@ArisenMoon Excellent, did you have any plans of how to introduce your character to the story? Reaper may have already given you one if you like the sound of raiding Dyril's trade route?
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@Klomster The battle of hymns could be against the Vogani but it would take place on their own continent. The siege would be a mixed bunch of rebel slaves.
This is what I am basing the Sa Yuta off:
The Fu are short (just shorter than half a human) with completely white and wrinkled skin. They have long curved ears and their hair tends to be shoulder length. Though they are still a WIP that is the basics about their appearance.
And the forsaken are *error*
This is what I am basing the Sa Yuta off:
The Fu are short (just shorter than half a human) with completely white and wrinkled skin. They have long curved ears and their hair tends to be shoulder length. Though they are still a WIP that is the basics about their appearance.
And the forsaken are *error*
@Klomster Here is the list:
Humans - Self explainatory
Elves - On reference sheet
Avem - Bird species currently ruled by the elves details on reference sheet
Mao - Feline species ruled by elves WIP (though details can be found on reapers CS)
Vogani - Reptile tribal race, at war with the elves, WIP
Sa Yuta (acciently called them Caelites) - The only species that rivals the elves in terms of power, WIP
Fu - Only a few hundred, incredibly gifted in magic and ruled by the elves, WIP
The Forsaken - ...
Humans - Self explainatory
Elves - On reference sheet
Avem - Bird species currently ruled by the elves details on reference sheet
Mao - Feline species ruled by elves WIP (though details can be found on reapers CS)
Vogani - Reptile tribal race, at war with the elves, WIP
Sa Yuta (acciently called them Caelites) - The only species that rivals the elves in terms of power, WIP
Fu - Only a few hundred, incredibly gifted in magic and ruled by the elves, WIP
The Forsaken - ...
@Klomster Krypola is a good name. It would have been taken via a slave uprising given the Mao, Fu and Avem have all been conquered by the elves, the Vogani are currently on the defensive, the forsaken are..., and the Caelites and Humans are not at war with the Elves.
In in there I have named all the sentient species of our world.
In in there I have named all the sentient species of our world.
@Klomster Well it would be nice but you don't have to. As long as if everyone knows from here on out.
@ArisenMoon Glad you joined us
A few edits are needed:
Firstly it is very unlikely that Deliverance (a small island) has a city let alone several. Bear in mind Formaroth is a continent and it only has 5 cities. Giving the setting most people would live in hamlets, villages and towns. The capital of Deliverance would most likely be a castle with a town surrounding it or something similar.
Going by the lore it is more likely that Antherion was defeated and banished by the Remomnnets (original rulers of Formaroth) after they finished conquering Formaroth (note this happened 500 years ago)
This is fine as it's not to far fetched to believe Antherion was related to the Remomnnets, but you should know that most people won't see it as a valid claim in Formaroth as they view the bloodline to be sullied.
Also here is an idea: Formaroth is mostly protected from pirate attacks from the east by the kingdom of Akki. As a result House Antherion would likely raid the Elven Imperium and Seikatsu. This could also be another reason why there is a lack of trade between The Imperium and Formaroth due to the fact there is a high risk they will be raid by house Antherion. @Fallenreaper You could make a mention to this in your intro post.
Now that war has broken out and House Neptuna (rulers of Akki) have sided with the alliance House Antherion will be able to raid Formaroth again, should they wish.
A few edits are needed:
Firstly it is very unlikely that Deliverance (a small island) has a city let alone several. Bear in mind Formaroth is a continent and it only has 5 cities. Giving the setting most people would live in hamlets, villages and towns. The capital of Deliverance would most likely be a castle with a town surrounding it or something similar.
Going by the lore it is more likely that Antherion was defeated and banished by the Remomnnets (original rulers of Formaroth) after they finished conquering Formaroth (note this happened 500 years ago)
Claim to the Throne: House Antherion has ties to royal blood from their founder, Prince Antherion the Forsaken. They see their lineage as one of the few pure blood lines left, however over the years, this drive to see their descendants on the throne has diminished. Now, more and more, House Antherion has turned to their roots as pirates and raiders.
This is fine as it's not to far fetched to believe Antherion was related to the Remomnnets, but you should know that most people won't see it as a valid claim in Formaroth as they view the bloodline to be sullied.
Also here is an idea: Formaroth is mostly protected from pirate attacks from the east by the kingdom of Akki. As a result House Antherion would likely raid the Elven Imperium and Seikatsu. This could also be another reason why there is a lack of trade between The Imperium and Formaroth due to the fact there is a high risk they will be raid by house Antherion. @Fallenreaper You could make a mention to this in your intro post.
Now that war has broken out and House Neptuna (rulers of Akki) have sided with the alliance House Antherion will be able to raid Formaroth again, should they wish.
@The Wyrm Good post, though one edit is needed: Formaroth is home to the best strongholds and fortresses in the world, and Clarm is considered one of the best strongholds ever built. It would not be regarded as 'crude' or 'children's toys'. If anything the grim company would be in awe of the fortress, particularly given most of the grim company is from Seikatsu where even the best castles are made from wood.
Also one more small point for everyone to take note; Clarm is not a city. It is a stronghold with a walled town at the bottom (called wellstone). Though it is a large town is a defiantly not a city.
Also one more small point for everyone to take note; Clarm is not a city. It is a stronghold with a walled town at the bottom (called wellstone). Though it is a large town is a defiantly not a city.
@Fallenreaper You can help Alicja with getting her sister out. Who knows perhaps she could act as a distraction, after all a half elf from the Imperium would be a rare guest.
It wasn't actually, though admittedly Dyril and Kiseo are the most fantasy based characters in the story. Though I don't mind at all given that Fantasy elements in Formaroth have gratefully become more central as the story has gone on meaning that Dyril and Kiseo's appearances fit in quite well at the moment.
Lol, I feel like that was a poke at me! :P
It wasn't actually, though admittedly Dyril and Kiseo are the most fantasy based characters in the story. Though I don't mind at all given that Fantasy elements in Formaroth have gratefully become more central as the story has gone on meaning that Dyril and Kiseo's appearances fit in quite well at the moment.
@Wraithblade6 Certainly, just checking whether I will need to add you to the battle PM.
@Klomster Well it was a bit hollywood, but TBF Formaroth has the habit of blending realism with fantasy exaggeration, I mean this is a world of magic, elves and cat people so don't worry it was fine. When people are around Claus's level of fighting skill it's OK to go a bit hollywood as it demonstrates how powerful they are.
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