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@malmshodes

Okay, the librarian and the Rokushiki user are two different people. I'm thinking the latter would be a former CP-9 operative who went rogue, and eventually took the librarian as a slave.
Okay, so I'm thinking to rework Jaden's profile like this:

I think the encounter with the Rokushiki user should happen earlier in Jaden's life than when it did. Perhaps said user was actually a member of The Marines, perhaps even a CP-9 operative, but went rogue to become a pirate. His crew raided Jaden's city, and in trying to protect the librarian, he was taken down by said Rokushiki user's more advanced technique.

As far as the operative knows, Jaden's dead, and the librarian is among those taken as slaves. I might also make the librarian younger, if only so the pirates would find her more useful. So, using this new anonymity to travel the world and search for the librarian and the other people the pirates enslaved. Along the way, he's hoping to find more knowledge of techniques that he could use against the pirates, especially their captain.

Which would bring Jaden to this fighters pit. There's more, but I'll PM it
So, is there a specific plot or story besides the usual isekai?
Same. Sounds interesting, but everything seems up in the air.
@malmshodes Actually, lemme get back to you on that. I feel like Jaden's backstory is missing something. So, I want to make one last tweak to it before I post.
@malmshodes Not necessarily. Just kind of missing context. I could do a thing where perhaps Jaden heard a rumor that a haki practitioner was being held at this pirate arena?
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So, I take it we're supposed to meet there?
@WanderingDragon
At first I was a bit iffy about having a jack of all trades character(due to bad past experiences), but then I remembered every case is special. So your character is approved!


Well, I've been wanting to find a way to emphasize Jaden's intelligence, rather than making him seem like a silent brute. I also figured it'd help to have a character who could compliment the other characters' skillsets without overshadowing them. Like, if one character had a broken leg, Jaden could at least patch it up until getting them to the doctor to apply proper treatment. That sort of thing.
Okay, consider this a first draft for my character. Background could use some work. But, I just wanted to get this in before the thread closes up.



Okay, I did some editing to my character. I decided to make him a lookout, since his talents are best suited for that. However, he'd also be something of a jack-of-all trades. He'd know enough to fill in other roles should that character no be available. But, he's by no means an expert.
Okay, consider this a first draft for my character. Background could use some work. But, I just wanted to get this in before the thread closes up.

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