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Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

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Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

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Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Name: Banshii Aburu
Nickname/Alias: None Yet
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 13; 23 August
Age Appearance: Early Teens
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents:
Father - Dona Garu
Mother - (Unknown)
Length and build: 5'5; Athletic Build
Weight: 125lbs
Favorite weather and season: Cold; Winter



Village: Konohagakure
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Organization:

Clan/Bloodline: Aburu Clan

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature:
Katon(Fire Release)



Appearance:

Banshii looks the part of a normal physically active 13 year old. His shoulder-length hair is usually kept wild and messy, and is a scarlet color. As for his eyes, they are the same unnatural color as his hair, giving him a fierce look. He is brown skinned, and sports a usually emotionless face. On his right cheek is a horizontal scar. His usually outfit is a solid black sleeveless top, with a hood attached. The top has a zipper right in the middle, and it is usually kept unzipped, partially revealing Banshii's chest and stomach. He sports solid black pants that stop just above his ankles. His sandals are black as well(I swear he's not an emo!).

Banshii also wears two crimson colored, fingerless gloves. Strapped to his left thigh is a small tool bag, holding multiple shuriken. Around his waist is another small tool bag, holding multiple explosive tags. His Konoha headband is tied around his right arm; He only wears it around his head during battle.



Personality:

Banshii does not act the same towards everyone. Firstly, he can be labeled as a bit of an introvert to those that he just meets. He likes his space, and taking care of things on his own, but as he gets close to certain people he will not mind them being around, or being around them. Banshii can also be sort of a 'dick' to those around him, even friends. But most of the time, this is done in jest. Banshii cannot be a true asshole to those who he doesn't truly dislike. He also secretly likes to help others, and not because it's the right thing to do, just because the recognition and thanks makes him feel important.

Banshii can be impatient at times, but he can hide it well. When tasked out he will rush his objective, but will still be able to get the job done quite well. He is extremely intelligent and adept though it may take some time to show. It is not wrong to label him as lazy also. Banshii will be the most active person when it comes to becoming stronger, learning techniques, or combating opponents, but when other things arise he might choose to slack off.

Now, being 13, Banshii is growing more and more attracted to females but he does not exactly know how to show it and often gets embarrassed when trying to be nice to one. This causes him to resort to childish teasing, which usually gets him nowhere. But once he gets comfortable around people, he often becomes comic relief which is a positive to some females at least. He often believes the stronger he gets, the more girls will notice him, which can cause him to go overboard at moments.

Lastly when it comes to interacting with those he feels superior too, Banshii will either take on an "experienced mentor" role, or a "I'm too good for you" facade. Some people can just rub him the wrong way from the beginning. When interacting with his superiors, Banshii will show much respect until of course, he gets comfortable. He will still show respect, but will also treat some superiors as friends as well. Superiors that don't gain his respect will often be dismissed by Banshii, and he usually doesn't care for the consequences which leads to more trouble for him



History:

Banshii does not have much of a history, as his journey as a ninja has barely begun. He was born in Konoha 13 years ago, and his birth killed off his mother who was apparently weak from a recent conflict. His father refuses to talk about anything to do with his mother, or the past. All that Banshii currently knows, is that he and his father are the last of his clan. His father won't even give the history of the Aburu clan, and for some reason this is fine with Banshii at the moment. Banshii looks up to his father, as he is quite an accomplished man. He loves to train with him, and does his best to impress him, even if it means bending the truth a bit.

Banshii grew up always knowing he would apply to the ninja academy as soon as he was eligible. For some unknown reason he has always loved the rush of watching others fight, and drama and chaos intrigued him. He hated it when things were calm, and hopes that becoming a ninja and going on missions would eliminate too much peacefulness. Banshii had a strange affliction for conflict.

Theme Song:




Weapons/Items[/u]:
10x Shuriken
15x Explosive Tags



[u]Skills/Abilities
- Banshii has proved to be good at chakra control as a result of extensive training with his father.
- Banshii is able to use long ranged abilities, but he much more prefers to fight an opponent at close range. Because of this, he has tried to learn as much taijutsu as possible from his father, and his body is more adept to it. His reaction times and overall speed and power are above average for a ninja his age.
- His style of combat is called 'Dragon Boxing'. The user fights in a smooth manner, helping to disguise techniques so that counterattacks are extremely difficult. A deep hissing sound is exhibited with each strike to add power and train body control. Inhaling lightens the body for evasion or attacking maneuvers. Banshii has been trained in this technique since being a child, but he has not yet mastered it. Even so, he is adept enough to use it in combat efficiently. The fighting style focuses on mostly tiring opponents out, while providing no openings for the enemy. This technique's main tactic is evasion by twisting the upper and lower torso. The attacks can vary from quick strikes to weak points, or powerful blows to external areas. The body is calm and relaxed, and users leg work exhibits a zig zag motion. When striking, maximum power is exerted when movement originates at the feet, is guided by the waist, flows through the body, and exits through the fist.
- Because of his likeness of close range fighting, Banshii is not as talented when it comes to long range. Even so to the point where his skills at throwing shuriken and kunai are slightly below average.



Special Traits
- Despite outlying conditions, Banshii's body temparature is always higher than normal due to the unlocked potential of his KG. This does not effect him in combat though. Those standing around him are even able to feel the heat his body naturally gives off.

Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai: Entenasahi(Scorching Morning Sun)
Clan: Kanderi Clan(Aburu)
Description:

Entenasahi is a technique widely exhibit by the Kanderi clan many years ago. In modern times, this clan is rarely known by anyone. It is said their power was used abused by others, which led to Banshii's father changing his and his son's last name just in case someone where to recognize the clan name. This is only delaying the inevitable though, as users of this technique usually unlock it when they are teens. In the past, users of Entenasahi were used as weapons for war. The technique was powerful, but it skipped over every other generation. Bashii's grandfather could use this technique, but Bashii's father cannot. This of course means Bashii will find out soon. His father promised to reveal all to him once he unlocks this ability, and he is thought to be the last one to be able to use it.

Entenasahi is a technique that allows the user total control over heat, allowing many possibilities. Users will spend life unusually warm at all times, even while in the cold until the ability is fully unlocked and they train to control it. It is said that the ability will reveal itself once a user is near death. Complete masters of this technique are said to have been able to manipulate heat temperatures to Absolute Hot but Banshii's father and more believe this to be a myth. At it's highest form, users can even absorb the heat from objects, even humans and animals. He can only absorb half the amount of heat from objects and organic beings, able to weaken fire techniques and drop opponent body temperatures to dangerous levels. Heat can only be absorbed from two objects at a time, and must be expelled somehow before more is absorbed.

Users may be able to melt certain items through touch, or even incinerate them causing nothing to be left but ash. At the lowest level metals such as Brass and Copper can be melted, and at the highest level of control, metals such as iron or titanium can even succumb to this melting ability. Upon unlocking the KG, the user will feel something similar to an adrenaline rush, forgetting the pain of any wounds. The skin will begin to turn red and steam will rise from the body. The user's body will heat up to the point where touching others will leave serious burns. This super-heated body allows semi-immunity to fire techniques as the heat of the fire will hardly have any effect against him, while some water techniques may turn into steam before actually even touching them because of the level of heat being emitted. This lasts anywhere between 3 and 5 minutes. In the end, the user will pass out for hours, and their previous wounds will probably have become worse. If medical care isn't administered quickly, the user runs the risk of death. This also will leave the user useless for the next few days because of the foreign strain put on the body.

Users of the Entenasahi have considerably lower lifespans than most others. Living to see 65 is thought to be a miracle. Controlling techniques requires a very large amount of training, and developing control and skill takes many years. Once a user has completely mastered Entenasahi, they will be considerably formidable to any and all foes. There have been only a few, because most users do not live long enough to master such a technique.



Jutsu:

Cannon Jutsu

Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Clone Technique

Custom Jutsu

Custom Jutsu

Name of Technique: Great Salamander Fist
Type of Jutsu: Nintaijutsu
Rank: C
Range: Close
Nature Type: Fire
Handseals: Tiger, Boar
Description: With exceptional chakra control, the user creates flames around either one or both fists, to strike an opponent. A coat of chakra around the users hand prevents them from being burned.
Weakness: With Banshii's current level of control the flames disperse after one punch.

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I'm interested.

One Piece RP: Along For The Ride

G3njii said
We are no longer accepting.@DestinyStern's bounty is a secret to the marines only. None of us know about it.

Just a suggestion but you should edit your OP to specify that you are no longer accepting. It only makes sense.

One Piece RP: Along For The Ride

-Ken wears an official Marine overcoat over his white button down shirt.
-He wears long black pants with white stripes up the sides.
-He wears black boots.
-He will often use a black band to tie his hair up to keep it out of his face during combat.
Username: Torris
Name: Kendane (Goes by "Ken)
Alias: Howling Sonic
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Weight: 165lbs
Height: 5'11
Bio:

Growing up as a young child, Ken always wanted to be a pirate. His father, Kuridane, was a pirate, well known for his witty tactics and intelligence when navigating the dangerous seas, but he wasn't the strongest or most intimidating pirate. Kuridane used his wits to win battles and gain recognition. Ken was promised a spot on his father's crew on his 13th birthday, and in the years leading up to that day he trained himself diligently on the North Blue island of Decome. After many years of pirating the seas, Kuridane had only gained a 11,000,000 bounty on his head. His crew, wanting more fame and power began to slowly turn their collective backs on him. Kuridane was never one to put himself in the spotlight, as he never wanted to be a target. To win back the respect of his crew, he set up a heist of a more notorious pirate crew(the one Eden's mother belonged to). The plan was successful, but it did not win the confidence of his crew back considering Kuridane chose not to share what he had stolen.

On Ken's 13th birthday, his father and crew appeared on the shore of Decome. Ken was finally about to become a pirate, but his day would soon be ruined. Shortly after his father's arrival to Decome, a much larger pirate ship appeared and they were immediately hostile. The foreign pirate crew took Kuridane's crew hostage and demanded he return what was stolen. Kuridane denied his theft of any treasure and tried his best to think himself out of the situation and save his crew, but he was severely outmatched. His crew, fed up to no end decided to betray him. They sold their captain out and even helped to capture and eventually slaughter him in front of Ken and the rest of Ken's village. The pirates that were once loyal to Kuridane slayed him with no remorse, and followed up by burning their former flag while joining the very crew who had taken them hostage. Ken felt powerless, and he was frozen in fear and disbelief. He watched on, helplessly, as his father's ship was ravaged, but ultimately the foreign pirates found nothing. In their fury, they decided to destroy Ken's native village leaving nothing but bodies and ashes. Ken got away, his outlook already permanently shifted. His image of pirates was now wrong and he wanted to see nothing but their destruction. Before the foreign pirate crew that had humiliated his father and destroyed his village had the chance to leave, Ken made sure the faces of the perpatrators were burned into his mind. He would never forget, and he would exact revenge. Once they were out of sight, Ken searched his father's ravaged ship. Kuridane had shared a secret area upon his ship with his son before, and Ken figured the 'treasure' that he had stolen had to be there.

Once Ken made his way to the cabin, he opened a secret compartment that led to a small room. The room contained nothing more but a lone brown bag. When he pulled on the drawstring and peered inside, the contents of the bag shocked him. It was a scarlet colored fruit, shaped like a kiwi. Ken heard the stories but he never actually saw a devil fruit up close or seen it's power. Despite knowing it's weaknesses, Ken wasted no time in devouring the distasteful devil fruit. He had consumed the Dou Dou no Mi.

Ken hastily learned to control his newly acquired abilities. Though he has not yet reached it's full power, he is quite proficient with it. Ken thought the best way to defend his father and wipe the world of the pirate scum was to join the fight against them. Quickly, Ken joined the Marines and moved up to the rank of Commander. He has shown more than enough wisdom and capabilities to earn this rank even at age 18. His own goal is to at sometime become an Admiral and do all he can to wipe out the pirate population. At the moment, Ken is in control of his own ship. He holds command over about 30 Marines. He is currently in East Blue, on the hunt for any notorious pirates, still with vengeance on his mind.

Crew Position: Marine Ranked Commander
Bounty: N/A
Equipment:
- Two pistols, both in leather holsters on either side of his hips.
- Whistling Gloves - Double layered, crimson red gloves with different sized holes located through both gloves. These gloves are made of a special material that amplifies Ken's physical and long range abilities. When moving his hands, these gloves emit a sharp whistling sound.

Abilities(Fighting Abilities):

Dou Dou no Mi (Sound Sound Fruit) - This devil fruit is a small single red fruit, in the shape of a kiwi. It is a Paramecia type devil fruit, giving the user the ability to manipulate sound and sound waves in many different ways. Ken has learned fairly quickly, and is currently beginning to take his control over the Dou Dou Fruit to the next level. It has greatly attributed to his fast rising in the ranks of the Marines.

Dou Dou no Mi Abilities

Hush and Intensify: Ken has mastered the ability to intensify certain sound waves, or hush them. An example being he can dispatch his voice to extremely far distances so that a large amount of people can hear him, even from miles away. When hushing sound waves, he can either lower the volume of certain sounds or completely disperse to the point where he can make a person seem mute. This is very useful in confusing multiple enemies so that they cannot communicate through sound, or concealing his own sound emissions for stealth.

Sonic Eruption: Ken manipulates sound and converts it into a powerful physical force in the form of a shock wave to use when punching or kicking. Thanks to the whistling gloves, this technique is far greater when he is punching, but it is still very powerful when used when kicking. The sheer force behind this technique can send the larges enemies flying away with great damage. When looking at Ken, he may not seem like the most physically powerful but this technique at least gives the image of incredible strength. When this technique lands it usually makes the sound of a small explosion.

Sonic Mimic: Ken has the simple ability to perfectly mimic any voice or sound he has heard. It is quite useful in trying to confuse enemies.

Sonic Torpedo: Ken converts sound waves into a physical force beneath his feet to launch in a certain direction at incredible speeds. Can also be used mid-air.

Sonic Shot: Ken's long ranged attack. Sonic Shot is a shock wave can be emitted from his mouth, hands, or feet as a destructive physical force. Since it is sound, the attack itself is invisible but the whistling sound it creates while traveling allows opponents to gauge how close the attack is and take action accordingly.

Sonic Splitter: Ken is able to create vibrations around certain objects to greatly increase their sharpness and cutting power.

Sonic Expansion: This technique is a powerful defensive technique where Ken releases a sonic shock wave 360 degrees around his body to deflect or block oncoming assaults.

Sonic Emission: This is currently Ken's most destructive attack. He is only reluctant to use it when there are innocent people or comrades around. Sonic Emission allows Ken to release a deafening sound of high amplitude in the form of a scream. This ability is strong enough to cause a great amount of damage to nearby structures while blasting targets away with superior power. At the very least the ability will leave those that are directly involved with a ringing sound in their ears as well as temporary, partial deafness.

Unique Skills:
- Ken is incredibly efficient in a fighting style centered around defense, and countering opponents with quick strikes. It is a smooth fighting style that uses the opponents momentum against them. He calls it the Eagles Claw.
- Ken can also use a pistol or sword very efficiently in combat, and even switch between the two effortlessly. He is also quite handy at reading maps.
- His real weapon is his mind. Ken is known to be one of the best young strategists in the Marines.
Weaknesses:
- Normal devil fruit weaknesses.
- Known to accidentally hurt comrades in combat, or destroy nearby structures without total control over his destructive capabilities.
Other: Is a strong believer in Absolute Justice.
- Ken is basically addicted to sunflower seeds. He never goes around without carrying a large bag of them on his person and eating them throughout each day. Usually calm, he will begin to become enraged and uneasy if without his seeds for too long.