The grammar and spelling of the app needs to be fix, as well as the general organization of the paragraphs. The Cthulhu idea is also not serious and needs to be axed entirely.
Oh ok, is that all, I thought it was something actually history wise. That should be easy.
So this will be how it goes, I make a sentence, then the person under me makes a Sentence, so on and so forth, and we make a story. The only real rule other then that is the next sentence has to rhyme. Its that simple, so lets start.