For some reason they reminded her of a friend.

"Oh hi Patty," she said. "How are did you get here?" But the sight of an orange and golden mane pegasus was soon replaced with the visage of Torrential.

She heard another voice, younger and female. "I have some First Aid experience, but I'm not a nurse or anything."

"Oh yeah, I fell…", muttered the mercenary. All she recalled was that she decided to head up into the sky for a better vantage point. Then there was a blinding orange light, a fall into a corkscrew, and then the ground. "Let me see… legs, tail, hooves, head, wings…" as she said these, Tail moved the corresponding parts a bit. "Eh, nothing broken, I think… 'cept my ass."

"Hold still," said the other girl. She came into view, a pegasus mare clad in a Scholar's cloak. Dancer began to scan the fallen Tail with a keen eye. She noted the sheathed wingblades and the leather gauntlets. She silently indicated them to Torrential, just to warn him. Under her weathered coat and saddlebags was chain mail designed for pegasi. It was unadorned but for a single patch on the peytral - it was a crest of a falcon with a hammer and sword.

"A mercenary, but I don't know which unit…" said Dancer. ", and much to my surprise you're not injured seriously beyond some bruising."

"Of course, it's not the first time I haven't fallen in the sky. After the first couple crashes, a learned how to land properly," she grinned. "In a battle, one afford to be seriously hurt." Her wits began to return, and then Tail recognized who she was talking to. "You wouldn't happen to be Star Dancer, Master Scholar?"

Dancer looked alert and took a step back. "Who wants to know?"

"Well, Gildenstern and Dean Iron Spoke, for one. 'Even beauty would seem to have a power of its own. Does this apply to triangularity?', " said the trooper. She stood up a bit wearily.

Dancer relaxed and replied, " 'Perhaps, after all, it is not a power we must consider, but a disposition… Rough and smooth, tenuous and dense may rightly be classed as qualities' "

"So you are Star Dancer," said Tail. "Though your order needs to find a better way of using passphrases. Ponytinus may not be as read as much these days, but it's not like he's forgotten."

Dancer then nodded, "And you're a messenger from the Director, as you answered the passphrase properly. I'm surprised you know of the philosopher. Didn't think soldiers would care for it."

"My boss' mother was a professor, and she tends to quote the stuff. Out of curiosity, I read up on some of them. Not as much as I like, but enough to know the major classics." She dropped the saddlebag. "Name's Snow Tail, Lieutenant, Joy's Legion. Take my wingblades so I can remove my coat and armor. You're not going to examine me well with them on. And who is this gentlestallion?"
Scroll was a bit worried in how Sweeper and Winterjet were getting along. Namely that the pegasus was clearly didn't want to, while the alicorn was trying too hard. He grimaced at Sweeper being too keen on giving Winterjet a haircut. He knew the Lady's abilities - she had turned the worse manes into works of art. But ponies, mares and stallions alike, tended to be sensitive about their manes. And he could only guess that poor 'Jet was frightened by the idea.

But Sweeper took a step back, and the Scholar relaxed. Crisis averted , he thought. Though… I think i'd let Winterjet cool off, or at least until her doom stare settles down. He liked the pegasus, though only as a friend. Romance was not on his mind right now - that was focused back on Arcon and Amiferia. He awaited their questions.

Meanwhile, Sweeper began to stare and examine Summer Winds. "Oh my… your armor needs work. Hold still while I work on the barding," Setting down the braid, the alicorn worked her restorative magic on the armor. Metal began to shine brightly again, edges began to become restored, and scratches began to fade. Soon it was like new.
Loved Winterjet's reaction, and rather surprised - you'd think she wouldn't be so fearful of the silly looking alicorn.
EldritchOne said
What double post? I can only see one.


I edited the double post to it's current message, so that way it doesn't look distracting and to ask advice on it.
(Ack double post. Who do I PM to get rid of this?)
Ok, I posted a reply to Winterjet in Sweeper's branch of the story as well as Dancer's thoughts. I can always change or modify the placement of Sweeper's response when Monochromatic Rainbow gets a chance to post. I am so curious to see how Summer Winds reacts :D

In any case, i don't think there's going to be any major changes - it's just Sweeper being Sweeper again.
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