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Welcome to the RP!!! ^-^ Nice to have another newbie.


Thank you. My character and House sheet are done. Who will generally approve that?
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@The Wyrm Currently Andrew is trying to take the stronghold of Clarm before the imperial army arrives. When lady grim arrives she will arrive to see a heavily besieged stronghold surrounded by tens of thousands of soldiers. From there she will request to see Lord Manshrew, from there your collab can start. After lady grim has allied herself with the alliance she will take part in the battle of Telmarion between the alliance and the concord. I will send you a collab entailing all the details once I know who else may be taking part in the battle @Wraithblade6 will you be joining the battle of Telmarion?


Ooooooooo now you tell me....
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Ooooooooo now you tell me....


*pats* It's alright, the IC was still nice to read. <3
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@The Wyrm Good post, though one edit is needed: Formaroth is home to the best strongholds and fortresses in the world, and Clarm is considered one of the best strongholds ever built. It would not be regarded as 'crude' or 'children's toys'. If anything the grim company would be in awe of the fortress, particularly given most of the grim company is from Seikatsu where even the best castles are made from wood.

Also one more small point for everyone to take note; Clarm is not a city. It is a stronghold with a walled town at the bottom (called wellstone). Though it is a large town is a defiantly not a city.


Got it, i will edit my post.
Don't want continuity errors do we.

Or perhaps both i and Andrew have referred to it so much as a city it's too much of a hazzle.
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@ArisenMoon Glad you joined us

A few edits are needed:

Firstly it is very unlikely that Deliverance (a small island) has a city let alone several. Bear in mind Formaroth is a continent and it only has 5 cities. Giving the setting most people would live in hamlets, villages and towns. The capital of Deliverance would most likely be a castle with a town surrounding it or something similar.

Going by the lore it is more likely that Antherion was defeated and banished by the Remomnnets (original rulers of Formaroth) after they finished conquering Formaroth (note this happened 500 years ago)

Claim to the Throne: House Antherion has ties to royal blood from their founder, Prince Antherion the Forsaken. They see their lineage as one of the few pure blood lines left, however over the years, this drive to see their descendants on the throne has diminished. Now, more and more, House Antherion has turned to their roots as pirates and raiders.


This is fine as it's not to far fetched to believe Antherion was related to the Remomnnets, but you should know that most people won't see it as a valid claim in Formaroth as they view the bloodline to be sullied.

Also here is an idea: Formaroth is mostly protected from pirate attacks from the east by the kingdom of Akki. As a result House Antherion would likely raid the Elven Imperium and Seikatsu. This could also be another reason why there is a lack of trade between The Imperium and Formaroth due to the fact there is a high risk they will be raid by house Antherion. @Fallenreaper You could make a mention to this in your intro post.

Now that war has broken out and House Neptuna (rulers of Akki) have sided with the alliance House Antherion will be able to raid Formaroth again, should they wish.
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@Klomster Well it would be nice but you don't have to. As long as if everyone knows from here on out.
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I fixed my last post, i dunno with the posts before that one but at least that one is correct now.

Also @TheDuncanMorgan any idea who the guys at Krypola was? Should i have it as an elven city taken by elven slaves, or as some lizardmen or mao or Caelites or something?
If it come up in play i'd like to have it decided beforehand.
Is Krypola a good elven name?

Also, dang.
The Antherions are ruthless bastards. I like it.
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@Klomster Krypola is a good name. It would have been taken via a slave uprising given the Mao, Fu and Avem have all been conquered by the elves, the Vogani are currently on the defensive, the forsaken are..., and the Caelites and Humans are not at war with the Elves.

In in there I have named all the sentient species of our world.
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@Klomster Krypola is a good name. It would have been taken via a slave uprising given the Mao, Fu and Avem have all been conquered by the elves, the Vogani are currently on the defensive, the forsaken are..., and the Caelites and Humans are not at war with the Elves.

In in there I have named all the sentient species of our world.


Wait, who are the Fu and Vogani?

I also realised i've not been subscribed to the correct reference sheet. No wonder i've missed some things.
Also, i'll need to refer to the Caelites as Avem in this thread. I've played too much dominons 4. Or perhaps to little. Eh, only 534 hours so far.

Regardless.
Depending on who the Fu and Vogani are it could be those i've fought in some of the backstory.
But you think Krypola should be an elven fortress taken in a slave uprising?
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@Klomster Here is the list:

Humans - Self explainatory
Elves - On reference sheet
Avem - Bird species currently ruled by the elves details on reference sheet
Mao - Feline species ruled by elves WIP (though details can be found on reapers CS)
Vogani - Reptile tribal race, at war with the elves, WIP
Sa Yuta (acciently called them Caelites) - The only species that rivals the elves in terms of power, WIP
Fu - Only a few hundred, incredibly gifted in magic and ruled by the elves, WIP
The Forsaken - ...
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So, could the battle of hymns be against the Vogani?

And the siege of Krypola a mixed bunch?
Or should they both be Vogani?

So what are the Sa Yuta and Fu like physically?
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@Klomster The battle of hymns could be against the Vogani but it would take place on their own continent. The siege would be a mixed bunch of rebel slaves.

This is what I am basing the Sa Yuta off:


The Fu are short (just shorter than half a human) with completely white and wrinkled skin. They have long curved ears and their hair tends to be shoulder length. Though they are still a WIP that is the basics about their appearance.

And the forsaken are *error*
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There, i've done some changes in the timeline.

The Battle of Hymns was against Vogani in their homelands.
The siege of Krypola was against a massive slave rebellion.
The battle of shrooms are against a group of elves who thought they could leave the empire. The fools. (Like it was before.)

Claus probably know of the Sa yuta and Avem.
He has fought against the Vogani and been around Mao so he knows those very well, as well as elves.
However the Fu are probably unknown to him.

As for the forsaken, i think t̼̺̞̱̦̞̣̜͕̦͕̳̪͟͢͠h̘͍̯͉͕͠é̶̢̧̬̳͓͙̠̰͔̗̰͘ ̵̛̟̩̮̫̀͜f̶̸̡̛̞̤̲̼̲̗͚̟̲̗̝͕̪̣ǫ̺̣̥̺̲̼̬̩̼̫̤͚̝̜̬̯͢͞ṛ̵̷̞̰̱̲̹͚͇̞̮̝̩̬̱͇͘͢͝s̡̘͈̖͉͢͝a̴̢͓͚͉̘͕̳̜̝̦͙̱̣̮͚̤͍ͅk̀҉̺͈͚͓̝̖͚̩̝̲͉̼̖̱͔̰̺è̴̙̼̘̱̘̞̭͔͜ͅń̴҉̖͚̣̯̳͠ ͚͔̟̦͚̝̮͓͡͡ḁ̸̛̳̖̣͉̠̪̤̗̜͟͡r͜҉̭͓̲̗͚͉̦͈̺͕̯e̸̸̷̩̹͍͍͎̣͕̲̼̘͠ ̶҉͔̼̬̩ą̷̭̲̙̱̟͍̙͠n̸̵̡̬͚̱͔̞͇̗͢ ̙̺̥̯̗̥͈̩̳͙̭̕į̶̴̧̦͖̱̜̣̮͠ǹ̦͉̣̖̟̝̩͝t͡͏͖̝̟̹̱̻̥̮̖̥̬͎͉̻̖͙͇͚ȩ̀̀͏̤̼͖̭͍̖͓̘̫̹̖̻̪̯͕̳͡r̷̢̜̗̲̘͈̦̖̣̣ę̸̫̱̯͍̙̖͚͚̟̖̯̗̮͉̦̼ş̵̷̣̼̮̞͞t̫̙͓̤͙̖̗̙̦̥̰̣̦̦̤̀̀͠į̷̳̳̯̪͔̩̕͢ͅͅͅǹ̛̰̠̱͇̗͇̣̥̙̥̭̜g͏̶̱̠͕̗͈̳͙͞͞ ̴̶̧̗͕͕̭̮́͜c҉̷͙̱̤̻̲͇̫̪̥͔͖͖͍̗̭̯̘o̡̝̰̠̫͙n̴̴̢͖͖̘͎̞͕̦̬c̷̣̻̞̱̜̯̗͝͞e̫̫̝͇̖̪̭̪̫̯̠͓̮̘̗̠͘͞p̨̻̫̜̞̻̹̟̫̲̮̺̮̦̺̤̺̝̀͜t̵̪͙̲̯̩̻̮̯̯̺͎͈̺̝̦̬͕́̕.̧͓̖̻̳̮̙̬̤͟
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Also here is an idea: Formaroth is mostly protected from pirate attacks from the east by the kingdom of Akki. As a result House Antherion would likely raid the Elven Imperium and Seikatsu. This could also be another reason why there is a lack of trade between The Imperium and Formaroth due to the fact there is a high risk they will be raid by house Antherion. @Fallenreaper You could make a mention to this in your intro post.

Now that war has broken out and House Neptuna (rulers of Akki) have sided with the alliance House Antherion will be able to raid Formaroth again, should they wish.


That humorously crossed my mind when I read the CS and realized: Crap, he's going to raid her trade route isn't he? *rubs hands with Glee at the conflict* This should be interesting...
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I made the changes.
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@ArisenMoon Excellent, did you have any plans of how to introduce your character to the story? Reaper may have already given you one if you like the sound of raiding Dyril's trade route?
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@ArisenMoon Excellent, did you have any plans of how to introduce your character to the story? Reaper may have already given you one if you like the sound of raiding Dyril's trade route?


Every time someone calls me Reaper, it sounds like I want to eat souls! That's a secret, shhh! XD I prefer Fallen to Reaper, please.
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Might do the raid idea, ya. Nothing else really comes to mind.
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Might do the raid idea, ya. Nothing else really comes to mind.


Hehee, have an idea and will pm it to you. ;) Oh gods, I really need to stop tormenting my PCs....
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Hehee, have an idea and will pm it to you. ;) Oh gods, I really need to stop tormenting my PCs....


But do you really? :P
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