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Usan wa Biru mènt nemwe ase

The mountains seem different tonight


December 20th, 2056


"What's your name?" asked the Cindorayi officer.

"Mori Dar na ye?" (What is your name) repeated the interpretor, Omatu Gumira (Unconstrained Equilibrium).

"Rom Mènt Vine Dar oode yèng ko fa" (I am called Simple Forces), answered the handcuffed Adanaya, looking at the collaborator with steely eyes.

The officer asked them if they knew what they were accused of. Simple Forces shook their head.

"You've been distributing seditious leaflets, haven't you?" asked the Cindorayi like a statement, glancing at the prisoner from aside.

"I don't know what you mean." placidly replied the Adanaya.

"We have the proof, you know. And you know it full well. You'll be executed for this", said the officer without any alteration of her voice. "It's truly unfortunate what you force us to do. If you were a thief, it would be alright, we would put you to work and you could become a productive member of society. But this sort of thing, we can't tolerate. Minds are our most precious asset. But you know that, since you picked this battlefield."

"Why are you telling me this? If it's true just kill me. If it isn't, what's the difference anyway?" quietly said the prisoner.

"Do you deny it?"

"I deny it. But you mind is made, so why even bother asking me?"

"Do you know what happens to terrorists and those who enable them, like you?"

Simple Forces remained silent.

"You'll discover soon enough. The rumors fall far short of the truth." she said with an evil grin. "Up there, on the slopes of the volcano, every breath does feel like an asphyxiation. It's rather unpleasant. Now, I know you think you are a hero. You don't care about yourself. You are defending your people from oppression." She paused for maximum effect – Unconstrained Equilibrium knew her tricks. They'd seen her do it a thousand times. "Well you're not. You're grievously mistaken. It's those like you, in fact, who insist on making your people miserable. You sow pain and misery everywhere you go. You could've stayed neutral in the war. We didn't harm the neutrals; we respected their sovereignty. They still live in peace and prosperity. And now, we've given your people a second chance on Cindorya. It's a new world; we thought we could start anew. You have disappointed us at every opportunity. A-11 looks like a prison: you made it into a prison for yourselves. We wanted peace, but you chose war. All this time, you have been the sole authors of your demise. Do you know how much those you claim to be defending will suffer because of you? Now that you've chosen to break the rules, how can we be sure of your family's trustworthiness?"

"Hostages" thought Unconstrained Equilibrium. The officer loved letting prisoners finish her thoughts. She was convinced it made her fantastically vicious. She had built up the pressure. Now she would would offer an alternative to the prisoner.

"Show them you love them and put an end to this violence. Look at them", she said while pointing at Unconstrained Equilibrium. "They were caught trying to throw a bomb at Chief Commander. They ended up killing twelve of your own kind. Such an idiot. Senseless violence, isn't it? That's what we made them realize. Now they and their family live safely under our protection, because they have pledged allegiance to our empire."
Unconstrained Equilibrium could feel the cold contempt they had for them. The prisoner was very subtly lighting up. If they could have they would've insulted them just like that. But they knew the cameras could catch it.
The prisoner's mouth remained utterly shut. This one would be tough.

The officer wasn't one to let go so easily. "Are you afraid we won't keep our word? We are a people of soldiers; honor means everything to us. We promised we would destroy your nation; that's what we did. It wasn't out of cruelty, but of necessity. And now necessity commands that order be restored and that cannons be lowered to the ground.
You can see for yourself that those who have the humility to recognize their mistakes are treated well. They walk freely among you and us."
Outside a column of prisoners marched by in rythm.

Unconstrained Equilibrium's mind started wandering off. They had translated so many of these interrogations that they barely had to be conscious to do the job anymore. They could part their mind in two, let one half run smoothly like a machine, and the other escape from the walls of the compound.
The barracks were neatly aligned around the forbidding bunker-like structure housing the intelligence activities, made of interlocking cubes. The room had a long window running along the entire upper half of the wall, which provided an open perspective on the empty avenues of the central command, the sprawl of tents and shacks of camp A-11 beyond it, and the mountains in the distance.
Some wind was sweeping dust across the alleeways, adding some grey to the sky, over grey buildings, grey roads and grey vehicles. In the distance a haphazardly-built watertower was precariously tilting in the wind. That was beyond the pale delimiting the Cindorayi quarter, which was in essence a glorified barrack with luxury shops and bright cafés.
Besides soldiers, only Cindorayi engineers and their families were willing to come to the Valley. But they were handsomely compensated for the inconvenience of moving so far from civilization. That was unlike the Adanaya, whose arms had been put to use to extract the incredible mineral resources of the Valley. They lived in the shantytown surrounding the central command, between the inner wall and the outer wall beyond which no one could trespass at night. The splendid snowcapped mountains could never be approached; they were only to be dug under. In fact there was no need for the outer wall; the mountains marked the outer limit of the imagination. There was no world beyond them, hence nowhere to escape.

The officer was still at it. "If you don't care to live, at least tell me what you know so others don't need to die miserably like this." She was whispering, half-threatening, half-soothing.

The prisoner was on their knees now, coughing blood. "Awaye", he muttered. Unconstrained Equilibrium declined to translate this unspeakable profanity. They were holding on well, they thought. Quite a bit longer than most of the others.

It went on for several hours. At last they relented.

"Why are you doing this?" yelled out Silent Forces. "I can't take any more. Just finish me off." It seemed a blood-thirsty creature had lacerated their body. They were lying on the ground, grey with deep red stains.

Officer Haraja took out her respectful and dignified face, which she used to hide a triumphant smirk. She helped them up, and sat them back on their chair.
"Tell me what you know and we'll end this."

"What..."

"Who", she corrected gently. At this stage, she acted like a confidante. The metamorphosis was quite spectacular. "Who are you associates? Who printed the leaflets? Where do you store them?"

Their breath was short now. Like in the mountains. "A dream was made... they helped me. They are the only... one I know. We... each know only one... person in the chain."

The officer looked like she had just lost ten years. She was radiating. "What is their role?"

"They distribute... the leaflets that are printed... outside the camp."

This was a bombshell. The resistance networks were not only linked between the camps, but had the means to transport equipment from one to the other. Officer Haraja would surely get promoted.

"Do you know anything else?"

"No... they told me what to do. I just gave them... out."

She nodded. "You see, you can be reasonable too."

Silent Forces closed their eyes. They were drained of all strength. Tears of blood flowed from their forehead. Their arms flailed behind.

"You'll be rewarded. Your family will be safe. Does that make you happy?"

They looked up, with half-opened eyes. The expression was completely blank. Were they seething with anger or thankful beyond measure? A few tears of waters mingled with the blood.

"It's time now. You've done well. I'm proud of you." The officer smiled.

The prisoner closed their eyes again, put their hands over their face. Haraja got closer, as if to embrace them. She took out a small metallic cylinder, and pressed it against the top of their neck. She clicked. When she let go, they fell to the ground. She left the room, beaming with pride. After a few minutes, Silent Forces stopped breathing. Their pulse slowed to a halt, and their skin cooled down.

They were quite handsome, after all.

January 1st, 2057


The room was cold and dreary. The Adanaya rebel leaders were gathered there, in a small bunker high up in the mountains. An unresolved tension hung in the air.

"Rakaw pamawde." (They choose loyalty) announced commander Yane Illa (Great Expectations) with their coarse voice. "The garrison in Yasheron has reaffirmed its loyalty to the emperor, despite the troops in Sennor (Sylvnor) siding with the protestors. Other towns have declared allegiance to the new regime. The latest to do so is Harma, at the southern tip of the lake. They're trapped now."

Captain Lira na Usan (Dream of the evening) seized the occasion. "Commander aKrajam (Flowing waters), it won't be long before the Cindorayi rebellion takes hold of the rest of the territory. When that is done, it'll take care of the remaining pockets of rebellion. Yasheron will be the first target. It's too precious, and an enemy holding it endangers the road to the space base."

Great Expectations asked, "What do you suggest?" bemusedly. Dream of the evening was ever the adventurer.

"We have to strike first. If we want to be respected by the new authorities in Sennor, we need to show out military and organisational abilities. Ideally, the garrison would surrender to us. When the army arrives, we'd already be in charge. We would have freed ourselves. Otherwise, who says what we'll become. Revolt against the emperor doesn't mean freedom for the Adanaya, despite the fancy words used in the declaration of independence. If we want to organize ourselves after it's over, that's the only option."

The others nodded. But naysayers quickly sprang forward. A lieutenant rightfully pointed out that, "We don't have the numbers. And even if we did, they'd never surrender to us. It would be complete dishonor for them. Why would they do such a thing when they can choose to surrender to a Cindorayi general?"

Dream of the Evening was clearly peeved by this comment. "What's the point of this meeting if we can't do anything?"

The lieutenant replied, "We should act realistically. What can we do? We have less than a thousand soldiers, we have a couple dozen armored vehicles, maybe ten surface-to-air batteries, equally few ground-to-ground missile launchers. We have no planes, no long range missiles. What are we going to do? They have twelve thousand troops. I don't even need to go on. We know they'll crush us if we face them head on."

Great Expectations cut the chattering short. "Captain Ramye (Force) is right. If we don't act before the army down south arrives, we'll never have the authority to negociate with Sennor. We all know how little the Cindorayi respect us. We'll only get from Verasha what we can impose on her."

The lieutenant cut him short. "We all know that. How do we impose anything on her?"

Great Expectations contained their irritation at the subordinate's arrogance. "We can't win if we face off against the full brunt of the Cindorayi forces. We need to keep them divided and get them by surprise. We'll be defeated if its drags on. We don't have the numbers to keep up a long fight. Besides, the PRC's forces won't leave us the opportunity for a long fight. That means we have to strike the heart and take it out. Once the center is down, and the army is on its way, there won't be any point dragging on the fight. They'll surrender."

The lieutenant gasped. "Strike A-11? That's impossible!"

Dream of the Evening pounced on the occasion. "It's possible if we attract the bulk of the troops out of the camp and keep them busy."

Again, "How do we keep them busy? We don't have the numbers."

"We don't have the numbers so we have to look like we do. We won't win this with the usual methods. We always knew that."

Great Expectations was about to present the grand master plan. "We can't attack the camps themselves. They're too heavily fortified. But we can attack the mines, which are more valuable and too spread out to be consistently defended. Take a few down, and the whole garrison will be in full alert. What we need is to empty A-11. While we keep up the pressure in the mines, that's when we use our agents in the camps to stir up some trouble. Except A-11 and A-10. A-10 is the smallest camp. If we draw out part of the troops stationed there, get some support inside, we could probably take over with a minimal taskforce of a hundred or so soldiers. If we can keep up the trouble in the other camps, there'll only be one option left for the Cindorayi: send troops from A-11. We can hold the siege long enough for the plan to work, or not, as long as we keep that contingent out of the way. Then, we lit the match within the camp, and strike from without."

A wave of nodding rippled through the room. The lieutenant started saying something, edging on their chair, then fell back. So it was.

A few hours passed. Despite the frenzied activity in the base, it was practically silent. Snow kept pouring from the sky, muting any sounds in the mountain.

In spite of being the author of the plan, Great Expectations was more than a little apprehensive. It appeared quite sound, but its success was contingent on everything going perfectly right. Everything would not go perfectly right. And they had so little time and so few ressources. The task ahead was daunting.

January 3rd, 2057



Great Expectations was swinging back and forth on their chair. When would the news come?

The radio shrieked. "Commander aKrajam here. Can you hear me?" Nobody answered. Another buzz. "Is there anyone?" They started fearing the worst.

"Captain Ramye here."

"Thank the ancestors! Has the mission succeeded?"

"Yes, but... there's something strange happening here."

"What is it?"

"We blew up three mine shafts, but then we realized... there were practically no soldiers guarding them. We took three down, before we realized most of the guard posts were empty. No one in the military command. Not only that, but there were no miners either. We approached camp A-6. Clearly something was going on. We could hear gun shots and saw some smoke rising. You should call our people on the ground to know what's going on."

"Thank you captain. I'll tell you if there is any new information."

What could be the matter? They hadn't yet given the order to start the uprisings.

Well someone else had apparently done it for them, informed their agents. Miners in A-7 had apparently refused to go to work early in the morning. They had been detained. That in itself wasn't overly surprising, especially given the context. But what was was the reaction of the denizens of A-7. A couple hundred had gathered at the gates of the military compound, demanding they be freed. It hadn't gone down very well; quickly the camp had erupted. Within short notice, similar events repeated elsewhere, in A-3, A-9 and without a doubt A-6. At the very moment, crowds were gathering in A-11 and A-10.

Who could be behind this? Verasha hadn't told them anything. There were other rebel groups, but none had the ability to cause such widespread mayhem. What should they do now? This could only help them, couldn't it?

While they were pondering these questions, a radio channel opened. It was unknown.

"Is this commander aKrajam?" asked a shaky voice.

"Yes, that's me. Who are you? Are you behind what's going on in the camp?"

"I am called Lènga Kisaan (Hope). I suppose you could say that. I am contacting you in the name of the Grey Shroud."

"The Grey Shroud? But you were destroyed with A-1!" exclaimed Great Expectations. It was the name of the main resistance group behind the only major uprising since the resettlement on Cindorya, in 2052. It had overrun A-1, the main camp and de facto capital of the valley of Yasheron. But the Cindorayi armed forces had gotten the better of it, and had reduced the entire camp to smoking rubbles, executing practically all of its former inhabitants. It then built A-11 right across from the river from A-1, leaving the ruins for all to see. The repression had been tremendously harsh. On top of the 17,000 Adanaya who had died in A-1, thousands more had 'vanished' in the remaining camps.

"We were nearly wiped out, but we survived. We reformed."

Great Expectations was thrilled to hear this good news, but also felt a sense of unease. "I am glad to hear that. But what do you want?"

"We need your help. We both want to free our kin. We have little time to do so. The PRC's forces are marching towards the valley. We need to act before they get here. We can't afford to wait for Cindorayi's mercy, however good their professed intentions are. We know your plan."

"How...!" Great Expectations was taken aback. The rebellion had been infiltrated at the highest level, and they didn't even know of the continued existence of this organization!

"We'll talk about this later. We had to keep things as secret as possible. Couldn't risk the same thing as in A-1."

"Alright." begrudgingly said Great Expectations.

"You can't capture A-11 in normal circumstances. We can provide you with the abnormal circumstances in which you can."

January 5th, 2057


It was only a matter of time now. The Cindorayi troops had lost control of most of A-11, or what was left of it. In the chaos of the past two days, a bunch of ragtag rebels had descended from the mountains and encircled the central command. The inner wall was breached in numerous sections, but for the time being, the Adanaya rebels, were kept at bay.

General Rogon was staring out the window. The snow storm had not abated since the events of late December. Down in the valley, it was uncommon enough for it to snow, due to the warm microclimate. Such a blizzard had simply never been witnessed since colonization had begun. It gave the fighting a surreal atmosphere. The blown-up buildings were now buried under a good meter of snow. The camp seemed to be made up of thousands of little white mounds. The shells caused a momentary commotion; then, all of a sudden, everything returned to its former stillness.

Sergeant Arsov entered the room and saluted. "General, we have bad news. The frontline has been breached at Velchin. The secessionists will soon be at the gates."

"Thank you, sergeant. You may resume duty."

"Yes, general." He departed.

Rogon turned towards Major Karika. "The sooner the better. We just need to hold on until then."

"Those savages will pay for it." she sneered. "We can't let them savour victory. Whatever happens, the emperor will soon put an end to this rebellion. And all who disobeyed will suffer dearly."

They returned to their still contemplation. Whatever their words, they were both exceedingly worried. It was just a pose. The general continously tapped his fingers on the window sill.

A detonation shook the building. The general rushed outside.

"What's going on?" he yelled in the corridor. An aide de camp quickly came to him. "There is a breach at level -3. We are stil evaluating how many intruders have entered the building."

"The building is breached! Prepare for combat! Join your units!" ordered the general. Soon would not be soon enough.

Several others buildings shook in the area.

Thanks to infitrated agents, the rebel troops had found their way around the network of underground tunnels undetected.

The Cindorayi fought well, but they were quickly overwhelmed, less by the rebel troops themselves than by the mass of hastily armed inhabitants of the camp, who were pouring in through the breaches in the wall. Communications within the central command had broken down.

"This is general Rogon, speaking to all units. I order you to cease resistance and to surrender. Follow the orders of the enemy troops and you will not be harmed. You fought well, soldiers." Rogon cut the radio and turned towards his captors. There was Tunye kam Gaya (Endless Ascent), leader of the Grey Shroud, and Great Expectations. Outside the compound, gunshots slowly stopped.

"We won't harm you." said Endless Ascent. "We need you."

"And why is that?"

"We need to judge you for your crimes against the Adanaya and against your own people." He ordered him to be carried away.

Endless Ascent and Great Expectations remained where they were for a couple minutes. They walked out on the balcony. The freezing wind hit their faces like a whip. It was evening now, and towards the south, the blizzard was clearing somewhat. A few weak sunrays reached them from behind the peaks.

"Usan wa biru mènt nemwe ase" (The mountains seem different tonight), said Great Expectations tersely. "They aren't the walls of our prison anymore. They're the walls of our home now." Endless Ascent nodded. After a while, they returned to their duties.

Outside the room, Endless Ascent was stopped by one of their agents. "Can I do what I was promised?"

"Yes, you may. She would've been sentenced anyway. We owe it to you for getting us in." As Endless Ascent walked out, they shook something off of their hands.

In a room with a long wall-to-wall window, a Cindorayi was bound to the chair. An Adanaya entered.

"Officer Haraja, I'm glad you survived." said Unconstrained Equilibrium.

She replied nothing.

"You don't have anything to tell me. I know everything you know. There's just one last thing I'd like to tell you."

She stared at him emotionless.

"Simple Forces lied to you. Unknowingly, admittedly. There is no such person as A dream was made. Your searches would have led nowhere. I would know, since that was my codename."

She frowned.

"It'll be quick. Please look at me."
At last!

Name of Nation: Adanaya Autonomous District (within the People's Republic of Cindorya)

Nation Characteristics:

The Void war represented a definitive break with the previous millenia of Adanaya history. Nevertheless, to understand what kind of society they have now and how it might evolve in the future, it is necessary to present the now-defunction institutions that organized Adanaya life.
The most ancient written records of urban settlements and organized government in the Adanaya lands date from the early 17th century BO (before origin, that is, the year zero of the Cindorayi calendar). The traditional start of the Adanaya calendar is the half-mythical unification of the Adanaya lands under the monarchy in 639 BO. Several dynasties ruled the empire over the course of the centuries, until the 12th century AO, when a succession of weak monarchs dying on the field of battle, in infancy, of diseases, or suffering from mental disabilities ultimately led to the de facto abolition of the function. Over time, indeed, the monarchs had established a vast bureaucracy to administer the far reaches of their empire, which became over the centuries the backbone of government, surviving civil wars, new dynasties, gaining every time more legitimacy and autonomy. By the 12th century, with the forward acceleration caused by the weakness of the monarchy, the administration had become fully autonomous, functioning without the need for any input from above. From then on, Adanaya society functioned without a political leader, governed and administrated instead by a sprawling bureaucracy and courts of law.
Adanaya society was until the Void war organized by a rigid caste system wherein birth determined occupation and social standing. The general categories were ashmirna (priests), sektan (soldiers), memirta (artisans), yashim (traders) and sid (farmers). Social life was highly codified, with social interactions, especially but not only between different castes, defined in the minutest detail.
The only major institution where the caste system did not apply was the government, where officials were hired by means of an entry exam open to all regardless of social status, where knowledge of the classics, law, religion, history and geography, as well as more specific fields relevant to each specific administration was tested (much like imperial China). The Adanaya government was divided in two independent sections: the administration, which made regulations and enforced them, which had a tendency to sprawl and to indefinitely extend its authority, and the courts, which judged compliance with regulations and with administrative statues and precedents, with a tendency to limit the administration's expansion. The courts were the first way through which the people could intervene in the political process. The administrations themselves were independent from each other, insofar as they had different fields of authority, though where there was overlap and mutual concern, coordination was ensured by countless commissions and committees. Over time, in the absence of any principle of representation, two positions had been created, the only two where elections applied: that of rajan (equivalent of Tribune of the Plebs), who represented the people as a whole, and could exercise in this capacity a wide range of discretionary powers, such as a power of veto, to propose regulations, to revoke officials, in certain conditions; that of wirani (equivalent of ombudsman), who could issue pardons and order new trials, or to revoke a judge.
Justifiably proud of their stable government, which could be traced back over 27 centuries with remarkable continuity, the Adanaya were even prouder of their culture, which had an even longer past and which had flowered over the centuries into myriad creations of the most varied nature. Regardless of the reality of their claim that theirs was by far the most accomplished culture on Nova Mondial, their lack of interest for the outside world was revelatory of the extreme cohesion of their society. Every institution served in a way to legitimate society and regulate it: the caste system naturalized the division of production, whereas the government, without any discernible conflict except the mechanism of courts, no transcendent figure such as a ruler, was not so much above society as an emanation of it, its face; religion was similarly immanent, as it was an ancestor cult which replaced every individual in an immemorial chain of beings, giving them a place in the universe.
Despite this, Adanaya society on the eve of its destruction in the Void war was already remarkably fragile. Industrialization had fragilized the bases of society, revealing the rigidities of a system that for millenia had avoided catastrophic upheaval. It had destroyed or transformed beyond recognition numerous ancient activities at the basis of the caste system, and had created new ones which had no place in it. Furthermore, the creation of vast amounts of new wealth both divided and reinforced the ruling classes: it weakened the primacy of the ashmirna class, but also concentrated industrial and financial capital in the hands of the yashim, the industrialists and bankers. But this left the other classes mired in poverty, and turned on its head the traditional mechanisms of solidarity and redistribution. Class conflict was constant and intense in the decades leading to the war.
The Void war was arguably the most significant event in Adanaya history since the end of the monarchy, if not the appearance of civilization itself. The Adanaya supported their traditional ally, the Aldabetan Republic, which resulted after their defeat in the complete destruction of both polities and their annexation by the Cindorayi empire (the Adanaya had always considered the Cindorayi to be little more than well-armed brutes). The Adanaya were evicted from their homeland and transfered to labor camps where they were forced to work for their new masters. When colonization of Cindorya was initiated in 2048, the empire took the initiative to resettle the totality of the remaining Adanaya population (save for a few thousand individuals who had found refuge in neutral states) to the planet, so as to avoid any threat of coordination with their former allies.
On Cindorya, the Adanaya were overwhelminingly put to use to exploit the exceptional mineral riches of the valley of Yasheron, in the heart of the volcanic mountain range which dominates the planet's main landmass (among which gold, silver, iron, silicon, copper, lead, titanium, and rare Earths). There, they were organized in a number of mining camps, where they were given some measure of autonomy by the Cindorayi overlords, in what amounted essentially to ghettos. The remainder of the population was used for farm work and domestic service. This was the situation when the revolution broke out, with some cooperation between the Adanaya and the Cindorayi revolutionaries beforehand. The Adanaya have suddenly been freed from their chains, and been recognized as their own political entity by the People's Republic of Cindorya, the Adanaia Autonomous district, but their society, government and culture have been nearly wiped out, leaving a terrifying and miraculous blank slate. What will arise from the ashes remains to be seen.

Nation Location: See below the map of Cindorya. The Adanaya Autonomous district (AAD) is located in the valley of Yasheron, in the center of the main landmass of the planet.



Nation Initial Population: Around 100,000 people. Due to the war, the violence exerted by the Cindorayi in the labor camps, starvation, diseases, the forced resettlement to Cindorya, over 90% of the population has been wiped out since the beginning of the Void war.

Species Name: Adanaya

Species Characteristics: See image below. The Adanaya stand on average around 1m60 to 1m80, and have a slender build. Their most noticeable physical features are their mouth from which sprout four tentacles, and their two horns/antennae, which they use to detect odors and air humidity with striking accuracy, as well as to amplify sounds they make. Their body is spotted with small black-and-green spots which are used to communicate and to express emotions using light signals of various colors. They are herbivores. The Adanaya are hermaphrodites, who can only reproduce in trios, with two individuals transmitting their fertilized material to a third.



Side Chosen in Void War: Aldabetan.
Technological Level: To the extent that they were slaves of the Cindorayi, who have now been freed, they have access to all technologies on Cindorya.

Special Resource: Yasheronian gas. It is the only known gas with magnetic properties. It emanates from the volcanic pits dominating the valley of Yesheron. It has a light blue hue, is odorless and inoffesive to living beings. It was discovered just a few months prior to the revolution.


"I am not a man of cliques"


I recently met the acclaimed author Farrokh Mirza Ramjan to discuss his most recent novel, Lower skies, published earlier this year. Here is the edited and condensed transcript of our conversation.

Ebrahim Arvindarian: Your editor told me you didn't expect your novel to be this successful.

Farrokh Mirza Ramjan: Certainly, I was very surprised when he told me the sales figures for the first month of publication. It's already on its second print, after less than six months. That's the first time that's happened to me.

E.A.: Your past efforts hadn't been overlooked by the public. It wasn't unreasonable to expect a breakout success someday.

F. M. R.: That's true, but the subject matter is nothing special. It's the story of two siblings, Arvind and Miryam, in the early 20th century, whose life is rather unremarkable, coming to terms with the disillusions of growing up in the world. That's been done a thousand times. I immensely admire Flaubert's Madame Bovary, and consider my own work vastly inferior.

E.A.: Every reviewer has noted the musicality of your prose, and for my part, I loved the deftness with which you handled the descriptions. They very quickly capture the essential traits of characters, places and objects. But don't you think its greatest merit, as far as its current success is concerned, is that it perfectly captures the mood of the Persian public right now?

F.M.R.: I suppose I can't be cleared of suspicions of contemporary afterthoughts.

E.A.: The Constitutional Revolution and its aftermath provides the backdrop for a significant part of the intrigue. This period of tremendous hope and even greater disappointment not only perfectly mirror the personal trajectory of the characters, but also the general arc of Persian history since the beginning of the century. The Constitution itself ultimately resulted in little change, just as the slow reconquest of sovereignty following the Great War did not produce many practical effects for the people. The current era is one of unmistakeable disappointment. I think your book really resonates with that.

F.M.R.: I believe that's one of the clearest and most honest expressions of what has been going on in this country I've heard in a while. More than any particular event, what I really wanted to render was a certain mood, a tendency, an atmosphere. I spent a few years in Brazil a while back. People over there, despite all proofs to the contrary, have an unbreakable faith in the future of their country. They feel that all it can do is go up. Every time I returned to visit, I was struck by how different the disposition of our countrymen is. It's not that Persians today are exactly pessimistic. I'd say the best qualifier would be tepid. No one knows what the future holds, and no one truly wants to know. The country has been stable enough in the past few decades, and I've seen it develop noticeably, at least in Tehran where my family lives. But there is a diffuse anxiety, an ominous feeling. I do think cynicism and resignation are more common here than elsewhere.

E.A.: Why do you think that is the case?

F.M.R.: I wouldn't want to get into trouble. [laughs] I think everyone knows that the current situation is unsustainable, but no one knows when or how it'll change, for the better or the worse. Hope was never my forte. My gut feeling is usually that things have to get much worse before they get better. [laughs]

E.A.: Is that an adage you apply to your daily life as well?

F.M.R.: Oh yes, undoubtedly. However, I don't take myself too seriously. I always find the amusing in unpleasant situations. For instance, a few weeks back, I was taking the train to Tabriz. A very rude sir kept insisting that my seat was legitimately his. I could show you my ticket; he was wrong. I ended up relenting, and had to stay standing, since it was a very busy day. My mood wasn't darkened by his antics, though, since his oddly squeaking voice and habit of twitching his waxed mustache almost had me bursting into laughter.

E.A.: Humor is very noticeable in your novel. It is not often spectacular, but subtle irony, sometimes complicit and tender, sometimes harsh, is something I think many readers appreciated in it. What is particularly rewarding is that if often unfolds over many pages, so that it really seems to pay off emotionally. One thing that particularly struck me were the evolutions of the siblings' father Ali's positions. At first, he is rather unsure about the demands for the Constitution. Then, after encouragement and discussion with other traders in the bazaar, he becomes convinced, and remains so, for a long time, even after the Shah has the Majlis bombed. But then, there is a great silence about this issue, and towards the end of the novel, he's completely changed his mind, and announces so clearly and unequivocally, as if the entire novel hadn't happened, in terms that distinctly echo the beginning. It's never clear whether he believes what he says, what he said earlier, if he's become disillusioned, but it's simultaneously terribly funny and poignant.

F.M.R.: To me, humor works as an instrument of revelation. And contrarily to discourse, it has the merit of creating and revealing paradoxes and inconsistencies, but doesn't pretend to solve them. It says: "there is something here that is not as it should be". But it doesnt say what it is, nor where it should be. At least, that is how the best humor works. It's at its most efficient when it simultaneously hides and reveals melancholy. It's far more effective to underline the gap between successive personas without saying what nor how. Laughter, in a way, is the body's way of acknowledging the discrepancy between what it sees and what it thinks. It makes it more haunting. It makes you wonder: "What happened?" Someone changed, nothing changed.

E.A.: I think Ali is one of the more tragic figures in the novel. Ultimately, what makes his story so disheartening is the silence that surrounds him.

F.M.R.: Literature is at its most powerful when it suggests what cannot properly be said. It creates this space for the full expression of a feeling, and lets the reader inhabit it, without imposing anything. You know Ahmet Fulnani's famous closing words to The Tortoise: "Whereupon one cannot properly speak, one must remain silent." The buildup to this phrase is magnificent, but it is powerful enough that it retains much of its potency out of context. It's a radical act of humility. And humility makes the best literature.

E.A.: This attitude isn't one universally shared by Persian-language authors today. You must've heard of Aqa Dariush Hossein Sanjad's recent claim that 'literature's main task is to give men the tools to change their world". Some might say that you diminish the importance of literature, and keep it in a corner.

F.M.R.: I certainly believe self-aggrandizement is pointless. Literature is vital, but its position in society shouldn't be overstated. Hoping too much is the best way to be disappointed and turn your back on what can still deliver. If anything, that's the key takeaway from the novel. You have to have a realistic view of things. Some things literature can and should perform, and others it can't. Furthermore, recognizing the powers of art is one thing, and wielding them responsibly is another.

E.A.: What do you mean by that?

F.M.R.: Some authors today are celebrated for writing huge frescoes about the history of our nation, to – I quote- 'educate' the masses. It's all well and good, and often quite engrossing, but you have to be mindful of this: stories are always intrinsically a certain partial way of presenting the world. They put in shape the world, they don't imitate and copy it as if that were possible. Aristotle already knew that. Life isn't intelligible. It isn't. It's literature that puts it in order, organizes it, gives it something that ressembles meaning, or at least an explanatory principle. If you forget that, and present things as 'history itself', what you really are doing is reorganize the past with the schemes of thought that prevail in your time and seem natural, that is, those of the powerful. Even if you don't purposefully set out to justify the existing social order, by using the lens of today's powerful on the past, you do just that.
In my opinion, Persian literature today is thriving, but not where we think it is. The nearly official narratives that sell like hot cake are stale and sclerotic, propose nothing new, and are fundamentally reactionary in their effects if not their aims. Official recognition, especially [he pauses] in fact in general, is always something to be wary of. If you are recognized by power, you're captured by it, whether you want to or not. But where I really see promise is in authors such as Saddam Al-Jabari, Golshifteh Jepur, Ruhollah Reshdi, who are really exploring new ways of telling stories, or perceiving the world. What's the use in having different perspectives if everyone sees the same way? As Proust wrote, 'The pleasure that an author gives us, is the pleasure of discovering an additional universe."

E.A.: So if you were proposed an institutional award, would you accept it?

F.M.R.: If I were a fledgling author, maybe I'd say yes. The money and recognition are vital when you're just starting. But at the point where I am today, I don't think it's necessary. I want to remain as separate as possible from the literary establishment, which is really just an extension of the regular establishment.

E.A.: It's interesting that you would say such a thing, because you yourself have stated before that you didn't consider yourself to be at the avant-garde. I'm sure some young authors, even among those you mentioned, would reject your endorsement.

F.M.R.: Well, each generation grows up wanting to overthrow the previous one. We've all been there I suppose. I leave the formal innovations to others. I think there are many other things to discover from the sidelines. I am not a man of cliques, in a world where so much seems to depend on that. I don't want to be coerced into doing what upsets my writer's conscience.

E.A.: What is your greatest fear as an author?

F.M.R.: I've already said it, I believe. The greatest disappointment would be to be judged not based on my writings, but on preconceived notions of who I am, what I have done, who I have associated with. I want to be judged as a writer for my work, not as anything else. It seems obvious enough, yet it's a true fight to obtain it. John Hedgewood's plays are sublime, but they've been overshadowed by his involvement in the recent civil war. It's actually worse than that. He wasn't actively involved. He just happened to be friends with some of the separatist leaders.

E.A.: It's tremendously pleasant to discuss with you, Aqa, but my watch is telling me time is running fast. I'd like to mention this one last item before we part. One aspect of your novel that was universally commended was the treatment of youth. Arvind and Miryam's growth, their maturing,their doubts, hopes, enthusiasms and despairs are very tenderly rendered, in a way that feels perfectly organic. How did you manage that?

F.M.R.: Having children of my own is a formidable ressource, I feel. There are many obstacles that all authors try to avoid, with more or less success: making children and youths either too adult-like, too mature, treating them as others with no internal psychology, or not taking them seriously and patronizing them as characters. The key is really no different from the treatment of any other character: you have to take them seriously, and make an effort to understand them as full human beings, but also understand that they are not you, that they are distinct and unique. So you have to become them, but they also have to remain different from you. Being an author is always having to balance this act between self and other. One cannot avoid being divided.

E.A.: What do you think of today's youth in Persia?

F.M.R.: What I see is that their forebears, us, have left them little to be proud of, yet they retain a sense of optimism and energy. As seems to be the rule in this country, as soon as you get clear of anything official, possibilities and invention are bountiful. Some of these youths on the rise, such as the athlete Muhammad Elarbi or the actress Shirin Asmedyarov are doing fantastic things in their respective fields and for Persia in general. They seem to have a real desire to make this country better. Now will we let them? I don't know. But this generation might just be the one to achieve the promises of Persia.

E.A.: One last question. Where does the title come from? It's never mentioned in the novel.

F.M.R.: It's pretty simple, really. The siblings like to climb the mountains near Tehran, where it can get quite misty. When you climb a mountain on a cloudy day, it seems that the sky gets lower. You could say that with age, expectations and hopes flounder, as you face obstacles and see clearer that what you were aiming for wasn't all you hoped it would be. But on the other hand, you're higher than you started, right?

E.A.: I see. Thank you very much for your time, Aqa.

The Tehrani Courier, June 25th, 1960
(The main English-language newspaper in Iran, it caters mostly to expatriates. Government censorship is therefore much lighter than on Farsi papers.)
I finally finished the app for Persia, guys. Am I officially readmitted?
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Ottomans are technically Arabs ain't they?


NO SIR.

You just started a war.
Accidental doublepost.
Sublime State of Persia (دولت علیّه ایران - Dolate Aliyye Iran)







Persia entered the Great War only half a state. It left it even less than that.

Under the unstable tutelage of Russian and British imperialisms, it quite naturally became a battlefield between Ottoman and Russian forces in the Caucasus. The central government in Tehran, officially led by Ahmad Shah Qajar, held only nominal authority on its own country, and what little powers it did have depended entirely on the whims of the imperial powers.

The only force of some strength was the Persian Cossack Brigade, firmly held by its Russian commander, Vladimir von Maydell. However, as the war dragged on, and the Russian empire found itself embroiled in civil war, the nationalism always latent in Persian opinion reemerged. Reza Khan, the Persian commander of the Tabriz division of the Cossacks, set out to harness this power when he took over the entire brigade, and launched a coup in 1921 to take over the state and drive out the meddling foreigners. But the time was not ripe, and the foreigners still strong, despite years of an exhausting carnage. The czar had seen off the Bolshevik challenge, and the end of the war meant he could focus his attention on the semi-protectorate on his southern border. His troops promptly occupied Tehran, captured Reza Khan and executed him.

There was no more government to speak of. All of the institutions still existed: the monarchy, the Majlis, the government, the tribunals. They existed and that was all. Separatists and rebels of all stripes had planted their flag across the country. What saved the Persian State was ultimately what caused its most spectacular subjection in the short term: a Soviet Republic had been declared in 1920 in the province of Gilan. This was intolerable to the czar, who was in the midst of defeating his own Bolsheviks. The Republic was eliminated. Russia and Britain saw the necessity of stabilizing the country, in a way conducive to their interests. A board of regents was established to preside over the Shah and his government. Pro forma, it was helmed by a respected Persian general, loyal to the Qajar dynasty, Gassem Khan Vali. The reality of power lay in the hands of the British and Russian representatives, two for each country.

Under the helm of the regents, the country's fractious provinces were brought back under the control of the central government ie its protectors. Russia occupied the North, and Britain the South, continuing their pre-war arrangements. But the world had changed. Both great powers had seen their lustre pale significantly. Britain was confronted with regular troubles in its colonial dependencies, while Russia had been amputated of large sections of its European territories by the German empire.

Ahmad Shah, always full of goodwill, but inefficient and commanding little respect, was in no measure to reclaim Persia's sovereignty. Gassem Khan Vali proved to be a much shrewder politician. Loyal but with no illusions regarding the Qajars, he knew that power would come only from other quarters. Relying alternatively on the monarchy, the Majlis, which essentially represented the urban bourgeoisie, and the clergy, playing one imperial power against the other, he progressively reclaimed some autonomy. The Cossack brigade came under full Persian command in 1932, and became the core of something ressembling a functional modern army. Britain allowed a Persian to sit in the place of one of their representatives in 1938, knowing full well that the Anglo-Persian gave them ample leeway in any case. This place was garnered by another general.

Ahmad Shah and Gassem Khan Vali both died in 1939, replaced respectively by Fereydoun Mirza Shah Qajar and Arash Khan. Fereydoun was only 17; Arash Khan, with as few illusions about the monarchy as his illustrious predecessor, but far less loyal than him, completed its transformation into a purely ceremonial function. The regency became under his stead an essentially Persian affair, as Russia's and Britain's woes only increased during this time. When the czar was assassinated in 1952, leading to the collapse of his empire into dust and blood, he seized the occasion to reclaim the country's sovereignty. Britain made no fuss. Now there were 5 Persian generals leading the state.

Persian self-rule did not mean internal tranquility. The progressive transition from foreign to military government was not equally well received in all sectors of society. The bourgeois liberal heirs of the 1907 and 1909 revolutions were tolerated in the Majlis, insofar as a third of delegates were appointed by the regents and all had to be approved before elections. The communists had gone underground for a while after the repression in Gilan. They resurfaced as the Tudeh Party (Party of the Persian masses) in 1944, to be met with the full force of the state's repressive apparatus. Despite this, they garnered some support among the population, and were firmly rooted in the labor movement. The clergy, finally, was satisfied enough with the regents, though the army tended to treat it as an afterthought.

The 1950's were a decade of nationalist fervor in Iran. The end of foreign rule had whipped popular sentiment into a frenzy, abetted by the regents. The balkanization of the Russian empire created an ideal opportunity to rally a divided nation by reclaiming lands long lost to the northern invaders. The war over Artsakh between Armenia and Azerbaijan allowed Persian troops to annex the latter and wash off the humiliation of the Gulistan and Turkmenchay treaties of 1813 and 1828. Troops have been occupying Dagestan since, under the pretense of maintaining a buffer zone with the ongoing devastation in what used to be Russia.

It is 1960, and Persia is on the brink of something new, as has been the rule for its past century of history.
It's funny two people decide to post at the same time, after a week of silence.
Isáwa

Population: 125

Tónda Méšra (Good omen)

Several days had passed since the Beida Kowán. The expedition parties had been formed, and supplies were being gathered for the departure.

In her hut, lit by a warm hearth, Sôwán was conversing with Muwáya, who was considered by all to be the closest to Šewár. «My friend», she said, «have you foreseen what awaits us? Is it disaster or good luck? Will our friends and lovers die in faraway, hostile places, or will they find lands of plenty?»

«The gods have so far given us no omens. The water has kept flowing, the stars gone on shining, the wind blown as always.» answered Muwáya. «And as you know, omens are but a question Šewár asks us. What they mean is our answer to this question.»

«How very true. But whatever is the case, we can be certain nothing will be the same for us. Not since the families went on to found the nine settlements has something so important happened to the Isáwa.»

«Perhaps it is time for us to walk out of the cradle.»

«But what if in so doing we stumble down? What if our friends do not return? We would then have no choice but to abandon the settlements and return to Eláda (Home) the gentle, or leave for good. I have to tell you I cannot trust Óngi (water) and Lekému (sky) anymore, nor can I Bîma or Ífo. They have been too cruel to our people.»


«Šewár has her reasons.» consoled Muwáya, rather unconvincingly.

Sôwán seemed pained and angry. «Why must we suffer? You who have an answer to everything, do you have an answer to this? Tumák was the kindest of us all ; I had never seen her angry or mean. What purpose was there in her taking away? Had she caused any wrong, unbeknownst to us all? Even if that were the case, are the Gods not merciful? Is it a lie we repeat every morning? Why did she have to go? Why did anyone have to go? It's not fair. It's not.» She looked around her, melancholy. There was no point in hurting Muwáya, she thought, there was nothing she could do to change this.

«Sôwán,» began the shaman of sorts, «what Onúma the generous (giver of life, creator) gives to us, in time we must return to Bahéra the silent one. We can not hold on forever to those we love ; we can't hold back the water ; it has to flow for life to resume. Now Tumák is returned to Šewár. Soon she will be returned among us. Maybe you will witness her return ; is Jitámba not about to bring forth life? Maybe she will return as a fish in the water, or a shadow-in-the-night (nocturnal avian). Who knows? I am sure she will be rewarded.»

Sôwán, somewhat appeased, was about to answer when Koyéma, her youngest child, stormed inside.

«I told you not to disturb me, Kôwai!»

«Come see outside! It's dark!» was the only thing she replied.

Walking out, Sôwán and Muwáya saw the most incredible thing : Ánde the shimmering (moon) was moving towards Ráma the powerful (sun) in the midst of the day. Ánde, located right between the cliffs of the valley, was rising ever so quietly towards Ráma, then nearly at the zenith. The whole population was assembled in silence, stunned and awed by the event. Children were running around, fearful, but their parents, many of which had already witnessed the joining of the friends (name for an eclipse) at least once in their life, caught them under their arms and explained to them what was happening.

Sôwán, herself, whispered in her child's ears, «Calm down, this is nothing to be afraid of. Ánde will rise until she meets Ráma, and for a time it will be night. But it will pass, and then day will return. Promise me not to look at Ráma during the short night : she might blind you if you do.»

Koyéma hid herself behind her parent, shaking a bit, but moved by curiosity, she soon asked : «Why is Ánde doing that? Why is she coming back?».

Sôwán smiled tenderly, held her tightly in her arms, and told her : «Kôwai, this is what we call the joining of the friends. You know that Ánde and Ráma are friends, don't you ?»

«Yes. Muwáya told us.»

«Well, do you know why ?»

«She said...Umh, they... I don't remember.»


Her parent laughed a little. «In the times before time, Ráma and Ánde were the only beings in the sky. They roamed aimlessly, not knowing of each other's existence. In so doing, they lit each part of the world one after another, and so life thrived. But being so lonely, they were terribly sad. This went on until one day, Ráma caught a glimpse of Ánde's back. She didn't know what she was, so she called her from afar. Ánde, hearing a faint voice in the distance, looked around her, and after Ráma called her again, louder, she turned around. Both then got progressively closer to each other, until they could see each other's face. They spoke a bit, trying to understand who the other was ; how could they have know, since they had always been alone? Soon enough, they realized they weren't so different ; Ráma shone brighter, but Ánde was more delicate. They became inseparable friends. They had no need to wander anymore ; they had found a friend, a purpose, someone with whom they could share everything. Unfortunately, this disturbed the world below. The land beneath them was overrun by ice and snow, and darkness. Remember how it feels when the snow falls, at night, on the plateau?»

«Oh yes. I don't like that. It's cold, and dark, and windy. I really don't like that.»

«That's how it was almost everywhere. Clearly this couldn't go on, could it?»

«No!»


«And so the gods were compelled to act. They sent Emát, who keeps the balance : as hard as it was for Ráma and Ánde, they had to part ways ; otherwise the Earth would die. And so they did. To keep them company, Onúma created the stars, with whom they could converse during their voyage in the sky. Furthermore, once every few years, they were allowed to meet again ; today they have been allowed to rejoin.»

The child nodded, pensive.

Around that moment, Ànde touched Ráma. The sky began to darken. Soon, only a fiery halo was left of the sun, shining in the obscurity. Turning to Muwáya, Sôwán spoke a few words. «Here is our omen, isn't it?»

Muwáya did not say anything. She simply put her hand on the Kanúm's shoulder.

«If Šewár is asking us a question, I choose to answer : yes, our friends will return.»
I guess it's not too crazy by PoW standards. However, I'd just like to point out that Nanterre University was opened in 1964. And I'm pretty convinced a student uprising wouldn't have had much of a chance, not to mention actual students to run it, in the 20's, but that's not really an issue, I suppose.
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