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Bandits - Village entrance - Kaji, Yasai, Kiryu, Leta, Vosswald & Village Chief
Instead of avoiding the attack the giant charged forward to meet Yasai's attack. His gauntlet's blade sank into the wood of the giant kanabo before being ripped away violently, sending Yasai flying to the ground. The giant gave a sharp knock with the handle to the backside of his head knocking him out cold. Some of the kanabo's spikes were ripped off in the process and now littered the ground.
"Weak. Try again when you're in an actual condition to fight."
The giant's wolf-hide cloak came loose, exposing his face for everyone to see. Mouth twisted in a snarl, long wild black mane, sharp and predatory yet fully human eyes with pupils as black as coal. The obvious bump under his chest-armour left no doubt. The giant was actually a woman, much to the villager's surprise.
The giant bandit let out a sharp breath, ran her large free hand through her hair before letting her gaze rest on the remaining heroes. A wicked and malicious smile spread on her lips.
"Surprised?"
The remaining bandits cheered.
Instead of avoiding the attack the giant charged forward to meet Yasai's attack. His gauntlet's blade sank into the wood of the giant kanabo before being ripped away violently, sending Yasai flying to the ground. The giant gave a sharp knock with the handle to the backside of his head knocking him out cold. Some of the kanabo's spikes were ripped off in the process and now littered the ground.
"Weak. Try again when you're in an actual condition to fight."
The giant's wolf-hide cloak came loose, exposing his face for everyone to see. Mouth twisted in a snarl, long wild black mane, sharp and predatory yet fully human eyes with pupils as black as coal. The obvious bump under his chest-armour left no doubt. The giant was actually a woman, much to the villager's surprise.
The giant bandit let out a sharp breath, ran her large free hand through her hair before letting her gaze rest on the remaining heroes. A wicked and malicious smile spread on her lips.
"Surprised?"
The remaining bandits cheered.
Bandits - Village entrance - Kaji, Yasai, Kiryu, Leta, Vosswald & Village Chief
"Ah... So more come to join the fray."
The bandit tried to appear calm but one could almost literally feel the tenseness in his posture
and the way his eyes were darting nervously from opponent to opponent.
"Since you aren't alone I think should have some help too. What do you say, boys?... eh..."
The bandits suddenly didn't seem to cheerful anymore. They thought they could bully and intimidate poor and defenseless villagers. They didn't expect such heavy opposition. Doubt began to show on their faces. One of them, a small man covered from head to toe in blankets, spoke up.
"I don't know, boss. This whole idea seems a little stupid now that I think about it." "Yeah..." "Uh-huh..."
Two of his comrades voiced their agreement. The purple-robed leader made a half-turn and looked at his followers before looking back towards the village's protectors. More people began to gather. Encouraged by their saviours display of courage. Among them were the village chief and Vosswald, who was drawn here by the sound of a gunshot. The bandit leader didn't know what to do. Attacking would be suicide at this point, running away would hurt his pride. It was at this moment that the giant bandit stepped forward. It put a reassuring hand on the leader's shoulder before pushing him aside.
"My turn."
The rest of the bandits all took a couple of steps back. They looked fearful but nevertheless content to remain observers for now, their strongest acting as some kind of champion.
"I can easily take on three of you at the same time. So who wants to try?"
Its voice had something inhuman to it, something that caused fear. Whatever it was it must be at least partially demon.
And it wanted to fight.
"Ah... So more come to join the fray."
The bandit tried to appear calm but one could almost literally feel the tenseness in his posture
and the way his eyes were darting nervously from opponent to opponent.
"Since you aren't alone I think should have some help too. What do you say, boys?... eh..."
The bandits suddenly didn't seem to cheerful anymore. They thought they could bully and intimidate poor and defenseless villagers. They didn't expect such heavy opposition. Doubt began to show on their faces. One of them, a small man covered from head to toe in blankets, spoke up.
"I don't know, boss. This whole idea seems a little stupid now that I think about it." "Yeah..." "Uh-huh..."
Two of his comrades voiced their agreement. The purple-robed leader made a half-turn and looked at his followers before looking back towards the village's protectors. More people began to gather. Encouraged by their saviours display of courage. Among them were the village chief and Vosswald, who was drawn here by the sound of a gunshot. The bandit leader didn't know what to do. Attacking would be suicide at this point, running away would hurt his pride. It was at this moment that the giant bandit stepped forward. It put a reassuring hand on the leader's shoulder before pushing him aside.
"My turn."
The rest of the bandits all took a couple of steps back. They looked fearful but nevertheless content to remain observers for now, their strongest acting as some kind of champion.
"I can easily take on three of you at the same time. So who wants to try?"
Its voice had something inhuman to it, something that caused fear. Whatever it was it must be at least partially demon.
And it wanted to fight.
Sorry, no post tonight. I don't feel so well and I haven't been very creative since yesterday. I will definitely post tomorrow.
I will continue tomorrow. So if anyone still wants to post he should do so until then. Stay tuned for fighting.
At first I was a little skeptical about his powers but I think his weakness is very reasonable. I particularly like the first-person introduction.
You are approved.
One question though. How long does it take him to change from one element to another?
You are approved.
One question though. How long does it take him to change from one element to another?
Yes.
Razqua said
He then proceeded to begin heading towards the nearest village. He walked through the entire night. The next day he finally reached the village.
And all that after a fight against a minotaur. I think someone would be very exhausted by then, possibly even die from it. His legs would also probably burn in pain. But I'm not trying to criticize you or anything. It's very possible that he's stronger than any normal human. That would go nicely with the "more beast than man" idea.
I like how someone who just collapsed from exhaustion just suddenly stands up and wants blood. Does he need to for his comrade?
So I'm curious. What do you guys think of the game so far? What about my characterization and writing style? Are there things you like or dislike? Anything in particular you'd like to see changed? Are things too slow or maybe too fast? Should I send out PMs more often?
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