Hey guys. I PM'd Mage about a possible story arc idea that I thought up, and Mage said it looked good. I asked if there was any suggestions or improvements that be needed, and Mage couldn't think of anything. Mage did purpose to see if you guys wanted to add in, and I thought it sounded like a good idea. So here it is.
Beware! Below is the exact post I sent to Mage. It is the summary of what the arc would ensue and how it would hopefully end. So if you don't like having a "spoiled" arc in your rp, please don't ruin it for yourself. If you want a non spoiled summary, Pm me.
HI!
I just had a dream that could fit for my character and a possible story arc idea. It's okay if you don't like it. I just needed to share.
In Bardock's history, I explained his father was killed, and his mother went missing. I was originally just going to have Bardock find out that his mother was killed after being tortured for days, but now I want to change it. I was thinking that on a random mission a female mage wearing a mask could be destroying the town the Fairy Tail mages are sent too. The mage would be using Guardian magic, and Bardock would recognize this mage as his mother by the guardian she uses. Bardock's mother would soon disappear after a short battle, but before she leaves, somebody would notice the dark guild symbol on her body. It would also be after she disappears that Bardock would explain who that was and a little bit of his backstory. Then they would return to the guild and Bardock would explain what happened, and plead the other members to help him destory the dark guild and find his mother.
After people volunteer to help, they would go and find somebody that could help them find the dark guilds hidden HQ. After they find someone and are told where to find the HQ, the Fairy Tail mages find themselves on the desecrated grounds of Eden. Then Bardock would explain that the guide told him that after the dark guild originally destroyed Eden, that they liked the lay of the land so much that they moved their HQ into the hidden groves of Eden. The Fairy's would then begin the attack.
After a series of battles for everyone, they would find the guild leader and Bardock's mother. It would be then that Bardock would find out that, the guild leader has a forbidden magic that controls peoples minds and bodies using a "puppet string" type magic. A 2v2 fight would ensue and, in the end, Bardock would defeat his mother and have help to defeat the guild leader. His mother would be released from the puppet strings and be saved.
That basically the summary of it. If you do like this idea, please tell me if you would want to implement it and if you would want to change anything. I will even make the dark guild's members, and what their magic will be and give a suggestion on who they should fight.
Any feedback would be awesome. I love creative criticism and I would love to hear what you think. Thanks!!!