Review time! Pleasantly surprised that there weren't as many concerns or issues that I needed to raise with people. In fact; feel free to put your character sheets in the CS tab once you're finished addressing any potential changes. Gonna accept everyone right from the get-go given my impressions from the sheets and that the cast size is perfect for what I want.
Though, however, I am going to make changes to Glenview. It now has an extra story, with the bottom floor reserved for the amenities and other things like mailboxes while the apartments start on the second floor. Change your apartment # as you wish.
@rezay - I'd like to know a little more about Wyatt's "petty criminality and drag racing" in his biography. Also:
He lived with his mother, father, and two sisters until the age of 14, when his father and younger brother were killed by a drunk driver.
I happened to notice you left the brother out of the first half of the sentence. Nothing really of note, but I figured to bring it up anyway. Maybe just rewrite the "mother, father, and two sisters" part to say just say family instead of restating father and younger brother.
@corneredbliss - Nothing to note/no concerns or issues for Mari!
@Xandrya - My main concern with Emma is that there is
a lot to unpack in her background. Lots of ups and downs. Personally, I would try to streamline her background since it feels too sandwiched with tragedies, if that makes any sense. But ultimately it is your call if you want to make changes.
@Bartimaeus - Nothing in particular that concerns me regarding Vesper's sheet!
@Wolvena - iPods weren't around in 1994. I'd suggest swapping it out for a cassette player (walkmans), or an early portable CD player, as both were around at this time.
@Kyrisse - Nothing of note that raises issues with Allegra!
@Infinite Cosmos - Nothing particular that worries or concerns me about Kai's sheet!