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Alright my Sci-Fi loving writers out there, here's a little something that might tickle your fancy--------> roleplayerguild.com/topics/…
2 yrs ago
> As a player, what is your preferred writing level?
I write similar to others around me, but a few paragraphs is usual.
> Is grammar and depth of writing important to you?
Not particularly but lots of errors start to get bothersome
> Are there any writing subjects you particularly enjoy exploring?
Id like to get better at fights. and action is always a favorite of mine but personality development and relationship building is also fun and important to me.
> Is there anything you really dislike and want to avoid like the plague?
Suppose not.
> Is there something you are uncomfortable with happening to your character?
Please don't cut off his limbs unless you're willing to pay for his replacements ;-;
> Do you have any short-term or long-term goals with this character?
Short: GET STRONGER!
Long: Hopefully achieve Knight or even Master, Through dedication and many many missions. Also I would love for him to train a padawan of his own sometime down the line. But with such ambition comes lots of danger and If he happens to be struck down in battle so be it.
Name: Val'Ko Sate Species: Human Homeworld: Coruscant Age: 14 Gender: Male Rank: Padawan Master: TBD Former Master: None Known Associates: Jedi Master Kyla Vondin, Lo Lya'Tre Favored Equipment and clothes: Jedi Robes of course. As for equipment he carries two lightsabers Purple in blade color, one in each hand. Height: 161cm (5'3") Weight: 58kg (128lbs)
Detailed appearance. Imagery insufficient.
Val'Ko is a human of rather average looks, consisting of a head full of soft light brown hair that has a mind of its own and likes flowing from the front to the back of his head with considerable volume/poof. Hair trimmed close to the scalp around his ears and the back of his head only really letting it grow out on the top, except of course for his Padawan Braid. He has a light Olive skin tone and full, sharp eyebrows. Usually displaying a clean shaven face. His eyes are the color only found between A sage green and aquatic teal with streaks of light brown almost gold. His nose is small and sharp looking just like his lips which draw in a straight line, hiding Straight, remarkable white teeth behind them. Val'Ko has a Lean athletic build being stronger than he looks due to his focus on his physical abilities. He stands about 5'3" or 161cm tall and weighs about 128lbs or 58kg of well built muscle.
Report on natural ability with the Force, as well as all known Force Techniques and the skill levels.
Val'Ko's Natural abilities in the force lie in his ability to augment his movements more so than anything else but of course due to his nature, He has always taken interest in using to force to aid in combat.
Report on known skills and combat experience, training and lightsaber training.
Val'Ko Has been with his master for a couple years now aiding in quite a number of missions. He has developed quite an aggressive and offensive fighting style utilizing mostly Ataru.
Names and pertinent details for all political and social associates. Including allies, enemies, rivals, underlings, apprentices and more.
He's just following his master around like baby yoda follows Mando. (In other words. None.)
Personality analysis of candidate.
He is a high energy, excited disciple of the Jedi Order. He is eager to develop his skills and focuses primarily in Jar'kai. His personality mirrors his fighting style. He is always on the move and can get quite aggressive, never wanting to slow down. He is very adaptable and is a quick thinker able to come up with in the moment solutions even under pressure or stress. Val'Ko is a very brave, Ambitious and Adventurous. Most importantly, He revers all the Jedi above him, Especially his master and Jedi Master Kyla Vondin. It would be hard for him to disobey their teaching and guidance no matter what is offered in return.
List and description of known and suspected flaws, obligations, vices and weaknesses.
He is aggressive, and lacks a developed connection to the force. He focuses too much on prowess and would rather train in saber dueling than meditate. He is also rather careless and seems not to care much about important matters. He just enjoys playing and fighting more than politics or negotiations.
Owned equipment of note.
His Twin purple Lightsabers.
Personal biography, as detailed by the candidate for use in Jedi archives. Acquired shortly after last achievement of note.
Val'Ko Sate was born on 17.1.8 BTC on on the planet of Tython taken from his family just before he turned 5 Years old, Ever since he has been training and getting stronger as a Jedi, He remembers how highly his mother talked about the Jedi and how she told him that if he worked hard enough he too could become a Jedi, So when Val'ko left home he wasn't bothered as much as other children. He thought that was what everyone did. The Jedi lifestyle was much more comfortable than the life he was living with his mother and as he grew he started to enjoy the learning and practice that gave him direction and support. Becoming a Jedi was all Val'Ko ever cared about. Val'ko was the type to learn from failure, and as such it is easier to learn from bruises than bad grades. He tried his best to keep up with the school portions of the training but always excelled at the things such as flying, surviving or what he loved most, Saber technique. Val'Ko spent a lot of time reading about how to fly or fight and made sure he was familiar with how speeders, starships, and most importantly how lightsabers worked.
Val'Ko was of course tested by the initiate trials since he has such a narrow focus but nevertheless he passed. The Jedi Code was clearly a part of his heart and mind by age 12 and he made not only one lightsaber but two, since he was provided the materials. He struggled the most on his Trial of Insight but proved he was adaptable and had lots of potential if trained correctly. He has been known to be too rough with other Initiates as if he doesn't know his own strength but his rough housing seems to be of good hearted nature with no ill intent.
Val'Ko has been with his master almost 2 years now going on mostly protective details and peaceful relation missions, He keeps his mind open at all times and has learned a lot. He practices his personal skills with any and all free time making sure he doesn't attract the wrong attention. He also enjoys any practice he can get at flying with his Master, always helping with maintenance and repair whenever needed.
Just waiting for his Master to be completed. Then I will fill in the bits that are TBD. This should be enough for evaluation.
Expectations are the minimum. I will show you how far past those you can go.
N A M E
Tsukai katano (Just goes by Tsukai unless you come up with something personal)
A G E
Thirteen
C L A N
Katano (Small family)
S E X U A L I T Y
Straight
B L O O D T Y P E
O-
Characterization
H E I G H T
4'10"
E Y E S
Dull Red
H A I R
Messy Platinum blonde hair (almost white), usually standing up all over the place.
H E A D B A N D P L A C E M E N T
Worn on the forehead when not active, usually falls down around his neck when hes jumpin around doing ninja stuff
C H A K R A N A T U R E
Raiton | Lightning
P E R S O N A L I T Y
> Intelligent > Energetic > Intuitive (Strong instincts) > Upbeat < Lacks Restraint < Aggressive (Towards unknown like new people or enemies.) < Impulsive < Spazzy
P E R S O N A L H I S T O R Y
The Katano Family has been one of the 'Regular joe' type families of konoha, most of the family members becoming ninja but only a few ever making it to the jonin level. The most notable one was Tsukai's grandfather who was a notorious ANBU operator known for his clever traps and unrivaled speed, This is Tsukai's idol and role model.
The Katano family members are known for their poweress in the lightning style even with being such a small clan. Tsukai in particular has shown a lot of promise and enthusiasm to become a great shinobi and is always pushing himself to go further, faster. Tsukai's dad was a former chunin who was injured, losing both his legs from the knee down. He is Tsukai's number one fan. Though Tsukai doesnt realize it yet, his father is one of his biggest drives to become the best, So that he can do what his father never got the chance to do.
Tsukai has always been one of the smallest shinobi in his class yet has made it his goal not to fall behind. When he gets teased he usually dismisses it and lets his actions prove himself, however, Tsukai hates when others tease his friends and will usually step in to defend them.
C H A R A C T E R D E V E L O P M E N T
I'd like for him to develop the Lightning cloak and Black lightning as his reserve strength. But other than that Im just shooting for him to be so fast sharingan users have a hard time keeping track of his regular movements in combat.
When it comes to story goals, I intend for Tsukai to get really attached to his team members in a protective way. Other than that he is at the GMs will, Just PM me if you want him to fill any sort of plot line.
Attributes
T A L E N T S
• Speed Training Damn this guy is fast. • Lightning Infusion Tsukai is really good at channeling his lightning chakra into different mediums (specifically tools, sometimes other people.)
T O O L S
• Kunai Yknow the pokie bois • Steel wire This stuff is dangerous in Tsukai's sparky hands • Thin Wire Netting He lays this stuff out like a trap. Kinda like a spider web
T E C H N I Q U E S C R A N K
• Static Burst - User discharges a mass of electrical energy, enough to get free from being grabbed or tied down by something flamable
D R A N K
• Current Transfer - This is how Tsukai electrifies things, using tools and other people as catalysts. The most chakra he puts out the stronger the lightning effects. • Lightning Clone - Typical clone but when they land taijutsu attacks it gives the enemy a small static like shock • Static Strings - Detection technique, tiny stings of static electricity are spread out in a web too small of current for the normal person to feel and not visible to the naked eye. But when crossed send a signal back to the user
Expectations are the minimum. I will show you how far past those you can go.
N A M E
Tsukai katano (Just goes by Tsukai unless you come up with something personal)
A G E
Thirteen
C L A N
Katano (Small family)
S E X U A L I T Y
Straight
B L O O D T Y P E
O-
Characterization
H E I G H T
4'10"
E Y E S
Dull Red
H A I R
Messy Platinum blonde hair (almost white), usually standing up all over the place.
H E A D B A N D P L A C E M E N T
Worn on the forehead when not active, usually falls down around his neck when hes jumpin around doing ninja stuff
C H A K R A N A T U R E
Raiton | Lightning
P E R S O N A L I T Y
> Intelligent > Energetic > Intuitive (Strong instincts) > Upbeat < Lacks Restraint < Aggressive (Towards unknown like new people or enemies.) < Impulsive < Spazzy
P E R S O N A L H I S T O R Y
The Katano Family has been one of the 'Regular joe' type families of konoha, most of the family members becoming ninja but only a few ever making it to the jonin level. The most notable one was Tsukai's grandfather who was a notorious ANBU operator known for his clever traps and unrivaled speed, This is Tsukai's idol and role model.
The Katano family members are known for their poweress in the lightning style even with being such a small clan. Tsukai in particular has shown a lot of promise and enthusiasm to become a great shinobi and is always pushing himself to go further, faster. Tsukai's dad was a former chunin who was injured, losing both his legs from the knee down. He is Tsukai's number one fan. Though Tsukai doesnt realize it yet, his father is one of his biggest drives to become the best, So that he can do what his father never got the chance to do.
Tsukai has always been one of the smallest shinobi in his class yet has made it his goal not to fall behind. When he gets teased he usually dismisses it and lets his actions prove himself, however, Tsukai hates when others tease his friends and will usually step in to defend them.
C H A R A C T E R D E V E L O P M E N T
I'd like for him to develop the Lightning cloak as his big move. But other than that Im just shooting for him to be so fast sharingan users have a hard time keeping track of his regular movements in combat.
When it comes to story goals, I intend for Tsukai to get really attached to his team members in a protective way. Other than that he is at the GMs will, Just PM me if you want him to fill any sort of plot line.
Attributes
T A L E N T S
• Speed Training Damn this guy is fast. • Lightning Infusion Tsukai is really good at channeling his lightning chakra into different mediums (specifically tools, sometimes other people.)
T O O L S
• Kunai Yknow the pokie bois • Steel wire This stuff is dangerous in Tsukai's sparky hands • Thin Wire Netting He lays this stuff out like a trap. Kinda like a spider web
T E C H N I Q U E S C R A N K
• Static Burst - User discharges a mass of electrical energy, enough to get free from being grabbed or tied down by something flamable
D R A N K
• Current Transfer - This is how Tsukai electrifies things, using tools and other people as catalysts. The most chakra he puts out the stronger the lightning effects. • Lightning Clone - Typical clone but when they land taijutsu attacks it gives the enemy a small static like shock • Static Strings - Detection technique, tiny stings of static electricity are spread out in a web too small of current for the normal person to feel and not visible to the naked eye. But when crossed send a signal back to the user
GIMME YOUR BACKGROUND!!! FAMILY / CLAN INFO / TID-BITS!
C H A R A C T E R D E V E L O P M E N T
I'd like for him to develop the Lightning cloak as his big move. But other than that Im just shooting for him to be so fast sharingan users have a hard time keeping track of his regular movements in combat.
I would absolutely love to join... What's the post requirements? I'd likely only be able to post 2-3 times a week. (Maybe more but that's depending on things I can't control)
Nickname: (Doesn't have one at the moment, doesn't mean he wont develop one in the story)
Alias: Nyx
Birth Date: January 18th
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Place of Origin: Malibu, California
Currently struggling however Im sure Ill find something soon
Dialogue Color: Well Purple of course
Appearance __ Include the basics along with whatever else you'd like (W.I.P.)
Personality: Irritable and intolerant, Hes very abrasive to be around, always speaks his mind and is very blunt about it. Loves to mess around but his form of messing around is usually in the form of insults and quick witty responses. Easily loses himself inside his own head and will zone out often clearly thinking about something. Though he acts like he doesn't have much feeling he gets attached to those who he deems worth while and is quite protective of them. (Will probably add more, story will also develop personality as he develops relationships)
Background: He has grown up in his dads house, with a whole lab of his own (though much smaller than his fathers). He works just as much as his father and is just as smart, He never really made friends at school because of his personality and because hes always much younger than his classmates. He completed high school when he was 15, immediately going to college, getting his doctorate in both mathematics and Mechanical engineering in just 4 years. He is now done with school and focusing hard on his projects, learning from his dad whenever possible. Since Asher doesn't get along with many people he has aimed most of his projects towards personal protection devices and mechanical animals. With the exception of his very own variation of the Iron man suit.
Parental Heritage: Tony Start | Iron Man
Hero or Villain: Hero
Abilities: -He's wicked smart. -Loves martial arts, Participates in MMA training as well as Boxes in a local gym. -Exercises regularly, maintaining his form to play his sports. -Has incredibly still hands, very mynute body control.
Limitations: - He's is just human after all, No super powers! - Above human average reflexes, speed, strength and endurance but it still pales in comparison to any sort of super ability.
Miscellaneous __ Anything can go here.
Much more work must be done but Ive put a little down so far so I might as well save it in a post for you to get a feel for my ideas
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Call me Tsukai (Su-Kai)
I know I dont have much in here but it'll do.
Real name?
Tristan, however, as previously mentioned Tsukai works best.
Age?
Im 22
Height?
Godlike stature of 5'6"
Weight?
between 140 and 150lbs trying to gain some muscle mass
Looks?
7/10 if I had to guess
What do I do IRL?
Im in the Army, little less than two years left. Im an EOD Tech. I take care of IEDs and other UXO (Unexploded ordinance)
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