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Your friendly neighborhood stalker welcomes you!

Please, take a seat; i already knew you were arriving, so I prepared a little performance.
*starts dancing the Riverdance*
*falls on ground and blacks out*
...miserable fail...

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Dinh AaronMk said
As per TwistedSun, what got me more was more the critic in me than anything else. Chivalry is not synonymous with "cavalry", and it's spelled "agriculture". That aside, I'm feeling wary on the almost mary-sue tier, physically perfect race of angel-people (furry wings too? Those better just be vestigial). And apart from the magic, which I brought up in my last post: I feel it's best to let OP have the final say. So we could fly be the assumption that it doesn't exist for now and leave it in the app, but never invoke it in IC until Feigling comes back from Spain, or you could wait for Feigling to come back to review your application himself and give the final say.Also that damn Assassin's Creed flag.


Leaving aside errors, which can occur even to any native english speaker (or writer), would you try to specify? What do you exactly intend for 'Mary Sue'? Where did i mention physical perfection? I'd like more constructive criticism, if possible.
About the wings: If i understood correctly what you meant, haven't I in fact said that those are remnants made of fur, of the original feathered ones?
About magic: is there a specific reason why it is so vehemently denied?
About the flag: It's the best looking and fitting i found on the web >.>
I fear I will not be able to release it today... still so many wipped parts. Not to mention i now must go to sleep, cuz otherwise I will probably end with being a zombie tomorrow >.>
I'm working! I'm working on ym nation sheet Dx ! How long will it take...?
I thought magic was allowed, only if not over-powered.
Completed my massive nation sheet as well. Cannot wait to hear the result! *fidgets like a japanese school girl*
NewSun said
*suddenly realises mistake of mentioning specific plane designation* Eghhhhh... Is your idea not possible within the Verdance?


If you would accept an entire plane to burn under the march of progress, there's no problem (I've found a way to keep in with at least one theme, sorry).
Anyway, It's CREATION TIME!!
*runs away shrieking like a maniac, preparing his twelve pages long plane*
NewSun said
I wouldn't expect Milieu to reverse his claim, he had a hand in designing the plane upon a specific request. The idea sounded pretty cool to me so we worked together to build something that would be appropriate. I mean if you can convince him, remind me never ever to screw with you ;) You do have a claim on the Verdance, though. Do you wish to keep it?


May I firstly try to convince you to make a specific plane before expressing myself on the subject :D ?
Man. I came too late. I had in mind of suggesting a sky world too xD.
Oh well, unless Milieu accepts a change of reservations I'll just follow the path I've chosen.
NewSun said
I'll add that you're interested in it. Nobody else has their eyes on it, though. I think you're safe ;)-They should embody one or more of the themes, yes. -Via Exáriá, the Nexus. Each plane has a gateway to it, and the Nexus contains respective gateways to each plane. -As great an extent as you feel you need for your faction. It's really up to you. If something is too over the top i'd let you know, but you have freedom here, especially when designing a faction based on an outer-plane world. -You can designate as much of the plane as you like, obviously provided the provided descriptions and themes still ring true. Go nuts!


Phew xD
As soon as I found this NRP I ran into garrisons to take a nice spot! Thank you for answering to my doubts.

T h e E t e r n a l V e r d a n c e


A supposedly infinite plane of tainted life. Towering trees and mysterious waterfalls stretch far beyond the horizon - one can easily find themselves lost within the haunted undergrowth, where the sun is quickly blotted out by a canopy that is as thick as it is imposing. Fél Válásí may have once been a land dedicated to life and all it's wonders, but if true, that no longer so. None can say what spirits, beasts and twisted creatures lurk within the never-ending maze of the Verdance.

Themes
Beasts
Natural Spirits
Nature
Life
R u l i n g F a c t i o n
Name: Eèl Hétrya Válásí
Size: Roughly a steady number of Velusians of 3600+







D e m o n L o r d
Name: Kráthin Eéleá
Type: The Verdance avatar








T h e H o l d i n g
Name: The Karg(/k)ath - Vethuviá
Type: Citadel with annexed territory.



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