The Red Zephyr

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You act like I don't know I work in hell. We make jokes all the time.

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Oh I'm not forcing anyone to choose anything. I am just not okay with criticizing us for wanting to be able to read peoples' posts. And if you are gonna do it don't be whiny about it. If you don't like our style, don't join or deal with it.

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gamer5 said
I said that I am thinking about it. If I will have enough time for three or four active RPs at the same time I will probably do so. Unfortunatly the REQUIRED grammar level of posts in this RP is one thing that makes me want to post less in it. So when I get the time I will rework my sample and start posting IC posts after getting an all clear, but since I need to keep the posts up to the REQUIRED grammar level I will need quite some time to make one, after all the level of grammar REQUIRED means that I have to open Word, write the basic draft, run the autospell check, then manually recheck the thing one-three times and then post it. It is worse then writting a story for a English homework and takes quite some time to do ...So if I have chose between three Casual RPs with medium-time consuming post and a single one which posting takes as those three together I will chose the first, except if the second has a setting which really hits my roleplaying switch. So it all depend on how many RPs I will able to join or make before redoing the Sample for this RP.

So... Go to hell. That's really all I have to say.

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No I have three moods: Indifferent, discouraged, and livid.

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Stitches said
Uh...what's manual production technique?EDIT: Wouldn't Erebus' tea just taste like hot water? xD That's why Chiharu is a chef, I'm sure she'll ask for the tea-bag to make hers stronger and accidentally -make- tea.Anyways, I've got to stop writing stupidly long posts. :< That one was longer than my last one. Skylar, I briefly mentioned you, hopefully once the Lotus Warriors get their stuff together they can go around trying to recruit Justin and Claus. But either way, Kiyomi's got her eyes on Claus, because she thinks he just summoned a hella big war machine because he's in a game now, and that's pretty awesome.

Yknow, where they figure out if a chef makes food without the menu, it tastes like food? It wouldn't taste like water because of that. Crescent burgers=Lotus tea

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yes

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BBeast said
Of course, it would be very difficult to make a case for how such a thing could actually be practical. I think it may be easiest to just say that it works successfully because it does and we can leave it at that.That means you can get to posting. Our activity has been slowing down, so we would all be pleased to have you join the action.

If Skai accepts. I'm still "no" and Kish is "yes"

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Didn't play the game, but it says Attack on Titan, so it automatically gets a thumbs up.

And Gamer, It's not so much about repeated edits to make a sample better, but being able to consistently provide quality posts. A sample should give a good indication of your general writing capability, not your best after several edits. We don't expect perfection, just something that isn't a chore to read.\

gamer5 said
BTW. Skai said yes via PM.

Also Zephyr I do not know which CS did you refer all time since I made regular changes to the one on the Character Sheet Thread. I was wondering if your opinion is about my original CS or the latest version of the one in the CS Thread. Just curious.

As for your comment BB.

1. I work under assumption that such technologies (railguns and lasers) or similar enough ones have been developed in this setting, which is more technologically advanced then Earth, for civilian needs like magnetically accelerated elevators, laser-driven fusion reactors and so on.

The amount of inventions (by inventions I mean patents) one person on or a team makes varies greatly. Sometimes one team can make tens of patents in a single year while the next year they will make none. Accidental inspirations and breakthroughs are also possible, for example penicillin was found by pure confidence. Also a team working on multiple projects is also not uncommon.

MEAR was primarily used well established technologies in uncommon uses (like for example a laser used like a Personal Defense Weapon) so their primary problems were how to make reliable, effective and adequately well designed inventions which cloud be sold to potential customers. That is why they were made out of 3 engineers/mechanics and a designer. That means that in the 5-6 years of it's existed it cloud have, being realistic, made anywhere between 5 and 50 patents on its own.

2. Blaze's Light Core creates the laser DIRECTLY which results in a quite small heat strain on the gun itself (since the beam doesn't touch any part of the gun). On the other hand this makes the beam unfocused and ineffective against armored targets. This was in mind since the Blaze was meant to be a Personal Defense Weapon as well as an emergency tool to clean vegetation or light fires. If it were to be focused then the heat strain would be large and would require a cooling system but would be able to cut trough most materials with ease. As it is currently the Blaze is not strong enough to quickly melt away thicker iron plating, not to talk about steel; actually an enough big and thick iron plate with air cooling would be able to stop Blaze from affecting it at all.

3. Diamond-tipped drills and blades are some of the strongest tools widely in commercial use and are used in a variety of forms, from small drills/blades used to cut trough hard rock or metals, over large diamond-tipped blades used to cut some of the sturdiest rocks know to man to the deep-mining diamond-tipped drills which can reach well into depths of over 10 kilometers into the Earth. Diamond is the sturdiest naturally occurring mineral and a stream of diamond dust at a speed of around 100 km/h would be one of the best weapon/tools that you cloud wish for (note that at 100 km/h even the quite fragile CD can easily cut trough a human neck). Also it forms an arch so your statement about its con is not entirely true.

If you post like this regularly, I'm all for accepting you. However on point #2 some part of the gun would need to make the light core focus, since it's a "Light core" that predictably projects "light". What would make all the Light go in one direction in a focused beam (VERY focused in order to make it effective).

Sage said
Considering the fact that I've established the presence and dominance of third tier elements within our plane, I'm going to have to state that diamond dust won't be the most powerful weapon available. I understand your character lacks a kage, and thus, you deserve more power from external sources, but skill in swordplay is much more of a fair choice than swinging around god's dick. Keep it moderated, and you fine, tho. No worries.

Not totally sure I agree with this, since this is a story, not just a written battle royale of powerful characters. There will be plenty of enemies along the way that aren't OP kage hosts requiring special weapons to fight. Sometimes out-thinking an opponent is better than overpowering them, and sometimes surviving is a victory of it's own. I do agree with the "god's dick" comment though: an idiot with a gun is still an idiot, no matter how big or fancy the gun.

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Stitches said
Hm, looking at the OP...wouldn't it be much better if we did this in an "alternate universe" style to avoid using the canon story? We'd have a lot more things to play around with if Shiro and the others weren't a main part of the story, like they are in the anime.

Yes.

By the way I'm still here and stuffs, I'm just busy. I will put a CS up at some point.

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Btw Page of Mind. Thats me.

And Heir of luck isn't a thing: It would be Heir of Light, since Light is the aspect of luck.