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*Moved RP to Iwaku*
That is improvement. Be sure to add a sentence or two more to the personality and change your picture to a character of similar style to the rest of the characters like I asked of everyone in the interest check.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Lyrev-212401058 - There's an example of the style we're following (not a real photo, but realistic and not anime-ish) There are hundreds of similar styles to that of the concept art I linked. Be sure and link the artwork that you use from deviantart if you do use one from there. You can choose whichever you want as long as it isn't the same as any of the characters already chosen. I'm sure there is a guy that resembles that of the one you were going for. Remember though, that all the characters are all around 18-early 20's too :P
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Alright everyone,
The intro is posted. It isn't overly amazing, because I had a lot of distractions and a bad case of writer's block tonight. I'll also be thinking of the title of the first chapter which I will edit in whenever I can :)
Here's the Jedi Code of conduct by the way:
(You'll need it to answer the question in the intro)
"Jedi are the guardians of peace in the galaxy.
Jedi use their powers to defend and to protect.
Jedi respect all life, in any form.
Jedi serve others rather than ruling over them, for the good of the galaxy.
Jedi seek to improve themselves through knowledge and training."
- I used http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Jedi_Code as the source.
Let's start this thing!
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Lyrev-212401058 - There's an example of the style we're following (not a real photo, but realistic and not anime-ish) There are hundreds of similar styles to that of the concept art I linked. Be sure and link the artwork that you use from deviantart if you do use one from there. You can choose whichever you want as long as it isn't the same as any of the characters already chosen. I'm sure there is a guy that resembles that of the one you were going for. Remember though, that all the characters are all around 18-early 20's too :P
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Alright everyone,
The intro is posted. It isn't overly amazing, because I had a lot of distractions and a bad case of writer's block tonight. I'll also be thinking of the title of the first chapter which I will edit in whenever I can :)
Here's the Jedi Code of conduct by the way:
(You'll need it to answer the question in the intro)
"Jedi are the guardians of peace in the galaxy.
Jedi use their powers to defend and to protect.
Jedi respect all life, in any form.
Jedi serve others rather than ruling over them, for the good of the galaxy.
Jedi seek to improve themselves through knowledge and training."
- I used http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Jedi_Code as the source.
Let's start this thing!
You're off to a good start with your CS Charlie, but it needs a little more content before it is acceptable.
Add two or three more good sentences to his personality and another 4-5 sentence paragraph for his backstory, and I'll take another look. Just think of what makes him tick, what his motives are, his habits, etc. Go more in depth about how his home life, the death of his father, and the riot's affected him and molded him into the character that he is now. Take your time, I didn't mean for you to feel rushed if that was the case. Be aware of grammar as well.
Also, the picture link is not working correctly.
Add two or three more good sentences to his personality and another 4-5 sentence paragraph for his backstory, and I'll take another look. Just think of what makes him tick, what his motives are, his habits, etc. Go more in depth about how his home life, the death of his father, and the riot's affected him and molded him into the character that he is now. Take your time, I didn't mean for you to feel rushed if that was the case. Be aware of grammar as well.
Also, the picture link is not working correctly.
Great, try to get your CS in as soon as possible. I'll be posting the intro sometime today.
You could play a character similar to that I suppose (since Neomisia isn't that well known, because her and Nessus are the first born planets of the new galaxy), but we really are in need of a fourth Padawan. I'm open to letting you play as two characters.
Yes :) And Angel, you'll be second on the waiting list if you still intend to join. If the thread loses people then I will be sure to contact you ~
Really good Tasha :P It's up! Here's the OOC.
*Moved to Iwaku*
Of course. I am looking forward to getting into character :)
For now I must go to sleep - I'll have the OOC up some time tomorrow. (It's almost 4 am here)
For now I must go to sleep - I'll have the OOC up some time tomorrow. (It's almost 4 am here)
If you want to play as a treasure hunter then I will allow you two characters (one main focus character and a secondary) I'm perfectly fine with that. For secondary characters a Cs isn't necessarily required.
I'll have to place you on a waiting list Charlie unless T3CH doesn't submit a CS.
You'll be the first I offer a spot if we lose someone :P
I'll have to place you on a waiting list Charlie unless T3CH doesn't submit a CS.
You'll be the first I offer a spot if we lose someone :P
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