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I for one say go for both. A larger card pool never hurts :)

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MightyGos said Well that's some valuable information right there! I have no Speed Spells planned for that!

Our hero-to-be has no Spell Cards - let alone Speed Spells - if construction goes as planned.

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The Headmaster turned to Michelle and told her: "I'll explain when we get there! Now we have to hurry!" Speeding through the campus grounds, they reached the clearing behind the Slifer Red dormitory. In a corner, a boy was lying unconscious, his deck scattered on the ground and his Duel Disk apparently fried. Pointing to the bird on his shoulder with one hand and pulling a card out of his pocket with the other hand, the headmaster said "Captain found this boy like this, and led me to him. I can't say for sure what caused this, but I'm not about to let something like this continue on this campus." Revealing the card to the group with him - Fabled Lurrie - Kolman continued "This card was on the boy when I found him. Since the lot of you with Spirit Partners are among the best we've got, I'd like for most of you kids to look into this elsewhere while I investigate here. Mr. Franklin, you'll be joining them for safety's sake; a bunch of students walking around in this situation sounds a bit risky, given this boy's state." Handing the card to Akio, he finished explaining the situation with "The children have Spirit Partners; they should be able to track this card back to its original owner. That's why I called them here."

Akio was taken aback: "I... understand, Mr. Kolman... but may I ask... why me, specifically? I mean... if it's really what it looks like, wouldn't it be better if you sent an actual professor with them? I'm sure many of the teachers are better duelists than I am".

"For a couple of reasons," Headmaster Kolman answered, lifting up the boy and slinging him over the shoulder that wasn't currently occupied by a well-behaved bird of prey. "First and foremost, I have a hunch that your deck would be effective against the culprit, based on the card. Secondly, you happened to be the first staff member I spotted, and the professors are all busy at present regardless. And finally, you seem to be a very intelligent young man; that's always a good thing to have when investigating something." Starting back toward the main building, Kolman concluded "For now, take Kine and Black with you. I'll keep MacBeth and Yamaguchi here with me in case this happens again while you three are away."

Being saddled with that kind of responsibility was definitely what Akio didn't want, but he couldn't say no to the Headmaster. Still, he was right. His deck would probably be really useful against a Fabled deck. They WERE, after all, LIGHT monsters. "Well... okay", Akio answered, "I'll start looking for the criminal at once, Mr. Headmaster. You two", he told Kim and Michelle, "Spirit Partners can trace images from the past of an object or something like that, right? Yours can do it?"

A high-pitched screech-like roar from Falco answered Akio. And to translate, Kim. "Falco says that it's something like that. If they hold the card, they can track down the spirit it belongs to; holding this card would at least get us in the right direction. Only, he doesn't have hands..." Looking at Michelle and her Spirit Partner, Kim said "Freya will have to do the tracking."

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UE Cards, Volume 1
Alright, here's the first set of cards I'll contribute. It contains...

These cards

Apprentice Charmer Team
Asura Blade
Blazing Fist Ninja
City of Tuscarora
Conductor Angel
Covert Kenshin
Dark Paladin Girl
Dread Knight Deephelm
Dune Warrior
Egg of Tuscarora
Elements Amok!
Elite Cavalry Unit
Evil HERO Necro Lich
Exploding Pumpkin
Fiend's Crusader
Ice Priestess
Mad Jack the Pumpkin Lantern
Mad Jack the Pumpkin Lord of Nightmares
Mad Jack's Assassin
Mad Jack's Nightmare Castle
Mad Jack's Pumpkaster Disciple
Mad Jack's Snatch Carriage
Mad Shogun
Mechanomancer Witch
Mystic Empowerment
Pumpkaster Alchemist
Pumpkaster Apprentice
Pumpkaster Black
Pumpkaster Imp
Pumpkaster Necro
Pumpkin Nightmare City
Rift Sphere
Robber of the Pumpkin Patch
Steel Core of Koa'ki Meiru
Tuscaroran Ambush
Tuscaroran Ghost Ship
Tuscaroran Hunter
Tuscaroran Jellyfish
Tuscaroran Mermaid
Tuscaroran Queen
Tuscaroran Sorceress
View of the Nightmare Castle

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If nobody else wants to be the hero, I'll do it. Also, with YCM now functional again, I can do two things.
1) I'm now able to link the cardmaking tutorial Rethel mentioned, as well as an OGG guide (also referred to as OCG, but I use OGG) that sprung up as well.
2) I now have a batch of almost 50 cards to deposit, including two archetypes and a whole lot of general support cards for other deck types. Should I upload them in a .zip format and just link that, or do the long-ass list, or...?

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Rethel34 said EDIT: Honestly, they look good to me, Scar. If Empire agrees I'll add them to the first post

If Rethel's cool with them, I'm not one to debate that \(=w=)/

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Rethel34 said Oh, on the Man-Eaters, the reason I left "Man-Eating Black Shark" out most of the time is that he's a Fusion Monster and therefore can't be in your Deck or your hand. However, he can be in the Graveyard, which was why he was included in "Caramel's" effect. If you think I should fix it, I will, but I'm just offering my explanation.And thanks for those grammar catches, there. Those two cards were kind of made on-the-spot yesterday. :)

No problem :)

As for Black Shark, I wasn't really even aware it existed at all, and just sort of assumed it was another old-timey Normal Monster I'd never seen before. Though if that's the case, you should also add his name to Man-Eating Licorice's effect, since it affects "Man-Eating" monsters on the field.

EDIT: @Charak: ...Silver Fang IS a "Fang" monster :| so are Flyfang and Naturia Spiderfang

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1Charak2 said explain this slowly what i did wrong with this card

Effect-wise, nothing really. It's just your OGG (Official Game Grammar) needing correction is all. (Yes, I'm nitpicking. It's not even noon here and I haven't had breakfast yet, so just bear with me here.)

That aside...
@Rethel:

My review of your cards

(Didn't bother with the Speed Spells since I've got faith in your cardmaking abilities)
Alright, the first and only notable "error" I noticed out of the whole lot was that you only added "Man-Eating Black Shark" to the effect text of Man-Eating Caramel; the others still only mention "Man-Eating Treasure Chest" and "Man-Eating Plant". That one aside, I noticed the grammar on two of your Normal Monsters was a little wonky or missing words, and I've listed "corrected" versions below. In addition to these, Aspiring HERO Burnshot's text may want to use "unleashed" in place of "released", as "after his Firespout attack is released" might imply it was sealed away or some such ^_^; but that - as with everything I'm critiquing - is just me nitpicking like crazy.

Dark Magic Scholar: A student of the "Dark Magician". He has already studied a great deal, but there is yet much left for him to learn.
(The second sentence on this still remains kinda wonky-sounding. I might suggest changing it to "He has already studied a great deal, but there is still much left for him to learn." instead of "yet much left".)

Hundred-Eyes Scorpion: This scorpion's prey cannot hide from its all-seeing gaze...nor can its predators.
(Using "and nor" is redundant, as "nor" is essentially used as a "negative 'and'" if that makes sense. "And nor can its predators" would almost be like "Its predators can can't hide" or something like that.)

However, they were all greatly balanced, and I look forward to seeing them used in the IC whenever it starts :)

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1Charak2 said Ah This card is what Charak shall recieve later ...

Let's see now...

OGG Correction said 5 Level 3 Beast-Type monsters
As long as this card has an Xyz Material, it gains 200 ATK for each face-up "Fang" monster on the field. Once per turn, you can detach one Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 "Fang" monster from your Graveyard.

Please Charak, OGG isn't that hard to learn or adhere to.

@Rethel: I just sorta skimmed through looking for the Man-Eating sweets, as it was getting kinda late where I was. Planning to have a more in-depth look at things today at some point.

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Rethel34 said Now there is a decent number of Normal and Effect Monsters, 4 Synchro Monsters (b/c of Lightwaves and Mono-Tuning), and 8 Ignis Monsters (some ATK, some DEF to give variety) all in the first post. I'll get around to putting some of you guys' stuff in that post tomorrow. And maybe I'll get a CS done.

Man-Eating Cake called. He's feeling kinda sour that you forgot to add him and his deliciously deadly pals.
(I can go retrieve their data if you want)