I mean that he only needs to strike once since he blows things up more then shooting or stabbing want me to change callsign I could come up with a different that makes more since makes since to me.
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The year of the rp is 2030~.
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ok?
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I see that I'm Lt. Col Popcorn.
Ah, sorry. I meant to say LT. Kernel. LT Popcorn is the next rank :P.
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Lost Cause said
OK, I think I'm going to withdraw my interest in this. It just seems to have been jacked too full of -isms during character creation.
Oh, Hi Freund. that reminds me I should start making a pos for Ace Combat :l
Uhm, is Jorge's armor not compatible?
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The Mage said
Ah, sorry. I meant to say LT. Kernel. LT Popcorn is the next rank :P...Oh, Hi Freund. that reminds me I should start making a pos for Ace Combat :lUhm, is Jorge's armor not compatible?
It should be lol just because it doesn't look that futuristic I think you get the idea I hope you would
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I personally would like to say - call signs should make sense, the timeline should be kept with, and we're getting too many characters(remember, we're gonna have to do collabs).
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DragonBeast, your character is born 1980, the year of the RP is 2030 and he is 23 years old.
TheMage: I dislike your Urban pic, because it's simply too future-esque to me.
Also, just stop joking around with the names. Lt. Col. Joshua Rauser...
TheMage: I dislike your Urban pic, because it's simply too future-esque to me.
Also, just stop joking around with the names. Lt. Col. Joshua Rauser...
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Cryogenic freezing lol
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oh sorry lol ill edit now didn't even realize
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DragonBeast, I really dislike your character and your unability to use dots makes me question what you're doing in casual, I'm sorry.
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It's just armor. Science advances at a breakneck pace. I don't see what's wrong with his character. You also shouldn't base his writing skills on how he makes a CS.
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No offense.
I'm not basing his writing style on how he makes his CS but rather how he wrote the history and Personality of his CS.
When it came to the armor, that was my opinion.
I'm not basing his writing style on how he makes his CS but rather how he wrote the history and Personality of his CS.
When it came to the armor, that was my opinion.
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DaDrummer676 said
You also shouldn't base his writing skills on how he makes a CS.
Actually, that's one of the reasons applicants fill out a CS...
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What's so bad about my char history and personality just because it isn't something you would write.
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I still don't think that you can judge a man's writing until you see him actually write. Some people aren't great at making CS's but write beautifully.
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It's bad writing, in my opinion.
It doesn't matter if it's beautiful or not when the dots aren't in the correct place, the commas are in the wrong spots and there's grammatical errors around every other corner.
It's not like he'll never RP again, I rather he just evolves from free and comes back to casual when his writing skills are on par.
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I still don't think that you can judge a man's writing until you see him actually write. Some people aren't great at making CS's but write beautifully.
It doesn't matter if it's beautiful or not when the dots aren't in the correct place, the commas are in the wrong spots and there's grammatical errors around every other corner.
It's not like he'll never RP again, I rather he just evolves from free and comes back to casual when his writing skills are on par.
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Well I fixed the year thing instead he was born in 2002 he's 28. And I think my writing style is favorable every other rp I've been in never complain and they understood what I was going for.
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The only things I don't really like, is that your character's nickname is snake and that you should probably use a comma more often. Other than that it seems just fine to me.
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