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Myriad Reality

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The shadows:don't want to do what..
*two of the lights at the end of the hall over the few people around the restroom begins dimming almost snuffing itself out*
I only want what you do..
*the shadow at her feet lengthens as if the source of light moves far behind her*
A way back..
*red eyes watch from down the quickly darkening hall*

Shade Weaver: *hearing the one-sided conversation eyebrow raised*
Better go check what trouble they are digging up this time
*stands taking a long drag off the smoke beginning towards the door out to the hall*

@Blueflame

*Narrows my eyes and back up to the wall, holding my palms flat against it*
No sudden movements.

Myriad Reality

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Better?

@Blueflame

Looks like it. We don't generally do a lot of text effects, but I'm not going to harp on it or anything atm.

Myriad Reality

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I rearranged it is that better?

@Blueflame

Yeah, I'd just use
Shade Weaver: Saying something here

Rather than

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Myriad Reality

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They know.. *shadows begin to darken around the hall as the shadows speak at a hushed volume* your like me.. Lost and a long way from home.. *others in the area appear unfazed as if they can't hear the voice as it picks up again still just out of veiw*
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*sits on the edge of the sink after having opened the small windows near the ceiling attempting and failing to light a smoke* Damn, really? *sighs* Ofcourse it can't be easy *attempts a second time at lighting the smoke keeping the door in veiw as Umbras presence is felt approaching the door*

@Blueflame

*Stops, sensing my being watched, and takes the opportunity to look around the graffiti-filled hall for anyone around*
You don't want to do this...

Myriad Reality

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You can kick it of as of the setting Dealers choice, be it one of the group noticing the encroaching darkness or hearing the hushed voices from within that darkness, almost familiar voices, almost your own voice

@Blueflame

Two formatting nits. Throw a newline between action symbols and dialogue for readability and you can change the speaker with

Speaker1: I'm talking!
Speaker2: I'm talking now!

Myriad Reality

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You can kick it of as of the setting Dealers choice, be it one of the group noticing the encroaching darkness or hearing the hushed voices from within that darkness, almost familiar voices, almost your own voice

@Blueflame

Alright, done. @'d you, but we'll use quotes from here on out.

Myriad Reality

@Blueflame

*Dances in a nightclub, when a visible chill down my spine freezes me in my tracks*
Ah, yeah, haha—otherworlders...
*Makes my way to the concrete-laden hall to the dimly-lit and grungy bathrooms, watching my back at every turn*

Myriad Reality

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"That sounds... interesting?"

@Sp00ki

Interesting is a good word for it. Not great. Not usually awful. Just interesting.

Myriad Reality

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"Oh... I guess that makes sense... So, what are you doing here, exactly?"

@Sp00ki

I'm watching random other-worlders pop into my life and wondering if it's a curse.