Vortenx

Multiverse Rising (Always in need of New Friends)

Anyways:

@Vortenx Ummmmm... hi there. Just reviewed your character and uh... Idk what to say about your character. Its confusing, mangled everywhere, and... unfairly/disgustingly OP. I mean, sure there are some characters here with abnormal speed and fair regenerative powers, but whats a human philosopher stone? Whats with the soul count? What does he look like? Change anything he wants with a touch? That sounds pretty OP. Virtually immortal cause of the power of 2 reality gems? What gems??? And salt water as a weakness? What and why is that a thing?

And tons and tons of other confusing and OP powers. Might I mention the history is very... short and... crappy?

So overall, this character is just... crap. Sorry to say it man. You need to redo everything to make him be a proper and fair character.

@Lmpkio

You dont watch a lot of anime then do you? My character is a mix of a bunch of different anime characters and other things like comics.

Multiverse Rising (Always in need of New Friends)

Name:Kevin Smith/Vortenx

Appearance: He wears a full body spandex that is green and black.

Age:21

Species:Human/Philosopher stone

Gender:Male

Personality: Cocky, Smart, kind at times but is a bit harsh about the truth.
Bio: His backstory changes as he tells it but the most common thing that comes up is that his parents died when he was young. he lived one the streets before finding out about his powers. After finding out about his powers he became a thief first stealing things for him to live. Until one day he ran into this guy who had a weird symbol on his and and on the ground under him, before either one of them could say a thing, a glowing red light flashed. When Kevin woke up he felt different, he looked forward and saw the same guy. After learning about becoming a philosopher stone the guy disappeared. After that his life story is choppy and no one can figure out the rest.

Abilities: Super speed, Super fast regeneration, Is a human philosopher stone(it has its limits when it runs out of souls he dies, currently has 4,918.) so he can change anything he wants with a touch, Congenital insensitivity to pain, Virtually immortal cause of the power of 2 reality gems(if he were to lose BOTH gems he loses the power of immortality), smart enough to come up with a game plan that can get him out of any problems in a pinch, can move fast enough to stop anyone from moving but can only use his hands to do it with in a range of about 10 to 20 feet(if he uses his whole body he will teleport through time with out control), has the ability to break the 4th wall cause of the gems. A pouch that is never ending and small(he can just pull what ever he wants out of it), 2 stone like gems that control reality(one in his pouch and the other in his stomach), Any weapon he can think of to pull from the pouch. If his head is under salt water he loses the ability to move, but he can think so he can use the gems to teleport. If caught in an explosion he will freeze up for a bit till he comes to his senses, He will sometimes get too cocky that he forgets he has a lot of his equipment.

Universe of Origin: Arcadia-2, East-Gate City

Vortenx's Character

Name:Kevin Mathews

Anti-Hero Name:Vortenx

Powers:Super speed, Super fast regeneration, Is a human philosopher stone(it has its limits when it runs out of souls he dies, currently has 4,918.) so he can change anything he wants with a touch, Congenital insensitivity to pain, Virtually immortal cause of the power of 2 reality gems(if he were to lose BOTH gems he loses the power of immortality), smart enough to come up with a game plan that can get him out of any problems in a pinch, can move fast enough to stop anyone from moving but can only use his hands to do it with in a range of about 10 to 20 feet(if he uses his whole body he will teleport through time with out control).

Equipment:A pouch that is never ending and small(he can just pull what ever he wants out of it), 2 stone like gems that control reality(one in his pouch and the other in his stomach), Any weapon he can think of to pull from the pouch.

Weakness:If his head is under salt water he loses the ability to move, but he can think so he can use the gems to teleport. If caught in an explosion he will freeze up for a bit till he comes to his senses, He will sometimes get too cocky that he forgets he has a lot of his equipment.

Soul Count:4,918.

Backstory: His backstory changes as he tells it but the most common thing that comes up is that his parents died when he was young. he lived one the streets before finding out about his powers. After finding out about his powers he became a thief first stealing things for him to live. Until one day he ran into this guy who had a weird symbol on his and and on the ground under him, before either one of them could say a thing, a glowing red light flashed. When Kevin woke up he felt different, he looked forward and saw the same guy. After learning about becoming a philosopher stone the guy disappeared. After that his life story is choppy and no one can figure out the rest.