the links just lead to 404 errors

super secret ninja Orion is on the Demon side... and still waiting for re-approval

Nicias Askani said
super secret ninja Orion is on the Demon side... and still waiting for re-approval

Oh, sorry. He is approved.

Razqua said
the links just lead to 404 errors

Working on it right now. There seems to be a strange error concerning the linking.

Edit:
Done. The current coding of the side still seems to be a little shaky.

So I'm curious. What do you guys think of the game so far? What about my characterization and writing style? Are there things you like or dislike? Anything in particular you'd like to see changed? Are things too slow or maybe too fast? Should I send out PMs more often?

I don't have any problem with the way your running the game so far. Perhaps it's running a bit slow but I can't really blame you for that. It would be preferable I think to divide the characters into smaller groups so stuff can happen quicker.

I never thought I'd have this much trouble making a character. But then again, its been a while since I last did. My head hurts. >_<

I like how Chiasa doesn't care one of her patients just got up and walked into a fight.

I like how someone who just collapsed from exhaustion just suddenly stands up and wants blood. Does he need to for his comrade?

In the real world when someone passes out, chances are they don't stay unconscious very long. If they do they're either dead or in a coma. Yasai was just tired. It's not like he lost a gallon of blood. Also I even described as being tired. He had trouble getting up and he was walking very clumsily. Maybe he can't really fight well but in his mind right now he thinks he can.

Razqua said
He then proceeded to begin heading towards the nearest village. He walked through the entire night. The next day he finally reached the village.

And all that after a fight against a minotaur. I think someone would be very exhausted by then, possibly even die from it. His legs would also probably burn in pain. But I'm not trying to criticize you or anything. It's very possible that he's stronger than any normal human. That would go nicely with the "more beast than man" idea.

Okay I'm glad to see you get the idea. Also Yasai might have a few drops of demon blood in his family tree.

Chiasa is more concerned with the gravely wounded man over the exhausted man an as you said "It's not like he lost a gallon of blood"

Priorities

True but still I kinda expected some kind of reaction. I suppose it doesn't matter much. Sorry for even bringing it up.

No worries just saying to a Doc exhaustion ranks beneath shock and major blood loss

Medicine especially Medieval medicine is a harsh business

Is this still open to new members?

Yes.

Awesome ^^

Name: Akio Hayashi
Age: 26
Class: Elemental Blade/Elementalist
Power(s):

Elemental Affinity- Akio is capable of controlling any element including the primary five and any between and outside of them. He can only control one at a time and is immune to that element's effects.

Weapon or Armor?- Capable of coating parts of his body in his selected element for varied effect. Like fire for offensive or earth for defensive. Is capably of doing the same with weapons.

Weakness: He has little to no training when it comes to fighting, what he know is from either experience or observation. Every element has a weakness of its own, sometimes multiple ones.

Background:
"Where did I grow up? Why would you ask that? Oh well, I guess I'll tell you. I grew up in a village at the base of the... mountains. It was small, infact, it was on the verge of becoming a small town, probably is one already. Anyways, there wasn't much to do there aside from work in the fields or in the shops. Me? I helped the local blacksmith and occasionally ran errands for the other shop owners.

I will say this, I was quite the troublemaker. I often got into fights with others around my age, mostly bullies, mind you. I didn't always win, but I at least learned how to defend myself that way. At one one, I discovered that I had... unique abilities. I won't say what they are, exactly, but I can say that I did my best to hide that fact. Problem is, some secrets are hard to keep hidden, went maybe 4 years before it was discovered. Now, here's the thing about religions, prophecies, and such, not all of them are real or true, but everyone can believe them.

The result was that I got run out of town being accused of being the one that would destroy it. I even had to go so far as to fake my own death, no easy feat. Now that's enough, I've given' you enough information 'bout myself. Now leave so I can get back to my nap."

Fun Fact(s): He has a tendency to assign nicknames to people and birds seem to like resting on top of his head.

At first I was a little skeptical about his powers but I think his weakness is very reasonable. I particularly like the first-person introduction.

You are approved.

One question though. How long does it take him to change from one element to another?

Yay.
And I haven't been able to work that out. Maybe 4-5 seconds minimum, at least to start off with. Another thing to note, he tries to stay with the fire element so that people don't learn of his ability, but this may lead to people mistaking him for something he's not. (EX: Alessia mistaking him to be another knight from her country.)