@my Lalia I have completed my character sheet (excluding the 'opinions' section.) I was wondering if you could give me your insight on how I may make it better? :)
I am having so much trouble finding a suitable monster/creature for my character >_< I was wanting to find something along the lines of demon-like and wolf-like but I didn't want to go all full blown werewolf because my character relies on stealth, intimidation, and speed, not strength and brute force. I can't find aaannyyyttthhiiinnnggg, this is what I get for being picky I guess lmao xD
Why not try a fox demon? Foxes use stealth, speed and intimidation. :)
Lizbeth is a rather short girl, standing at a mere 5'2" and weighing only a tad over 100lbs. Her hair is a dirty blonde with powder blue eyes.
Lizbeth, once transformed, becomes very lithe. Long, slender limbs and petite figure standing at 6'0" and weighing the same. Her hair becomes raven black and her eyes seem to be hollow and lifeless with a purple, glowing hue.
Generic Information
Name: Lizbeth D'Veaux. Gender: Female. Age: Twenty (20). Height: 5'2" Sexuality: Bisexual (Leaning more towards Homosexuality).
Psych Profile
Traits
Resourceful - Lizbeth is rather clever when it comes to resolving issues and finding solutions. Able to utilize unsuspecting objects to suit an unrelated goal.
Charismatic - Though this isn't something she always is but she knows how to turn it on when needed. Lizbeth is rather kept to herself and reserved on most occasions but when necessary she can be rather charming and persuasive.
Even Tempered - Lizbeth is rather well mannered and incredibly hard to upset.
Flaws
Afraid - Lizbeth lives in a constant fear of becoming overcome by her monstrous side. Though no one would really see that as it is well hidden.
Paranoid - Lizbeth is a bit prone to paranoia when it comes to people true intentions. It is rather difficult for Lizbeth to gain trust in someone.
Intimacy - Though intimacy makes a succubus stronger it always restricts Lizbeth's ability to focus as her fear overwhelms her of succumbing to her desires. Making intimacy a double edged sword for Lizbeth.
Holy Relics - Holy relics of any type cause serious damage to her body. Painful burns if only touched for a few moments.
Backstory: Unlike most people found under the thumb of Lord Nixus Lizbeth isn't royalty of any kind. Lizbeth was born and raised as a street urchin. Stealing to survive and learning to charm her way into getting the things she couldn't steal. This has even lead to more... intimate services for the more important things. A service she hated to provide but she had to survive somehow.
Upon hearing of the invitations being given out to a masquerade held by the famous Lord Nixus she knew if she found someone with an invite and follow them to the estate. Following her plan she found a target and followed them to the estate, seeing as the staff was busy with the guests she found a window in the back of the estate. Though what her luck was very unfortunate as it was the window into Lord Nixus' personal office. Where he sat alone by the fire place. A smirk on his lips wide enough to make her think he was expecting her.
That was the last time she was human. At least entirely human. Though often she barely feels human at all anymore. Lizbeth is now the incarnation of what she hates. Carnal desires and lust, the one thing she hated to do to survive is now the only thing she needs to do to survive.
Character Motivation: Her strongest desire is to find a cure and become a human again; to live without these painful desires.
Name:Tuwali Kh'lul. Age:Twenty-two (22). Gender:Female. Kingdom:She belongs to no Kingdom though her residence is in the outskirts of the Water Kingdom.
Appearance: Tuwali is quite a small yet very muscular girl standing at a mere 4'11". She has long white hair that is messily styled and reaches a few inches past her waistline. She has dark tanned skin covered in primitive and jagged tattoos. She wears furs and random pieces of armor about her body. Her eyes are a dark Orange color.
Persona: Tuwali is a rather oddball. Years without social interaction has given her no skills in the area. She is often invading peoples personal bubbles either inspecting them or just.... being way to close for no reason. She simply just doesn't get what is appropriate and what isn't. Despite all this she is a rather kind girl if not a bit blunt.
Equipment: -A large Axe/Scythe weapon that is crudely sharpened. -A clawed right forearm bracer. -Heavy boots with rough talons.
Ability/Magic/Technology: Augmentation Magic - Tuwali is able to flow magic through her own body that increases different aspects of her physical capabilities. When she augments herself the region affected makes the tattoos glow a bright yellow.
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