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Well, if not legion coomand, how about Royalblood line/Kinght?


If you mean with Royal blood line, that of the Divini (the ruling House of the Empire), then no. For now the highest classes are the Rynirs. Once we have managed to get some characters and the story is going well, I might open up a new province with new Houses and such. But for now, this is the starting choices.
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Okie dokie
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I pledge loyalty and honor to the High Ruler of the Empire.


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Ok, fixed that problem.
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WIP
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I am also making a tailor, maybe the two tailor shops can be rivals?
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EDIT: I pledge loyalty and honor to the High Ruler of the Empire (Totally forgot about this, sorry)
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Grothnor,

Noticed and accepted.
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I get that its a WIP, but I wish to say that the Head of the Rynirs is already being made. That position can't thus be taken for now. Maybe it can be a goal for in the story. Furthmore I wish to quickly review this part, as I do want to make it a bit clear that it will put you in a big disadvantage, unlike you might think :

Aideth is a Golden haired beauty who is never seen without armor and weapons at close hand, even amongst nobles. This ensures her to be ready to fight at a moments notice. Her eyes are an ever changing hazel, shifting shades according to her mood and current scenario whilst never drifting far from their basic color. Sturdy, busty, and curvy, she uses all of her body’s attributes to aid her in battle, such as sensually distracting an opponent with her assets or using the element of surprise with just how strong her body truly is. Many are intimidated by her height, being so tall for a woman, but she merely sees it as another asset to intimidate her foes.

Wearing armor all the time can make others, certainly nobles think less off you. They will even stop seeing you as a female. Cause which female, no matter what profession wears armor all the time? At least in their eyes ''true females''. That and using her assets to surprise her foes? I am not sure how that will work out. Lets take an example :

When fighting against a soldier or enraged barbarian, I doubt it will help much when you will reveal an ''asset''. It will more less put your guard down and get a blade shoved into that ''asset''.

I wish to help out with pointing that out. In this RP realisme is almost akin to our own world. Such tactis might be fun in less serious RP's and settings, but here it will get your character easily killed.
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Accepted. :)
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Ok, third ideal
Knight of the House Rynir, bastard son of the current head of Houses Father, granted Knighthood because of his blood tie, but at best, tolerated by the Family.
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@apokalipse

ooooooor, they can both work in the shop. im cool with dual ownership ^^ also id rather start off having posetive relationships with other characters than negative ones if thats okay.

@alice

did you see mine up there?
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Aideth


While I have no problems with female members of society going to war, I have found several gross anachronisms in your CS that I have to adjust as the nitpicky and annoying GM.

"Aideth is a Golden haired beauty who is never seen without armor and weapons at close hand, even amongst nobles. This ensures her to be ready to fight at a moments notice. Her eyes are an ever changing hazel, shifting shades according to her mood and current scenario whilst never drifting far from their basic color. Sturdy, busty, and curvy, she uses all of her body’s attributes to aid her in battle, such as sensually distracting an opponent with her assets or using the element of surprise with just how strong her body truly is. Many are intimidated by her height, being so tall for a woman, but she merely sees it as another asset to intimidate her foes."

This is the part that bugs me, along with the pictures if you also intend to use that as her armour. the rest looks nicely done.

1) First of all, ewww, gross animre pictures of chainmail bikinis. Nope. ;)

2) Secondly, armour is made to protect the body. To do that it has an external layer meant to guide away weapons from the body, or stop them entirely (chainmail, coat-of-plates, plate armour, the outside, what you see). Underneath that is a 'soft' layer of padding meant to catch some or ideally most of the blunt trauma, the pure force a hit to your armour transfers into your body after stopping the weapon itself. (So, a hard hit on your arm while wearing chainmail won't leave you with a partially severed limb, but with a bruised or broken one) As a result, armour tends to be rather bulky and thick-looking because of the equivalent of a modern thick winter coat underneath (except in the case of plate armours, who had no gambesons but doublets underneath that were custom-made for the type of armour usually). As a result, there will not be much 'curvature' to show off with. To give you a great example, here is a link to someone on DeviantArt who draws 'historically accurate' AND practical females in armour. Gambargin is his name. Additionally, this is about the max amount of curve you will see. (And to be honest, she still has a rather slender waist in this picture)

3) Because of said facts, you cannot use your feminine attributes to distract your enemies in battle, lest you intend to die when someone looks at you because of your lack of practical armour or decent facial protection. I advise you to carry a big shield should you decide to pick the latter, arrows are your new arch-enemy.

4) You would not be able to distract a combatant with 'sensual manouvres' in a battlefield. I do reenactment, and I fight against women aswell as men. When fighting, you don't stare at boobies, you hope you don't get fucked up. Maybe in an isolated case you can attempt this, butyou'd have to be fighting unarmoured as a start to achieve that.

Please take my nagging with a kind heart and don't send dropbears after me. Or female reenactors with spears. Damn I still carry that mark on my knee (see signature), I hope she does too @___@
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Accepted, my bad Shadowy. ._.
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Sounds like an interesting idea. Go for it I would say.
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thanks alice!
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Woo! I can't wait to get started!
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Grothnor,Noticed and accepted.ReaptheMusicI get that its a WIP, but I wish to say that the Head of the Rynirs is already being made. That position can't thus be taken for now. Maybe it can be a goal for in the story. Furthmore I wish to quickly review this part, as I do want to make it a bit clear that it will put you in a big disadvantage, unlike you might think :Aideth is a Golden haired beauty who is never seen without armor and weapons at close hand, even amongst nobles. This ensures her to be ready to fight at a moments notice. Her eyes are an ever changing hazel, shifting shades according to her mood and current scenario whilst never drifting far from their basic color. Sturdy, busty, and curvy, she uses all of her body’s attributes to aid her in battle, such as sensually distracting an opponent with her assets or using the element of surprise with just how strong her body truly is. Many are intimidated by her height, being so tall for a woman, but she merely sees it as another asset to intimidate her foes.Wearing armor all the time can make others, certainly nobles think less off you. They will even stop seeing you as a female. Cause which female, no matter what profession wears armor all the time? At least in their eyes ''true females''. That and using her assets to surprise her foes? I am not sure how that will work out. Lets take an example :When fighting against a soldier or enraged barbarian, I doubt it will help much when you will reveal an ''asset''. It will more less put your guard down and get a blade shoved into that ''asset''. I wish to help out with pointing that out. In this RP realisme is almost akin to our own world. Such tactis might be fun in less serious RP's and settings, but here it will get your character easily killed.ApokalipseAccepted. :)


I understand. I will change things as you say. However I hope you know I'm not just trying to go full out attention whore with assets or whatever... That was an actual tactic used by Asian countries in battle. But, I digress. I will keep working on it.
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Not during battle. You want to distract them before the battle, sure, but during the battle they tend to think about kill first, boobs a distance fifth.
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ALSO, ALSO I might point out that there were no female samurais. But there were geishas....(This is where my knowledge of Japanese history - not even all of Asia, just Japan. That's how small my knowledge is. I blame American schools because they teach like ZILCH about Asia. Unless it has something to do with America...and then they will give like a centimeter of a page dedicated to Asia. Really, Asia is just neglected in history in the US.)

The Art of War was cool, though.
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Actually, I was referring mostly to Kunoichi. I admit, I heard it from an unreliable source, but it does make sense for the battle style.... and it wouldn't here vuv I am glad i was caught there, it simply wouldn't work here.
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Actually, I was referring mostly to Kunoichi. I admit, I heard it from an unreliable source, but it does make sense for the battle style.... and it wouldn't here vuv I am glad i was caught there, it simply wouldn't work here.


Well, ninja are a different story. I mean, they were only around for a small period of time, before they were wiped out. Also, ninja are different from soldiers. Ninja are more like secret agents, at times, whilst soldiers are....well, soldiers. Ninja went undercover. Kunoichi seduced men, not during battle, but at different times (and they could be disguised as geishas). Ninja are not really soldiers at all. They did diversions, started fires, and hid in trees while attacking. Also, they didn't wear revealing clothes - even the kunoichi - while not undercover. They wore that ninja outfit in black, dark blue, and green (sometimes white, considering the environment) which was practical because of the hidden compartments and room to move.

Sorry, don't mean to come off as rude (:
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no no, not at all. You're right. Ninja were more the 'slit your throat while you sleep' kind of assassins, which is why I have a bit more respect for the Samurai way of life.
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