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Don't worry man, we all make some mistakes hahahaha. Took me a few times to actually conceptualize Akasha's powers. Even now I changed hers again.

If I may be so bold as to suggest something,maybe you could remive the sulfur smell. Use the intensity of the aura. Mikhail could still detect a sinful person, and its degree of malevolence would be dictated by the brightness of your aura. That way, Mikhail would know somethings off about someone without actually knowing what it is, hence keeping the neutrality of your power. Hell, you could even add color to your aura according to the 7 sins if you really want to know details, but determining the nature of someone's sins in actually what makes the power a bit too subjective.
@Letter Bee

From what I have read from the others, and reading your posts, I think what others want to say is that your powers may be a bit too subjective depending on the author's or character's point of view. Unfortunately, powers that detect or read others thoughts, be them subconcious hidden or even surface thoughts tend to lead to a certain degree of meta-gaming. There is a thin line RP'ing those kind of powers between subjectivity and neutrality. I believe the main issue here is that sometimes it is implied that your powers work too subjectively and are not neutral enough on certain aspects.

That's my perspectivr on this matter. Of course I just might be talking outta my ass. I trust Scio's judgement for letting someone RP a thought-discerning power.
Just as Akasha was walking toward what appeared to be the main building, in order to meet whoever was in charge of this place, her head swiftly turned upwards as the windows coming from an office above slammed open, letting out a torrent of thick grey smoke out of the building. At first, the Amazon thought that fire had been set to the school, but this smoke turned out to be something magical as it soon after greyed the sky, letting but a few rays of sunlight passing through.

Her survival instincts kicking in, the young warrior shifted into a readied stance as the smoke blew downwards to crash on the ground and transform into smoky grey doves. Normally, the amazonness wouldn’t be afraid of this kind of birds, but this time being made of smoke and darting towards her made her grow suspicious.

With amazing agility, she had dodged one a few times, but relentless as it seemed, the smoke that was chasing after Akasha managed to finally hit its mark. As the smoke penetrated every orifices, the female shape-shifter found herself in a haze, the world slowly blurring out from her vision, her reflexes and movement sluggish.

Her first reaction to this situation was giggling. It reminded her of that one time she had snuck into the tribe shaman’s hut to steal her smoking pipe. Turned out that this was no ordinary pipe. One blow from the smoke inside was enough to make her feel pretty much the same way she was now, except she had seen visions of unbelievable colorful sceneries, and other things she couldn’t make sense of.

Well, perhaps she was high after all, as she the image of a man, dressed casually in terms of modern society, besides the white coat, appeared in her sight. While she was unimpressed by his clothing style (she doesn’t know modern fashion anyways), she liked the guy’s tattoos.

Akasha didn’t understand much of what the man, calling himself the “headmaster” of this school, said. She however understood that he poisoned them, and people would be guiding them around. Her face turned into a grimace, fearing what kind of poison was running through her. Hopefully she wouldn’t die!

But the most shocking thing was the language. Even though the man had spoken words unknown to the amazon, she actually understood what they meant. Trying to piece together the actual words spoken with their meaning blew the poor girl’s mind. She actually stood there in a confused haze for a whole minute after feeling like throwing up when she was coughing up all the smoke she had inhaled.

She just barely regained her composure when a new guy gestured to the group of new students to follow him, speaking with somewhat harsh words. However, despite what the man called Varus just said about being expelled if he wasn’t impressed, Akasha did not feel anything like annoyance to this. Rather she took it more like if the man was challenging the group, and it gave the amazon renewed strength, to accomplish her best and prove she wasn’t just a weak girl undeserving to be standing here.

Puffing up her chest like a proud warrior, Akasha held her head high. “Alright! I always love a challenge!” She exclaimed loudly. However, instead of an actual voice, the loud roar of a panther echoed in the premises.

What the hell? What was she doing in her panther form again? The wild teenager had no memory of having transformed herself after had beaten the two boys to a game of “King of the Hill”. Again, she had shifted into a panther unwillingly, but she didn’t realize that it had happened right when she lost consciousness momentarily due to the dean’s spell. As her consciousness faded away, her brief moment of distress had triggered her survival instincts, her dominant animal side taking control of her body, thus shifting her into her panther form. However, due to the spell restricting the students’ movements, Panther Akasha (Panthera) couldn’t move while her human side had faded into unconsciousness.

Realizing just out of place she might be in her wild aspect, Akasha focused to revert back to her human form. Upon returning to normal, she scratched the back of her head, chuckling in embarrassment.

“Hehe, sorry for that.”
@JanuaryNicobutt's Sunbros: sounds just about me and my bro when we're talking to our sisters about their pretenders.
Hahahaha! Yeah i thought of something like that as well. To be fair, if Bee's character happen to tell Akasha something about her reeking of crime, she would just answer something along the lines of "There's no crime when you are to abide by the laws of the jungle".

I'm finding it funny to read everyone's first impression of the school and its personnel. They are all like "what a pain in the ass this place is going to be", while the the only ones to seemingly have fun through all this are Kyou and Akasha, the two most over-energetic ladies.

And poor Nico. On top of all of his troubles, now he has to cope with a clingy boyfriend, hahaha
@Scio I assume both Varus and Jasper have means to break that language barrier so everyone can understand what they are saying, correct?
@Riffus Maximus Wasn't meaning to tempt you. Lol

But if you ever decide to go for multiple forms, this is the perfect chance to rename your magic, right?


You really don't like that death metal name you gave it huh? Hahahaha!

EDIT: So what are your thoughts on Wild Awakening then?
If it helps, theres two nubs on two of the keyboard's keys, on the F and J keys on mine. You could simply use that to orient your fingers when typing without looking at the keyboard. Thats what I do anyways.


Shhhhhh you are not supposed to know!

So that's why there are always those two bumps on those keys. I noticed them before, never paid too much mind to them. That's a nice thing to know.

EDIT: @Riffus MaximusHmmm now you are tempting me... GOD DAMNIT YOU, STOP MAKING ME EDIT MY CS! Hahahaha it's alright, I'm kidding. I've always been the kind of guy who likes to have options. While it doesn't bother me to have limited choices, I've always been some sort of a Jack-of-all-trades, or at least someone with lots up his sleeves. A lot of my characters reflect that (if they aren't theme-based anyways).
Alrighty mighty,

CS edits for new magic system, CHECK!

Added Inventory to CS, CHECK!

Proofreading for the billionth time, CHECK!

Coffee spilled on legs............. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Well, hopefully everything's alright now. Let's see how long it'll last without needing new edits.

On a side note, just bought a gaming keyboard this morning after work. The keys glow in the dark! Now I can finally write in total darkness! NO MORE LIGHT NEEDED!
I FEEL LIKE SUCH A SHUT IN!

Also ignore the fact that I still need to sometimes look at the keys to be sure I'm not mystyping anything

Guys. Watcha think will happen if your characters gets trapped in Kyoutopia?


I fear Kyoutopia the moment I saw Kyou interact with Clive. I was like "Oh god, what will she do to us all?"
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