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(So who posts next cause I'm ready to do some WRITIN')
I am starting to discover that relationship early in development hinders my ability to keep promises regarding posting times.

Anyway, a post is up.


'"A screaming man.” He said, referring to The Screaming Man.'

I choked on my water reading this.


Very good. I also can't help but notice how gender-neutral pronouns are consistently used about Yarrow's lover. Hmm...


Are they a he? A she? Neither? Both? I'll never give definitive proof.

Edit: Also My first Bloodborne build was Skilltinge haha. I made my friend help me steamroll my way to the Bowblade. I actually have never finished the game myself but know everything about it.
Boop :D
Posted! I'm probably going to go back and rewrite some parts cause it's been ages since I have been able to write this much and I'm sure my quality has suffered.
Amidst the chaos of the recent fight within the room, a young man clad in a fur coat had ended up being thrown from his cot to the floor amidst several ghoulish looking dead bodies that had also been knocked over. Compared to the thrashing and wailing of the other, newly turned hunters, the body of the Greywood heir was relatively quiet. He had squirmed somewhat, and if you listened real close you may have heard a faint whimper, but he was uncharacteristically calmer than others. To the waking world that may have come across as strange, or a bad sign. However, if you were to peer into his dream you’d understand why.

Yarrow couldn’t move. In his nightmare he was a corpse. His body laid up against a stone alleyway in a sitting position. He was in another country, far from Yarnham. Next to him, and all along the wall in front of him as well, were other corpses in various stages of decay. The sight of corpses had never really bothered Yarrow, nor the scent, and survivor of the blood moon would be fairly used to the sight. Nor had the smell, for that matter, as the thick, sweet smell of incense could often cover it easily if you burned the right quantity. No, the most important factor in this situation were their faces, the faces of his family.

Yarrow’s nightmare felt like hours, years even. The corpses around him decayed, bloated, crawled with vermin, and he couldn’t close his eyes. Yarrow watched on in abject horror as his mother’s body shriveled, his father’s body eaten away by maggots till only half his face had been left. His grandparents, his cousins, his nieces and nephews… Yarrow could only watch them. He lost track of time, his nightmare lasting eternities. Time had slowed for him, it almost stopped. He was denied the thrill of life, the joy of pursuit. Yarrow was forced to live through, to internalize, and finally face the emotions. He had the time to break, his mind shattered, if his heart had still been beating it would’ve stopped. His mind collapsed upon itself in this hell… and yet the nightmare proceeded unabated.

Eventually, in this long nightmare, his mind came back. Yarrow was exhausted, his will to live almost gone, but he was trapped in limbo. In a long eternity of nothingness until finally his family was nothing but dusty bones. Then, for the first time since he came here, something changed. A shadow sprawled across the alleyway, vaguely human. Yarrow began to hear a soft crying. He could not turn his head to look, he could not stand and move, he could only listen and wait.

The shadow grew larger, the crying became louder, and Yarrow could recognize the voice… the voice of a lover he’d rather regret. Once again, he could feel his now-fragile mind begin to crack. If he was alive in this dream he’d have hyperventilated, or possibly screamed. His soul was on fire with fear as the creature making the shadow finally shambled into vision.

It was a humanoid, yes. It was ashy and grey, like a corpse, shriveled even. It looked bloodless, exsanguinated, but it still walked. Yarrow could tell it was meant to be his lost love, but it was twisted, disgusting, disturbingly genderless. It bent down to look him in the eyes. Their own eyes were nothing but hollowed out sockets. It moved closer to Yarrow. Yarrow could see its arms, slit from wrist to elbow. An inky black ichor leaked from the wounds. Thick like oil, it smelled like pus. Yarrow wanted to disappear. He could not stand to see this abomination. In the waking world Yarrow began to thrash amidst the other dead in the clinic, it hyperventilated.

What was once Yarrow’s love began to wail, slowly its hands reached forward for Yarrow’s hands. “You couldn’t protect me!” it screamed, sounding strangled. “You couldn’t protect them!” it said, referring to his family. The walking corpse grabbed his hands, squeezing hard as if to crack bones. Seemingly ignited by contact, the abomination was suddenly lit aflame and fell back screaming curses. “You couldn’t even protect yourself! Look at you! You’re not a man Yarrow! You’re a walking corpse! You have never had a life of your own! You are a black pit of despair and loathing!” Its words were like lashes to his soul. Deep in his chest he finally found breath in this hell of a nightmare.

Yarrow’s bones surged with flesh, he was no longer a corpse, he was awakening to purpose, to fight. Messengers appeared from the ground and from the alley walls. They shambled towards Yarrow. Some lifted at his arms, he could feel them surge from the ground to push him. The spark of life finally came to him in his dream and he screamed. It was bestial, guttural, and carried all his despair. He surged to his feet in the dream, crying out at the flaming abomination before him.

Yarrow awoke from his nightmare on his feet, screaming at a wall. Around his feet were corpses and those that were still dreaming, he could see others still on their cots, and an open door. He was full of adrenaline, every breath deep and labored. His blood seemed to burn in a way it had never before. Every inch of his body felt new, like he had been reborn. The cracks that had formed in his mind during the nightmare seemed to have disappeared, his control being restored seemed to offer some sort of stability he had not had in that blasted eternity.

Yarrow’s sanity seemingly restored, he calmed himself, slowing his breathing, looking to the door, believing someone was just on the other side. He straightened his back and popped his neck, gathering his bearings quickly, and hid his anguish with a quickness that would be unnatural to most. Anyone who would have been able to notice the change in his appearance would likely be perturbed, had they not had experience as a merchant prior of course. Such control over one’s dignity was second nature for those with his upbringing. If only you could see his soul, you would see how twisted he remained.
It's quite all right, it was more for what impact it could possibly have on how others reacted to him... but it seems like pretty much any socialite in Yharnam might have a chance of being familiar and/or acquainted with Yarrow. I will keep that in mind for future encounters.

Anyway, I see no reason not to accept your character anymore. I'll go ahead and add it to the list in the OP, and you are free to introduce Yarrow IC at your leisure.

The conditions for his awakening will be thus: he will awaken in the room described in the very first IC post (either on a cot or sprawled on the floor, your choice), only the room appears to have recently been used as a battlefield. Several dead bodies lie among the hibernating people, including a "large huntsman" (enemy type taken straight from the game) with a broken neck. Cots (possibly including Yarrow's own) have been knocked over, blood and intestines have been scattered over a portion of the room, and the single door has been smashed to bits. He will also be hearing voices beyond that door.
And, of course, he will be seeing crowds of Messengers surrounding the sleeping Hunters, including a small crowd curiously examining himself.


Aww sweet! Now to proceed to get a Bowblade or Reiterpallasch style weapon.

Edit: I stayed up long enough to completely get caught up and read most of the posts, will post tomorrow.


As a rule (as much for you as for any future potential applicants that might by chance spot this post), at least in my RPs, if the first word in the tag-list under the RP title (also visible on the RP page itself by the words "Join status" says "Apply" rather than "Full", it is accepting new players.
Regardless, I'm happy to see interest so soon after posting in the Interest Check. Welcome!

Hmm... interesting. There's certainly something for me to work with on this character, which bodes well for how interesting its story will turn out in the long run. I only really have two points that I feel need clarification:

In the last paragraph of his background, you state that Yarrow discarded the ideals of the Greywoods and became a socialite, presumably trying to build relationships with some of the people he wasn't allowed to interact with before. Anyone in particular? Did he just get buddy-buddy with random (predominantly newly risen due to the Night of the Blood Moon) aristocrats, or do you imagine there's certain people he would have been more or less inclined to associate with? The easiest would obviously have been the Healing Church (specifically the White Church, since the Black Church isn't known for its social graces and doesn't waste their Hunters' time by having them attend parties), but I suppose he could have built other relations if he was cautious enough.

The other thing that needs clarification is the "race" being (False) Paleblood. You aren't the first one to write that, and I see how it can be confusing, so just bear with me for a moment. I use Paleblood about naturally occurring, "true" Paleblood. False Paleblood is the artificial imitation of the former. (False) Paleblood is a shorthand way of referring to both of these collectively. Using (false) Paleblood might be correct if there was doubt which one he was (though it wouldn't make much sense initially, when he'll (probably) still just think that he's an "ordinary" Hunter), but I would like it specified for your characters.
So long story short, please put the race as either Paleblood or false Paleblood.

Beyond that I don't think I have anything to interject.


Ack I knew there was something I probably got wrong, RPs with this much information always get something left out, went ahead and changed the False Paleblood, my apologies.

As for his social tendencies? Yarrow attended parties in order to gather worldly experience, and likely didn't care who was throwing the party; whether the church, aristocrats, or average citizens threw the party, he wouldn't have cared. Yarrow probably doesn't even remember a majority of the people he talks to at the parties. He could be best friends with someone at one party and the next day not even remember their name. He hasn't had genuine connection with other humans since he returned to Yarnham, and probably will have a hard time forming relationships. As alluded to his personality section, he cares little for social convention as well, and probably offended more people than he befriended. Speaking of his personality section, he'd likely have a lot of animosity with the church as he despises people who keep secrets, and it's obvious the church keeps a lot of them.

Edit: I would've elaborated upon that more in the character sheet but I felt I was already over-writing it xD
Edit x2 - Electric Boogaloo: I noticed in your edit that you mentioned that he became a hunter for profit, not treating a disease. I would like to point out that he did indeed originally take blood some years prior because of a bloodborne disease, though this one much more mundane, because he contracted it from his foreign lover. (What it was specifically, and who his lover were are unimportant for the roleplay, they're meant to remain a permanent mystery for the character, as who shares all their secrets in gothic horror anywho?)
I'm all for more players.


Fear not! For I have arrived!

I had wanted to join this way back but saw how long ago it had been started and thought you guys might not be accepting. I'm currently reading over the information and am tentatively interested in. I'm not just interested in cosmic horror after all, I'm also a cosmic whore. (See what I did there? Yes? No?... Blame TikTok.)

Edit:
I made a character! I may have gone a bit overboard... lol I decided to differentiate him from the characters I've already seen by giving him an oddity/quirk related to the properties of his blood. If that was too much I'll remove it haha.


Honestly I'd personally enjoy creating some neutral antagonistic forces to the world such as a pseudo-sentient/haunted forest dividing two major towns/kingdoms or like a group of rogues that travel the countryside. Maybe even like drake colonies along certain mountain regions or giant sentient insects. Something to add to the fantasy and make the world feel more alive outside of the main plot. That and like... in LoTR they befriend the trees who would be otherwise neutral, so these neutral forces can be befriended or antagonized towards other currently existing factions :3

Personally I'd love a race of bug-like creatures with a Queen that has yet to provide support for other factions as of yet.
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