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Any kinds of specific dark thoughts she had, abilities, and if you want some background so I can make it themed to them and I hope you have a goodnight


That'd be cool! She and her older sister travelled the cosmos for years together to discover new worlds. Her sister was a genius who built their ship and technology, and also gave Katie her powers. In what Katherine perceived to be a total backstab, her sister tried taking her powers away without her knowledge, thinking she would be happier living a normal life. Katherine felt betrayed and left her sister entirely, and landed on a random earthlike planet to live out the rest of her days. Later, her sister tried to reenter her life, and it didn't go well, sending Katherine down a spiral that destroyed the life she had built for herself there, including her to-be marriage with her fiancé. Recently, otherworldly entities have been sporadically drawn to Katherine, leading her to abandon her old life entirely in favor of one as a multidimensional sojourner looking for some kind of purpose.

As for abilities, she can manipulate dimensional boundaries, which requires some lore info that I'll post tomorrow.
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Hey I have a question cause Umbra is attempting raise a shadow under his own power if you don't mind me asking


Sure, what's the question?

Heads up that I'll be going to bed shortly and will reply in the morning.
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The shadows:don't want to do what..
*two of the lights at the end of the hall over the few people around the restroom begins dimming almost snuffing itself out*
I only want what you do..
*the shadow at her feet lengthens as if the source of light moves far behind her*
A way back..
*red eyes watch from down the quickly darkening hall*

Shade Weaver: *hearing the one-sided conversation eyebrow raised*
Better go check what trouble they are digging up this time
*stands taking a long drag off the smoke beginning towards the door out to the hall*


*Narrows my eyes and back up to the wall, holding my palms flat against it*
No sudden movements.
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Better?


Looks like it. We don't generally do a lot of text effects, but I'm not going to harp on it or anything atm.
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I rearranged it is that better?


Yeah, I'd just use
Shade Weaver: Saying something here

Rather than

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Shade Weaver
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They know.. *shadows begin to darken around the hall as the shadows speak at a hushed volume* your like me.. Lost and a long way from home.. *others in the area appear unfazed as if they can't hear the voice as it picks up again still just out of veiw*
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Shade Weaver
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*sits on the edge of the sink after having opened the small windows near the ceiling attempting and failing to light a smoke* Damn, really? *sighs* Ofcourse it can't be easy *attempts a second time at lighting the smoke keeping the door in veiw as Umbras presence is felt approaching the door*


*Stops, sensing my being watched, and takes the opportunity to look around the graffiti-filled hall for anyone around*
You don't want to do this...
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You can kick it of as of the setting Dealers choice, be it one of the group noticing the encroaching darkness or hearing the hushed voices from within that darkness, almost familiar voices, almost your own voice


Two formatting nits. Throw a newline between action symbols and dialogue for readability and you can change the speaker with

Speaker1: I'm talking!
Speaker2: I'm talking now!
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You can kick it of as of the setting Dealers choice, be it one of the group noticing the encroaching darkness or hearing the hushed voices from within that darkness, almost familiar voices, almost your own voice


Alright, done. @'d you, but we'll use quotes from here on out.
@Blueflame

*Dances in a nightclub, when a visible chill down my spine freezes me in my tracks*
Ah, yeah, haha—otherworlders...
*Makes my way to the concrete-laden hall to the dimly-lit and grungy bathrooms, watching my back at every turn*
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"That sounds... interesting?"


Interesting is a good word for it. Not great. Not usually awful. Just interesting.
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