Looks okay.

I don't see why you wrote down all those techniques though. There's very few of them you can't just perform by.. you know, physically doing them.

Edit: "
Gur'Din: Spinning the weapon creates a razor shield of sorts that can deflect ranged and energy attacks of significant strength. While held, a melee attack against Le'Vash is blocked but stops the skill and rotations but cuts attacker for damage proportional to the strength of attack." - This doesn't actually auto-block anything though. Keep that in mind.

Character name: Bah Rhon the Swift

Age: 14

Height: 4'3"

Weight: 112lbs

Body type: Thin, athletic, almost malnourished in appearance

Appearance: Rather short and girlish, he's got that Greek face, you know the one. The same face as on every statue crafted in Greece at the height of its power. A beautiful young man he's often underestimated due to his soft appearance, that soft appearance belies a great talent passed down through his bloodline. The blood of heroes.

His eyes are emerald green and his hair is jet black. Swept back over his ears to keep it out of his eyes in combat. The hair of heroes is hard to keep cut, unfortunately.

Personality: Bah Rhon is a silent and rather gentle sort, despite his history of combat. Often talking while in battle, never letting himself be without a last word I suppose. Though he is just a boy in modern times he is a full grown man from his time. He's short, but not at all immature.

Abilities:
Swift as a Horse, Light as a Feather: Bah Rhon's bloodline gives every male child born an ability of their ancestral hero. Bah Rhon received the speed of his ancestor, as fast as a horse in full gallop he can run at 45kmh/28mph. This also helps him jump and leap from place to place, such as over the heads of enemies on the battlefield. His balance is also nothing to be sneezed at, he can keep himself aloft on an unsteady surface far longer than normal man.

Trained Strength and Swordsmanship: From the age of six he was physically starved and trained at the brink of exhaustion to harden his thin frame to the best of his abilities. He is able to fight normal men on equal terms without yielding to their superior size.

Gear:

A simple but incredibly durable damascus steel sword: Measuring two feet long and two inches wide, it is a broadsword to one as short as Bah Rhon. The blade was hand forged, folded, and repeatedly quenched to make the blade as flexible as possible without it being limp. Although there is nothing magical or particularly remarkable about the blade itself it is not a sword to be taken lightly. It will not yield to any assault.

A simple but durable suit of studded leather armor: Bearing his family's crest of an Ox stamping a Dragon into the ground it is his bloodline's standard. The thick and sturdy leather slows blades enough to prevent stabbing injuries. It is not impressive, although it covers every part of his body save for his head. The family motto is: "If you lose your head, you didn't deserve it."

Green said
Looks okay. I don't see why you wrote down all those techniques though. There's very few of them you can't just perform by.. you know, physically doing them.Edit: "Gur'Din: Spinning the weapon creates a razor shield of sorts that can deflect ranged and energy attacks of significant strength. While held, a melee attack against Le'Vash is blocked but stops the skill and rotations but cuts attacker for damage proportional to the strength of attack." - This doesn't actually auto-block anything though. Keep that in mind.

Yea, I know I could just write them out, but I wanted to give my significant attacks a more clear and, I think, stronger use. I also changed Gur'Din quite a bit. Where as the blocking is concerned its more of a parry in simple text. I spin my weapon to parry or knock other weapon away. But yea, Nothing auto-blocks.

Woah, this is getting merrier and merrier. A grand 6 man bloodshed? HELL YEAH!

I haven't had practice with this character or his family line in a while, and I thought this would be the best place to put him.

LeeRoy said
I haven't had practice with this character or his family line in a while, and I thought this would be the best place to put him.

Same with the Family line of Clan Zack.

Btw, will characters be linked on the Op for ease of reference?

Anywsmaiz. Both the elf and LeeRoy´s dude is accepted.

Green said
Anywsmaiz. Both the elf and LeeRoy´s dude is accepted.

The Elf sheet does not seem to state how long the weapon is or the blade on it. :K

Correction. Elf dude make corrections according to Khan´s point. LeeRoy´s dude is fine. Make your posts fellas.

Ah I did miss that. On it now.

Added.

Weapon Stats: Head: 13 1/3" - Overall Length: 38"

The spear is only 3 feet 2 inches long?

Schradinger said
The spear is only 3 feet 2 inches long?

Some long swords a longer then that, 6 feet is usually the minimum size for a polearm weapon.

Unless it's a javelin anyway. Or maybe a short spear, but those are largely one handed and meant to be used in cohesion with a shield.

DOT said the overall length was 38". Which is 3 feet 2 inches long. And since it's the overall length, that includes the 13.5 inch head. So the handle is only 2 feet and half an inch long. If the spear in the picture is supposed to be a representation, that means his character should be less than 3 feet tall.

But it does say short spear in the actual description, so I guess the picture probably has no bearing on it at all. 3 feet just seemed really short to me, even for a short spear.

I used this a reference...
http://www.coldsteel.com/Category/12_1/Spears.aspx

Skip to 4:34

And yea it is a short spear.

Schradinger said
DOT said the overall length was 38". Which is 3 feet 2 inches long. And since it's the overall length, that includes the 13.5 inch head. So the handle is only 2 feet and half an inch long. If the spear in the picture is supposed to be a representation, that means his character should be less than 3 feet tall.But it does say short spear in the actual description, so I guess the picture probably has no bearing on it at all. 3 feet just seemed really short to me, even for a short spear.

Yea your right. The picture has no bearing at all. the head and the overall are separate. I got the statistics from the site I just put up. Maybe its a misunderstanding cause I used overall instead of shaft. The handle part is 38" and the blade is the 13.5".

What about her armor? I'm assuming the picture has no bearing on that either.

Not really. I said in the description that it's just leather armor with patches of metal protecting vitals. I don't think that needs a big explanation... or does it?

No. I just wanted to clarify. Usually when people use a picture, it's to show what their character wears/looks like, so it can get confusing when the picture doesn't actually have any bearing on that.

I would like to imagine that it looks like that but this is a striped down version of a arena cs. Normally She would look just like that weapon and all. The problem with that is it has a lot of magic and other effects that this fight doesn't allow. So for this RP the picture has little bearing as the restrictions limits the original.