UnendingEmpire

Deep Ground Online

All this talk about stealth right after I get off of World of Warcraft...as a rogue.

I'll bet you guys were talking about demon horses and DoT spells about an hour ago >.>

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I took the liberty of pulling some reviews on it. Listing them in the below hider.
(inb4youcan'tputquotesinhiders)

EzekarraKeono said After recently finishing your other fanfic, poisonous chinese tea, i said it was the best touhou fanfic ive read so far. I take it back. :p this story was not only hilarious, but surprising to say the least! Quite a few unexpected twists! I kept getting the hint that *EDITED FOR SPOILERS* and when i found it to be true i couldnt help but shout YES triumphantly. Haha. Also, is it just me, or are all the littler sisters in Gensokyo straight up insane? Lol. Freakin amazing story, cant wait to read more of your work! Love it all so far!

(NOTE: Read Poisonous Chinese Tea if you want, but it's not quite as good as my other stuff. Then again, it is the first)

TheSilentLord said So it's finally over, eh?

And a really cute ending, too - YAY for that! I love especially the way you *EDITED FOR SPOILERS* :-)

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Anyways, while i read the last chapter, i understood why i would say this fic was so good as it is. It was the feeling of "oh, crap, no more updates coming? I'd wanted to read more of it!" But this is just the right feeling you should have after reading a good story, IMO. It's a bit sad when you know it's over, but at the same time you'll know the story really was good if it ending made you sad. Better to retire when you're the champion and not wait until you get dethroned, if you get what i mean. (I'm not a native english speaker so i'm not sure if the saying goes this way in english, too)

Well, enough of my ramblings on endings and my feelings about them! I was always waiting for new updates - and will still be, now just for your other stories. Keep the flag high and the chapters rolling! I'm sure there are a lot more people appreciating your work than the comments solely might tell.

Psykoakuma said Hey now.

That was nicely done! Mokou got the good end, YAY! Cute, funny and not overwrought with any extraneousness.

I can't think of anyone more fitting to *EDITED FOR SPOILERS*. Sweet!

Azure Xuchilbara said Oh my

It seems that the two MILFs-er, I mean Keine and Eirin will teach the two feuding brats the meaning of friendship and whatnot (and maybe more) by these 'series of events' they plan for the two...

Will Moko-tan and NEETeruyo suspect anything..?

Nevertheless, this was a cute and lovely start on this KaguMoko tale...

*sighs*

I love those two to death

Ascoeur said MOAR!

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The two things I mentioned are both fanfics I wrote, A Magician's Chronicle and Kaguya Vs. Mokou.

As for create.swf, I wind up coming short on a scenario, go "I'm sure Danbooru has something", and that's the gist of it. But then I end up not leaving Danbooru.

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TheWindel said A bold move. One that you all might end up regretting~ >:)

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Xaltwind said Not that I know what yours - Trollpire's - fanfics are like, but I most honestly wouldn't bother to read them either, as I'm lazy~

They mostly get good reviews; from what I hear it's good characterization, good humor, decent plots, though the pace can be a bit rushed now and then. But I wouldn't bother reading anything from before A Magician's Chronicle...'cept Kaguya Vs. Mokou. That's probably still my favorite one :3

Xaltwind said And how the heck do you get from create.swf to danbooru....? o_O;

Are you sure you want the answer?

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Lucius Cypher said Cool, cool, so maybe Donny could run into Shou? Is Shou one of the more higher-ranking Sweepers who'd be hired by the Erasers for hits, or is she just one of the self-proclaimed Sweepers who fight for their ideology?

Given her shiny win-loss record and how fierce her melee abilities are, I'd say she's just below the higher-ranking Sweepers and not only specializes in launching a solo hit on an Outlaw in-game, but savors it.

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Lucius Cypher said Hmm... How about we collaborate? I don't really need to post as Donny but perhaps we could bring him and one of your characters some face-to-face interaction. Restu is going to be busy dealing with meeting Tsugumi so I have plenty to write for her.

Shou isn't doing anything, and she happens to be a fellow Sweeper. A collab would be pretty cool.

That said, got a post for Fiona & Ariel up. Ariel be makin' moves up in here.

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~Fiona~

Attention! Attention! All players will be forcefully logged out of Deep Ground Online due to internal errors and damages! Attention! Attention! All players will be forcefully logged out immediately!

Damn. I didn't even reach the tower. A little upset that Fiona didn't get the chance to meet the Black King just yet, she let Deep Ground do what it had to regardless. No point sticking around if the game had internal damages. Who knew what kind of effects that could have on a person? Fiona was already short an arm, and she wasn't willing to lose something else too. Not for something like getting to meet the Black King, however much it was her goal at the moment. Instead, Fiona leaned back in her seat and linked back up to the World Interface, taking a look at the DGP forums. As the threads could hint, most people seemed pretty riled up at the moment. And then...

"Attention all students of Purple Crown Academy and of the World Interface. Please, do not be alarmed by the sudden technical difficulties we are enduring right now. Our team is investigating the matter thoroughly and it appears that it was only a massive lag caused by an influx of enemy NPCs. Deep Ground Online will be functional again in the following day.”

“And now, a message from the Black King. She deeply apologizes for the missed opportunity for the majority of you in meeting her. However, she states that for all of those who pledge allegiance to the Ebony Strykers, the next Guild meeting shall be tomorrow within the Black Kingdom, the same as today. And….the Black King has made her first orders to her new Guild. She desires for all of her followers to hunt down and bring her the player known as Corpse Collector to Black Kingdom as soon as possible. That is all. Thank you for your time and patience. Oh…and welcome to the Ebony Strykers.”

Corpse Collector? Who was that? In any case, Fiona's gut told her things were going to get interesting...

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~Ariel~

"Think of it like a direct order from your King," Alex said to a lesser guildmate with a tone smooth enough to make a baby's bottom jealous. "Sunday at four sound good? I really think we can co-operate better if we get to...know each other..." For the course of about five seconds, Alex's entire expression went blank. And when it re-ignited, the fierce glint in the eyes was unmistakable. Immediately straightening her posture, Alex looked at the lesser Harley and asked "What did I do?"

"I-I'm pretty sure you asked me on a date..."

"Cancel it. We need to figure out this Black King--"

“And now, a message from the Black King. She deeply apologizes for the missed opportunity for the majority of you in meeting her. However, she states that for all of those who pledge allegiance to the Ebony Strykers, the next Guild meeting shall be tomorrow within the Black Kingdom, the same as today. And….the Black King has made her first orders to her new Guild. She desires for all of her followers to hunt down and bring her the player known as Corpse Collector to Black Kingdom as soon as possible. That is all. Thank you for your time and patience. Oh…and welcome to the Ebony Strykers.”

"...speak of the devil. She sends her lackey to deliver the message like always." Looking at her guildmate, Ariel said "Go spread the word to the other Harleys that we'll also be having a guild meeting. Tomorrow, in the Red Kingdom's throne room. Failure to attend from any single member will not be tolerated. And make sure they don't talk about it on the forums."

"Aye-aye, ma'am!" The lesser Harley took off, looking for any sign of her guildmates.

As for Ariel, she had things to figure out. Who was the Black King? Who was Corpse Collector, and why was she anything of a concern? And of course, how many guildmates could she find today to spread the word to? And could she form an alliance with the other Kings in light of these new circumstances. Linking up to the World Interface, Ariel started up a thread of her own. The title? Calling All Kings The content?

In light of the Black King coming out, DGP crashing, and a big announcement calling out one player specifically, we obviously have things to discuss. By that, I mean everybody who wasn't an enigma before today. With the exclusion of the Black King, I'm hereby calling a meeting for the six of us; as I said, we've obviously got things to discuss in light of these new circumstances. Show up at the library during lunch tomorrow. Kings only.

I'll be waiting.

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Lucius Cypher said Speaking of posting, not sure if I should post now with Donny and Restu or wait for everyone else to get something up.

Please do not post before me this time @_@

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Your co-GM is still working on a post ^~^; y'all post really fast.