Torris

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Any village/team in need of another genin? I'm planning on making another character.

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Name: Kou Giwa
Nickname/Alias:
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 13, 23 August
Age Appearance: Early Teens
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents: Jiya Giwa and Zen Namikaze
Length and build: 66 inches(167cm); Athletic build
Weight: 147lbs(67kgs)
Favorite weather and season: Warm; Autumn



Village: Konoha
Birthplace: Konoha
Organization: N/A

Clan/Bloodline: Giwa/Namikaze

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Fuuton, Doton - (has no knowledge of his elemental affinities yet and won't for a while; will unlock wind a while later...)



Appearance:
Kou has spiky black hair that reaches his shoulders. Down the middle of his hair is a silver streak of hair that grows that way naturally. He has thick eyebrows(not like Guy/Lee). His eyes are both gray, and there is a horizontal scar under his right eye. He often wears a gray sleeveless hoodie. Both of his forearms are wrapped in white bandages. He wears black pants, and black sandals. On both hands are black fingerless combat gloves. He wears his Konoha headband loosely around his neck.



Personality:
Kou doesn't really have the best personality to gain popularity or friends. His mouth has no filter and he acts like he doesn't care about others' feelings. He often has dark thoughts due to an incident his witnessed while younger. Other people around him tend to annoy him quite easily. He very much enjoys his personal space, and hates anyone who enters it uninvited. He is also a bit paranoid, refusing to trust those around him no matter what. Kou can be described as emotionless. He has never killed another human, but he thinks about it a lot and feels that once he finally does he will love it. He's kinda screwed up.

Despite his number of troubling traits, Kou is incredibly tactful, and carries a good amount of knowledge about things he is interested in. In his free time he is either training or reading. He can come up with ideas or tactics on the fly and conceal his objectives from his opponent to give himself the upperhand in battle. Kou's self awareness is pretty high, and his mind is always being fed with new information. He remembers the tiniest things.



History:
Jiya and Zen, Kou's mother and father met in Konoha. Jiya was born into the Giwa Clan. The Giwa Clan was a small clan located near Konoha in their own small settlement. They specialized in forging and using many different types of weapons. Having little interest in weaponry, Jiya moved to Konoha once she turned eighteen and worked in a supply store until she could save enough money to open up her own clothing shop. Zen was born into the Namikaze Clan, a clan specializing in kekkai ninjutsu, as well as fuinjutsu. Zen was also not born in Konoha, but moved there when he was younger so that he could train to become a shinobi at the ninja academy. He met Jiya while he was a Chunin, and started dating her soon after. By the time Zen had become a Jonin, he and Jiya were married, and soon had Kou. Kou was often hard to control as a child. He would wander off and find new ways to get into trouble, but his father often bailed him out. Kou had a strong desire to be like both his parents. When he wasn't getting in trouble he would be training with his father if possible, and gathering information about his family history from both his parents. Kou had already decided to follow in his father's footsteps at a young age and join the ninja academy, so training with his father was largely important to him. He would go back to his mother's old home and meet with his family from his mother's side. They would teach him about the different weapons they made, and how they made and used them.

When Kou wasn't training with his father, he was with his uncle, his mother's brother, training with various weaponry. And he also found time to travel to his father's homeland to learn about the techniques they employed in battle soaking up the information and knowledge like a sponge. Kou could hardly wait until he was eligible to join the ninja academy. He would often sneak off to go and train by himself. When he did this in Konoha, his parents did not care much as there wasn't much danger right outside of the gate, but anytime he traveled to his father's home, they would forbid him from going into the woods during the night. There was nothing but trouble for him. Kou, being the hardhead that he is, had learned of a new technique and he couldn't wait to try it out for the first time. Instead of waiting until daybreak, Kou went out in the middle of the night figuring if something came for him he would be able to kill it. His cockiness quickly proved to be deadly, as a group of ruthless bandits paraded the woods, stumbling across a young Kou. Kou opted to stand his ground instead of running and was easily caught. THe sun rose, and his parents quickly discovered that he was missing. Zen wasted no time leaving to search for the boy while Jiya worried helplessly. Following a trail of struggle in the woods, Zen appeared before the hideout of the bandits. Zen easily broke through, killing the guards with no remorse. He entered the hideout and quickly came across Kou being held captive. The bandit leader appeared before the shinobi demanding an impossible ransom once he found out that Kou was his child. Zen swiftly refused and the bandit leader pulled out a kunai, throwing it in the direction of Kou. The kunai was thrown skillfully, only managing to leave a cut under one of Kou's eyes. The bandit leader had thrown it purposely to spook Zen, and it barely worked. Zen instantly identified the bandit leader as an old Konoha shinobi who had been banished from the village a long time ago, and he remembered that he was no slouch. In a remarkable display of speed and wit, Zen managed to apply a barrier around Kou while taking out a few bandits in the area. Enranged, the bandit leader called on the rest of his subordinated to attack Zen while also going after Kou's father himself. Zen masterfully killed bandit after bandit ruthlessly. They had his son, and threatened his life. Zen would not let anyone live. Kou stared on in disbelief at the amount of bloodshed his father was causing. Zen had never fought with such darkness in his eyes. The bandits' hideout was painted red. Zen tired himself out, and it was only him and the bandit leader left. Zen in a normal setting would have been able to dispatch of this man with no issues but he had foolishly tired himself out with his last onslaught of the lesser bandits. The bandit leader sensed this and a battle to the death ensued. Zen went toe to toe with the bandit leader, neither gaining ground. Kou looked on, eyes wide, without a word escaping his mouth.

A shadow appaered in the entrance of the hideout and Kou quickly recognized his mother. Why did she have to come? That was the question that haunted Kou for the rest of his life. When catching wind of his shocked mother, Kou yelled out her name. Zen, hearing the name of his wife, turned from the battle in disbelief at her presence. Seeing an opening, the bandit leader delivered a fatal blow to Zen, leaving Jiya to shriek in horror. The bandit leader began to smirk and began walking towards Kou's mother, hoping to kill her in revenge for the trouble that Zen had caused. Kou screamed for her to run, but Jiya's body was frozen. Not yet dead, Zen intervened, evening the score. The bandit leader fell to his knees, slowly turning around to see that he had been impaled through the heart with a sharp object by a half-dead Zen. Both men fell to their deaths moments later, leaving a gruesome scene for a mother and her nine year old son. This was the incident that shaped Kou today. His mother blamed herself for her husband's death, and Kou blamed himself for everything. His mother begged Kou never to bring up becoming a ninja again, or even trying to practice any techniques but he refused, and the day that he became eligible to apply, she hung herself leaving Kou to come back home to the sight of her lifeless body. This event further shaped his derailment from normal actions or thoughts. Kou still decided to become a shinobi

Theme Song:



Weapons/Items[u][/u]:

Weapons or Items

Name of Weapon or Item: Metal Sling

Description: The Metal Sling is just a foldable metal slingshot. It's about 5 inches, and gets smaller when folded for easy storage. The elastic band used is inredibly durable, and allows him to strike opponents from long distances. It is the first weapon he has ever made. Kou carries about 75 small metal pellets in a small pouch on his waste to use with the slingshot.



Name of Weapon or Item: Fukiya

Description: The Fukiya is a wooden blowgun, about 3.5 feet in length. Kou keeps it strapped to his waist. In the same pouch as the metal pellets are about 25 senbon, and in his pocket are two small vials of a non-lethal neurotoxin that causes extremely mild dementia. This gives Kou the instant edge over opponents as they temportarily lose the ability to think and act clearly. Kou can only fire his senbon up to 10 meters.



Name of Weapon or Item: Asp

Description: The Asp is a black baton-type weapon, made of metal. It is approximately 2 feet long, but only when extended. The Asp is a friction-locked weapon that fully extends with a simply flick of Kou's wrist. When locked, it is about 14 inches long. It is a non-lethal weapon but it could still do major damage. Kou can use it in a number of ways to cause intense pain to opponents, or even fracture or break bones. It is very easy to conceal.



Name of Weapon or Item: Chain Staff

Description: The Chain Staff is a six foot long metal staff, made up of ten metal cylinders all connected by a single chain. The weapon can easily change from a staff to an extendable chained whip-like weapon to increase range on the fly. When fully extended this weapon is about 15 feet in length. This weapon is also strapped to his back and is usually his main weapon of choice.



-Kou also carries around about 10 explosive tags in his carrier pouch.
-Kou has a small 6 inch scroll strapped to his forearm, used to summon more senbon, neurotoxin vials, and explosive tags.

Skills/Abilities
-Kou is proficient with more than just the weapons that are used given to shinobi of his rank(kunai/shuriken).
-He is a versatile fighter, able to switch from long ranged combat to close ranged comba with little effort.


Special Traits
+Above Average Stamina(For a genin)
+Above Average Agility(For a genin)


Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:



Jutsu:

Cannon Jutsu

Sealed Bomb Square Release
Generic Sealing Technique

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

I already have one approval for my character, but I assume I need more than just one. Seems like it got buried quite easily.

Kou

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Fieryfly said
@Torris: First of all welcome to the RP ^^Your CS is looking good. One small thing:- Your Genin is only allowed to have 1 chakra nature when he starts out, so you will have to choose between Fuuton and Doton.On and:- Small nitpicking, weighting 147lbs(67kgs) is quite a lot for a 13 year old. Generally boys of that age weight around 72-138lbs. :PBesides that it looks all fine. ^^

Thanks. I know that I listed two chakra natures but it was mostly for future reference. I'd planned on him utilizing the Wind Nature a little later down the road when he delves more into ninjutsu, and learning the Earth Nature a while after that. I have no problem annotating this in the bio if necessary. :)

Also, I purposely intended on Kou being larger than normal for his age, so that is why I listed him at such weight, but I have no problem scaling it down if need be. Thanks for the review.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

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Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Name: Kou Giwa
Nickname/Alias:
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 13, 23 August
Age Appearance: Early Teens
Sexuality: Heterosexual

Parents: Jiya Giwa and Zen Namikaze
Length and build: 66 inches(167cm); Athletic build
Weight: 147lbs(67kgs)
Favorite weather and season: Warm; Autumn



Village: Konoha
Birthplace: Konoha
Organization: N/A

Clan/Bloodline: Giwa/Namikaze

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Fuuton, Doton - (has no knowledge of his elemental affinities yet and won't for a while; will unlock wind a while later...)



Appearance:
Kou has spiky black hair that reaches his shoulders. Down the middle of his hair is a silver streak of hair that grows that way naturally. He has thick eyebrows(not like Guy/Lee). His eyes are both gray, and there is a horizontal scar under his right eye. He often wears a gray sleeveless hoodie. Both of his forearms are wrapped in white bandages. He wears black pants, and black sandals. On both hands are black fingerless combat gloves. He wears his Konoha headband loosely around his neck.



Personality:
Kou doesn't really have the best personality to gain popularity or friends. His mouth has no filter and he acts like he doesn't care about others' feelings. He often has dark thoughts due to an incident his witnessed while younger. Other people around him tend to annoy him quite easily. He very much enjoys his personal space, and hates anyone who enters it uninvited. He is also a bit paranoid, refusing to trust those around him no matter what. Kou can be described as emotionless. He has never killed another human, but he thinks about it a lot and feels that once he finally does he will love it. He's kinda screwed up.

Despite his number of troubling traits, Kou is incredibly tactful, and carries a good amount of knowledge about things he is interested in. In his free time he is either training or reading. He can come up with ideas or tactics on the fly and conceal his objectives from his opponent to give himself the upperhand in battle. Kou's self awareness is pretty high, and his mind is always being fed with new information. He remembers the tiniest things.



History:
Jiya and Zen, Kou's mother and father met in Konoha. Jiya was born into the Giwa Clan. The Giwa Clan was a small clan located near Konoha in their own small settlement. They specialized in forging and using many different types of weapons. Having little interest in weaponry, Jiya moved to Konoha once she turned eighteen and worked in a supply store until she could save enough money to open up her own clothing shop. Zen was born into the Namikaze Clan, a clan specializing in kekkai ninjutsu, as well as fuinjutsu. Zen was also not born in Konoha, but moved there when he was younger so that he could train to become a shinobi at the ninja academy. He met Jiya while he was a Chunin, and started dating her soon after. By the time Zen had become a Jonin, he and Jiya were married, and soon had Kou. Kou was often hard to control as a child. He would wander off and find new ways to get into trouble, but his father often bailed him out. Kou had a strong desire to be like both his parents. When he wasn't getting in trouble he would be training with his father if possible, and gathering information about his family history from both his parents. Kou had already decided to follow in his father's footsteps at a young age and join the ninja academy, so training with his father was largely important to him. He would go back to his mother's old home and meet with his family from his mother's side. They would teach him about the different weapons they made, and how they made and used them.

When Kou wasn't training with his father, he was with his uncle, his mother's brother, training with various weaponry. And he also found time to travel to his father's homeland to learn about the techniques they employed in battle soaking up the information and knowledge like a sponge. Kou could hardly wait until he was eligible to join the ninja academy. He would often sneak off to go and train by himself. When he did this in Konoha, his parents did not care much as there wasn't much danger right outside of the gate, but anytime he traveled to his father's home, they would forbid him from going into the woods during the night. There was nothing but trouble for him. Kou, being the hardhead that he is, had learned of a new technique and he couldn't wait to try it out for the first time. Instead of waiting until daybreak, Kou went out in the middle of the night figuring if something came for him he would be able to kill it. His cockiness quickly proved to be deadly, as a group of ruthless bandits paraded the woods, stumbling across a young Kou. Kou opted to stand his ground instead of running and was easily caught. THe sun rose, and his parents quickly discovered that he was missing. Zen wasted no time leaving to search for the boy while Jiya worried helplessly. Following a trail of struggle in the woods, Zen appeared before the hideout of the bandits. Zen easily broke through, killing the guards with no remorse. He entered the hideout and quickly came across Kou being held captive. The bandit leader appeared before the shinobi demanding an impossible ransom once he found out that Kou was his child. Zen swiftly refused and the bandit leader pulled out a kunai, throwing it in the direction of Kou. The kunai was thrown skillfully, only managing to leave a cut under one of Kou's eyes. The bandit leader had thrown it purposely to spook Zen, and it barely worked. Zen instantly identified the bandit leader as an old Konoha shinobi who had been banished from the village a long time ago, and he remembered that he was no slouch. In a remarkable display of speed and wit, Zen managed to apply a barrier around Kou while taking out a few bandits in the area. Enranged, the bandit leader called on the rest of his subordinated to attack Zen while also going after Kou's father himself. Zen masterfully killed bandit after bandit ruthlessly. They had his son, and threatened his life. Zen would not let anyone live. Kou stared on in disbelief at the amount of bloodshed his father was causing. Zen had never fought with such darkness in his eyes. The bandits' hideout was painted red. Zen tired himself out, and it was only him and the bandit leader left. Zen in a normal setting would have been able to dispatch of this man with no issues but he had foolishly tired himself out with his last onslaught of the lesser bandits. The bandit leader sensed this and a battle to the death ensued. Zen went toe to toe with the bandit leader, neither gaining ground. Kou looked on, eyes wide, without a word escaping his mouth.

A shadow appaered in the entrance of the hideout and Kou quickly recognized his mother. Why did she have to come? That was the question that haunted Kou for the rest of his life. When catching wind of his shocked mother, Kou yelled out her name. Zen, hearing the name of his wife, turned from the battle in disbelief at her presence. Seeing an opening, the bandit leader delivered a fatal blow to Zen, leaving Jiya to shriek in horror. The bandit leader began to smirk and began walking towards Kou's mother, hoping to kill her in revenge for the trouble that Zen had caused. Kou screamed for her to run, but Jiya's body was frozen. Not yet dead, Zen intervened, evening the score. The bandit leader fell to his knees, slowly turning around to see that he had been impaled through the heart with a sharp object by a half-dead Zen. Both men fell to their deaths moments later, leaving a gruesome scene for a mother and her nine year old son. This was the incident that shaped Kou today. His mother blamed herself for her husband's death, and Kou blamed himself for everything. His mother begged Kou never to bring up becoming a ninja again, or even trying to practice any techniques but he refused, and the day that he became eligible to apply, she hung herself leaving Kou to come back home to the sight of her lifeless body. This event further shaped his derailment from normal actions or thoughts. Kou still decided to become a shinobi

Theme Song:



Weapons/Items[u][/u]:

Weapons or Items

Name of Weapon or Item: Metal Sling

Description: The Metal Sling is just a foldable metal slingshot. It's about 5 inches, and gets smaller when folded for easy storage. The elastic band used is inredibly durable, and allows him to strike opponents from long distances. It is the first weapon he has ever made. Kou carries about 75 small metal pellets in a small pouch on his waste to use with the slingshot.



Name of Weapon or Item: Fukiya

Description: The Fukiya is a wooden blowgun, about 3.5 feet in length. Kou keeps it strapped to his waist. In the same pouch as the metal pellets are about 25 senbon, and in his pocket are two small vials of a non-lethal neurotoxin that causes extremely mild dementia. This gives Kou the instant edge over opponents as they temportarily lose the ability to think and act clearly. Kou can only fire his senbon up to 10 meters.



Name of Weapon or Item: Asp

Description: The Asp is a black baton-type weapon, made of metal. It is approximately 2 feet long, but only when extended. The Asp is a friction-locked weapon that fully extends with a simply flick of Kou's wrist. When locked, it is about 14 inches long. It is a non-lethal weapon but it could still do major damage. Kou can use it in a number of ways to cause intense pain to opponents, or even fracture or break bones. It is very easy to conceal.



Name of Weapon or Item: Chain Staff

Description: The Chain Staff is a six foot long metal staff, made up of ten metal cylinders all connected by a single chain. The weapon can easily change from a staff to an extendable chained whip-like weapon to increase range on the fly. When fully extended this weapon is about 15 feet in length. This weapon is also strapped to his back and is usually his main weapon of choice.



-Kou also carries around about 10 explosive tags in his carrier pouch.
-Kou has a small 6 inch scroll strapped to his forearm, used to summon more senbon, neurotoxin vials, and explosive tags.

Skills/Abilities
-Kou is proficient with more than just the weapons that are used given to shinobi of his rank(kunai/shuriken).
-He is a versatile fighter, able to switch from long ranged combat to close ranged comba with little effort.


Special Traits
+Above Average Stamina(For a genin)
+Above Average Agility(For a genin)


Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai:
Clan:
Description:



Jutsu:

Cannon Jutsu

Sealed Bomb Square Release
Generic Sealing Technique

Magic Vs Tech Users: Curse Of Mana RP

I'll work on editing my character a little later. I'm in Korea and it's about 2am here. I have to be up in 4 hours lol. Thanks for the review.

Magic Vs Tech Users: Curse Of Mana RP

Appearance:

Z the Terrorist

-Stands at 6'5
-268lbs

Name: Zor'el Zilstek

Alias/Nick-name: 'Z'

Age: 35

Race: Ferus

Gender: Male

Affinity: Magic

Titles/Occupations: Assassin; Terrorist

Equipment: None

Abilities/Skills:

-Blistering Paragon: Zor'el's magic abilities revolve around creating, shaping, and manipulating heat, fire, and smoke. He is a naturally destructive fighter who has worked on conforming and controlling his abilities since he was a small child. As a Blistering Paragon he will not take damage from fire, heat, or smoke.

• Combustion Inducement: Z can cause anything he grabs a hold of to spontaneously combust into crimson red flames. He must hold on to this object for up to 15 seconds.


• Z can superheat his entire body, or parts of his body to levels that would cause instant burns to anyone who touches him, even through thin clothing. This extends to weapons(ex: superheating the blade of a katana to increase it's effectiveness)


• Hell Flashover: When in a confined area, Zor'el can gather or manipulate fire and heat until everything in the area ignites causing an extremely dangerous situation for anyone not named Zor'el trapped in the area as well.


• Hell Jet: A simple ability which allows Z to use fire magic to create propulsion and 'fly' in a sense. He can also use this to increase speed in small bursts. The flames are emitted from his hands and feet.


• Lungs of a Dragon: Z uses his magic abilities to generate and form smoke in his lungs and exhale them through his nose and mouth. He can use this in a variety of ways, such as concealing himself, or creating a hazardous environment for enemies by exhaling smoke all around the immediate area.


• Gift of Lucifer: Z uses his magic abilities to drain the heat from any source that emits it. For example, he can drain the heat from a small fire(extinguishing it) and use it to launch a controlled heat blast.


• Hell's Projectiles: Z can simply create constructs and projectiles using fire, heat and smoke. This ability has a wide range of customization and can range from him creating a disc of heat that can be thrown at enemies, causing severe burns to whatever it touches, creating a small missile constructed by fire to explode on contact, or even generating a small ball of smoke that expands on command trapping enemies in a cloud of smoke.

-In addition to being proficient at using his abilities, Zor'el is also physically formidable. His skin is more beast than human. It is hardened to feel almost like stone. He can take plenty of punishment, while also delivering it. Despite this, he can still move swiftly and smoothly, often surprising opponents. His real skill though, is his tactic ability. He is insane, but he is very intelligent at the same time. Most fights and assassinations are successful through his wit.

Bio: Zor'el wasn't always a twisted killer. As a child he was a normal boy intrigued with the wonders of the world. He grew up in the Commerce District of Etheon, and studied the capability of mana with his father. He was a Ferus, but the only features that were considered beastly of him were his feet, which he never showed, and his undeniably sharp nails. He wore gloves to hide this as well. His father was a small manufacturer of tech equipment. He also repaired the same equipment, though he was nothing special. Beneath his shop Zor'el would read about the history of mana, and not before long he would begin to discover his own magical capabilities.

Eventually, his father's shop went out of business and Zor'el became homeless while in Etheon. His father suddenly disappeared one day, leaving Zor'el to fend for himself. Z was eventually labeled as the annoying beggar around the four districts of Etheon. He was never shown any sympathy or pity. He was often assaulted by Etheon Enforcers when asking them for help. Once an innocent young boy, Zor'el's attitude began to change. He grew heartless, and more beast-like. Z fled Etheon, traveling and honing his magic. A few days after his 12th birthday, he killed his first man in an argument for food and surprisingly enough to him, he felt nothing but satisfaction. This eventually led to his route as a small time assassin.

Z faced many battles and each and every one shaped and refined him as a being. After killing a Tech User, he drained his first manium crystals, eventually becoming addicted to the power they held. As he began to drain more and more crystals his mind became more and more ravaged by the temporary power of the manium crystals. Z saw what these crystals caused people to do, and he understood what power they held. Though he had grown addicted, Z eventually recovered from his need for the crystals, but his need for power was still there. This is where the idea to overthrow Etheon and Carson Grant X originated. Zor'el believes that control over the area of Etheon would allow him to stage himself as a supreme ruler, as well as the freedom to do whatever he wants with all of the manium crystals located in Etheon.

At this point he is traveling back towards Etheon, now changed. There is no doubt in his mind that nobody will recognize him, though he had been gone for over 20 years. As he grew, his body went through greater changes than any regular being. His skin has darkened immensely, though his scars are still noticeable. As his skin changed in tone, it also changed in density, now more solid than any other normal person. Zor'el's face was left severely damaged after a battle featuring a talented assassination target. This happened many years ago, yet his face has not yet even healed halfway. He now dons a sinister mask(see appearance above), that goes along well with his seemingly permanent grin. Only Zor'el's missing father knows his full name. He has told anyone he has met to call him 'Z'.

Z has no filter. He will say whatever comes to mind, and hardly cares about offending those around him. He is merciless, and cold, able to kill a child without hesitation. Too put his personality into simple terms, Zor'el is a psychopath. He intends his mark on Etheon at the least in case he is not successful in his objective. It is also easy to say he's confident, willing to take on Etheon and it's entire fighting force.

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