Windicator

BIONICLE

Rauta

Name: Rauta

Element: Fe - Iron

Mask: Powerless Kanohi Matutu- Mask of Telekinesis
-----looks like any other Matutu (Ref nuju, without scope.)

Gender: Male

Appearance: Rauta might be of an average height but he may be notable for his burnt orange shoulders, thighs and ankle guards (this will be a pain to MOC, need to get some parts for that too.) while mostly everything else is metallic grey but where he hasn't got armor it shows a dark gray undertone. He has yellow eyes and thinks that he should probably sport a yellow stripe or two.

Occupation: Rauta works at his forge, shaping iron. He's very proud of his forging skills and has done a great variety of tools and parts for many applications. He focuses more on quality than the quantity of the items. His forge doesn't have as many customers as most forges as its located further from the city center. Sometimes on his off time he forges something to better his skills and tries to form intricate patterns on the particular pieces treating them as art but still melting them when he's done.

Description:As a Fe-Matoran he is adept with iron and some say his personality is as bland as iron but those people probably only know that he works a forge as he rather likes to be with other matoran and is very prideful of himself. While he rarely leaves his forge he would like to travel and used the Red Star Festival as an excuse to go see places. He also dreams of one day being so good at forging that he would be recognized by most of the villages but 'Humbly' only tries his best at his forge. He also gets irritated by people who don't organize their stuff as precisely as he, making sure everything (including tools) has its own place among the same kind.

Tools: Hammers, Tongs, Punches, Chiesels, Files, an Anvil, a Swage Block and a toolbox where he can carry one of each tool with the exception of the latter 2.

^{Relationships}

Suavo

"I've seen his performances. I had no personal ties to him before but now I think I may get to know him better."

Aiko

"I don't really know her well but Suavo introduced her to me, I'm still to learn more about her."

Journal:

Bag:
Tool box

Notes: Color coding, ongoing

Cheers IN SPAAACE!

While I won't agree to do it right now as I've already got myself into a High-Casual and an advanced RP so I'll look how much time they take and I'll look back then.

The idea is nice tho.

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@tobiax

I decided to post this here one more time and if its fine I'll put it on the Char tab.

I change the Description too so he ain't as bland as an iron bar anymore. I have the old on raw back'd up if it were to be needed.

Just tell me if I miss'd something or something is just off, I'll gladly fix it, even extend or shorten if its wanted.

Character sheet application: Rauta

Name: Rauta

Element: Fe - Iron

Mask: Powerless Kanohi Matutu- Mask of Telekinesis
-----looks like any other Matutu (Ref nuju, without scope.)

Gender: Male

Appearance: Rauta might be of an average height but he may be notable for his burnt orange shoulders, thighs and ankle guards (this will be a pain to MOC, need to get some parts for that too.) while mostly everything else is metallic grey but where he hasn't got armor it shows a dark gray undertone. He has yellow eyes and thinks that he should probably sport a yellow stripe or two.

Occupation: Rauta works at his forge, shaping iron. He's very proud of his forging skills and has done a great variety of tools and parts for many applications. He focuses more on quality than the quantity of the items. His forge doesn't have as many customers as most forges as its located further from the city center. Sometimes on his off time he forges something to better his skills and tries to form intricate patterns on the particular pieces treating them as art but still melting them when he's done.

Description:As a Fe-Matoran he is adept with iron and some say his personality is as bland as iron but those people probably only know that he works a forge as he rather likes to be with other matoran(is plural of a matoran, matorans?) and is very prideful of himself. While he rarely leaves his forge he would like to travel and used the Red Star Festival as an excuse to go see places. He also dreams of one day being so good at forging that he would be recognized by most of the villages but 'Humbly' only tries his best at his forge. He also gets irritated by people who don't organize their stuff as precisely as he, making sure everything (including tools) has its own place among the same kind.

Tools: Hammers, Tongs, Punches, Chiesels, Files, an Anvil, a Swage Block and a toolbox where he can carry one of each tool with the exception of the latter 2.

Relationships:

Journal:

Bag:
Tool box

Notes: Color coding Work In Progress

BIONICLE

Edit:@tobiax
Edit 2: fixed grammar (that's why I write slow)
the new wersion of "Occupation" is up on the old form. I'll color code it if its fine, I might expand it further as we go but if that gives the right impression I know where to continue.

but actually working more on my character and thinking of his matatu made bothered by something I read on Biosector01 (though everything should be criticized as they don't provide sources for all claims (this one especially)). on that page it is said "Nuju's mask had a telescopic and heat sensing eyepiece installed in it by Vakama, which continued to function even while Nuju was a Toa Hordika. The standard Matatu does not have this. The eyepiece, however, disappeared when Nuju became a Turaga." so should it be decided upon if it is the standard to have 'Eyepiece' in terms of appearance? For now I air on the side of it being default as it has been so in sets (for nuju(matoran usually wore one akin to noble tho...)

The matatu may go if I've come to that conclusion when its toa time.
Bettering the description when I get to it also, it should be more descriptive by then

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@tobiax

Sure, I'll iron out the details of the occupation but it seems I changed the character(Edit: as in the core personality shifted, thus reshaping him as a whole) in between the writing. looking back the 'preoccupied' was supposed to be a nod to him getting in trouble (also referenced in the mask "Be it from working or confrontations) but it was the last it saw of that line and "he has a forge he attends doing away at the best he knows, shaping iron." was meant to imply that he did work at the forge, seeing how "more top-of-the-line items are often crafted by the skillful hands of the Fe-Matoran" gave me the idea that there would probably be a forge/ workshop/ something like that. even if they had the factories hand made items have the edge on some departments.

I'll also work on the way the word flow and try to convey myself better through words. it should not be long for it to be redone.

BIONICLE

While I got and encouragement from @tobiax

Greetings @Windicator!
First of all, I'd like to apologize for not replying in a timely manner.

I appreciate your interest. We don't have anyone using either Iron or Magnetism, so that works.

I don't see it being a problem at least. It's not like I expect posts at specific times. I typically wait for a full set of replies from my players, unless it's been weeks or there are some other extenuating circumstances.

@tobiax

I decided to post this to OOC to wait for approval or rejection.

Character sheet application: Rauta

Name: Rauta

Explanation of name

(a throwback at Lego's original way of taking something relating to the element and using other language's version of it as a name. This one particularly is my native Finnish and it translates to Iron itself. If it'd be more appropriate to go the route Lego did I'll come up with a fictional one.

Element: Fe - Iron

Mask: Powerless Kanohi Matutu- Mask of Telekinesis
-----looks like any other Matutu.

Gender: Male

Appearance: Rauta might be of an average height but he may be notable for his burnt orange shoulders, thighs and ankle guards (this will be a pain to MOC, need to get some parts for that too.) while mostly everything else is metallic grey but where he hasn't got armor it shows a dark gray undertone. He has yellow eyes and thinks that he should probably sport a yellow stripe or two.

Occupation: Rauta works at his forge, shaping iron. He's very proud of his forging skills and has done a great variety of tools and parts for many applications. He focuses more on quality than the quantity of the items. His forge doesn't have as many customers as most forges as its located further from the city center.

Description: He lives in his forge at the edge of Fe-Congro doing daily job, he mostly stays at the forge but he has to occasionally get some more iron. What he lacks in mannerism he makes up in pride, while he might be usually looking for a way of saving iron in his work, he is more concerned by the end result, same reflecting his attitude that he'd rather spend more for better.

Tools: Hammers, Tongs, Punches, Chiesels, Files, an Anvil, a Swage Block and a toolbox where he can carry one of each tool with the exception of the latter 2.

Relationships:

Journal:

Bag:
Tool box

An by the way, no problem with the time, I'm not expecting people to just sit there if just somehow someone came to say hi.

I'll probably build him a more in depth background. I'll hurry it up if you feel it's too short

FRAMEs (Mech combat, political intrigue & corporate struggles)

Edward was leaning on a wall of the waiting area looking over others who were there, his look lingering on one member he saw who was looking over something seemingly intent. While he was waiting he took one last look at his metal plate looking it over before putting it away again somewhat nervous of his first deployment on an evaluation mission in the Panther's ranks. Not long after, it was announce they were to come into the briefing. He took his seat and paid close attention to the briefing.

During the briefing he was already looking over the enemy strength and a little curiosity sparked of what could be in there for it to be guarded like that but he let go of that thought as it was not for him to be concerned over. He was determined to have this cargo secured along a place on the Panthers crew.

“We're heading out in an hour,” Cecilia informed the pilots. “Until then, make any preparations to your FRAMEs and be ready to move. Any questions?”

He had none at the moment but he made a point of listening to the questions through.

FRAMEs (Mech combat, political intrigue & corporate struggles)

Edward

Name:Edward "Phantom" Johanson

Age: 36

Gender: Male

Disposition: Does not like to stay in poorly ventilated rooms, Agility over Defense, Fond of hand to hand combat, Loyal to ones deserving of it, likes to add vanity and a name to his Frame.

Background:

Earliest memories he has and still looks back on with nostalgia are from his childhood home, it was only a beautiful view from the front door to a nearby lake, one he spent most of his childhood playing around. His family was caring but they were nearly penniless. They could bring home just enough food to live but he never was one to complain. When he started schooling himself in a nearby settlement to better work at this world he came across Frames while researching into other countries and politics. While he got interested in Frames he looked up all he could find of them and he knew they were his thing. One day the settlement was ran to the ground while he was away. Rubble and what was left of the people living there covered the now ghost town.
Some years later when the opportunity to serve under the army of South Sotraecan Union he jumped at the chance to get to see Frames in person for he has been on such small towns where Frames were not used. He had it rough while trying to rise the ranks to get to become a Frame pilot but the effort paid off in the end as he was assigned to the 72nd Strike Platoon, while he was fielded few time he had gained experience but he really could not have prepared for what was coming for them.
His platoon was sent to covertly assault an enemy base, His squad was to be the vanguard scouting out the enemy positions, they had 2 ‘light’ Frames and 4 ‘medium’ ones (I’ll actually look further into the names when we actually see more Frames, otherwise you probably can already know what they are atm). They were walking, the radar was showing nothing nor did they get any visual. Suddenly they were jammed and he started looking around. The first strike hit the other ‘Light’ Frame taking it out in one hit and then the enemy started surrounding his remaining allies but seemingly not seeing him yet. While he had the urge to try and save his allies he knew that they were outnumbered heavily and the enemy all had medium Frames, but the fact that they had no light frames meant he would be able to out run them even if they noticed him taking off as long as he was not shot dead then.
While he had managed to escape having lost good chunk of his Zaruga’s armor and the its right arm from elbow down he knew he could not come back alone as he was supposed to die with his friends for “the better of the platoon”. When the platoon never returned he would be announced dead, he was no a Phantom. While he knew that he could no longer return he knew that he would not be able to go back to the old life but would live the rest of his life as a Mercenary. While he was trying to look for contracts to get hired so he’d be able to fix his frame. While he did not find a contract he did come across The Preying Panthers. After having his Frame looked at it was confirmed it really was beyond repair and that selling (I'll still abide by the same total budget in-game as everyone else) it for parts and buying a new one was methodically a better way. He eventually sold it for a very decent price for Frame beyond repair, which he used to get his new Zaruga that he named Revenant for it was to be his Revenant.

Appearance: has a small beard, hair down to the shoulders and grey eyes, usually wearing a grey flat cap and his old jacket from the SSU army now sporting the PP emblem with olive green jeans. He measures at whopping 6'7" making him longer than most common people, also making it just that much harder to fit in a FRAME's cockpit.

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Inventory: Knife, A small metal plate with "72" carved into it and a bottle of water.

Funds: 386,950c

ACS-3G Zaruga

Name: Revenant 72 (only a name for namesake so far)
Manufacturer: Cradle Dynamics
Height: 4.1 meters
Weight: 5230 kg
Armor: 20 mm durasteel alloy
Speed (Walk): 65 kph
Speed (Skate): 91.6 kph
Sensor range: 5 km
Communication range: 25 km
Operating range: 600 km
Extra Systems: ECM suite, laser target designator
Power: 130
Weight: 80
Free weight:
1/50

• Armaments:
  • 2 x GAM-51 Anti-Air Missile
  • 1 x AFC-40/L Autocannon
  • 1 x LBU-3 Heavy Machinegun
  
  Systems:
• 1 x C3 Imaging Suite
• 1 x EVF “Chameleon” Active Camouflage

Storage:

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Transaction log

23.11.2015

Sold:

• Armaments:
  • 1 x MG27 Light Machinegun : + 250

Bought:

• Armaments:
  • 2 x GAM-51 Anti-Air Missile : -30,000
  • 1 x AFC-40/L Autocannon : -12,000
  • 1 x LBU-3 Heavy Machinegun : -300
  
  Systems:
  • 1 x Explosive Reactive Armor : -25,000
  • 1 x EVF “Chameleon” Active Camouflage : -35,000

FRAMEs (Mech combat, political intrigue & corporate struggles)

@Windicator
Edward's FRAME is fine, but I'd like to ask if you can embellish your character sheet. It's fine if you'd like him to be a more mysterious character or have a foggy past, but I'd like some more detail and thought as to what sort of person he is and how he came to be where he is now; especially since we're in Advanced.

@Aristo

Update, it's up on the old spot

Sure, My bad.
I'll get to it right away. it's ready tomorrow if not earlier, it should be nice by then.
I gladly will expand upon this as I was actually more worried that it might be just too long.
Also, I'll post the rehashed and longer version on the Char page straight if that is ok after your approval, I'll rehash the History in a way as to not have a memory loss and more clearer roots.

Digimon: As The Lights Fade (Casual Interest Check)

I am sincerely sorry for my mistake but along with nullifying the post I posted as a mistake and updating the Bio in my older post.