Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Zata
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Sure, if Mr. Bringer vouches for you, since you know him.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by BurntBacon8r
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Front page says there's still room for one more player, so hopefully that won't be an issue ^_^
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Zata
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Yeah, but, see, you gave away your hand by telling me you know Mr. Bringer. Now I need to do a background check, get three references, meet your parents, a urine sample; it's a whole process.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Harbringer
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*smacks Zata with the Apathy Stick* Enough. I keep telling you I'm not part of any suspicious organisation.
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I know, and that's the problem. I like to surround myself with less-capable criminal masterminds to boss around, yet you keep acting like a good little boy, and it irks me.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by BurntBacon8r
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I'm batman. the urine sample is in the fridge.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by BurntBacon8r
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I'm working on a CS now. Should I PM one of you with Manufacturer details and the like? I think I have a pretty good concept in mind.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Zata
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Post it here; we all get to discuss it.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by BurntBacon8r
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Gotcha. I'll see if I can get it all done tonight, but no promises. I may post Just the A.W.E. once I'm done and finish the Pilot tomorrow.
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Works for me.

As for the first IC post: yay, we have a IC now! I'm thinking Mr. Takaru can go next, followed by myself as I write Mr. Tat into the story. Assuming Mr. Bacon is done his character by then, I will give him his opening too, though depending on how long it takes for posts to get done, I may force him to wait a round. Oh, and Mr. Takaru: Roman is in the common room, doing his sudoku again, for reference.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by BurntBacon8r
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A.W.E. & Pilot are both completed now:



Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Zata
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Alright, there are a number of issues I see with your machine.

1. Your manufacturer has too many positives to negative qualities. General spread is supposed to be 'good-good-bad' with additional attributes being added with both a good and bad at the same time. To fix this, I say you should remove evasive since it really isn't a measurable thing. Also, remove the support bonus from the first one.
2. Your missile pod would be classified as a size 2 weapon. Either reduce the missile count to 3, or remove it for something else.
3. The flamethrower needs its ammo listed. Say that it has enough for 15 seconds of continuous stream, since this is easily measurable.
4. Your shield should be listed as 2 due to your ability, and mark which weapon gets the free point.

If anyone else has an issue, they are free to speak up.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by BurntBacon8r
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Fixededed. I'll finish the pilot after work today ^_^
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by BurntBacon8r
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Pilot is completed! Not my best work, but eh, it'll do. Let me know if there's anything wrong.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by Zata
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The name instils the same rage that the knowledge of the fact that there are real human beings named North West, Hashtag, Abcde, and Shithead, but other than that, everything seems good. Even got Jack's nickname for him thought up, though it is one hundred percent a low hanging fruit.

Only thing I still need from you is a short description paragraph of Shard for the first post, which the first paragraph of your bio nicely starts, but needs an ending.
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by BurntBacon8r
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Rage induced, mission accomplished.
I have a fair idea of the rest of shard's description in mind, do you want that here in the OOC as well? I won't be back at my computer for a few hours but I can post it as soon as I am.
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Yep, here as well. In general, unless I ask otherwise, you can just put everything here.
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So, a 'Get in, blast everything to bits, get out' type? Sounds like an interesting concept - and a matching personality, too.
In other words: Tea, anyone?
Hidden 11 yrs ago Post by BurntBacon8r
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You're pretty much exactly right takaru :P
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I keep him around for a reason. Though, a large part of it is to see his face when I swap out his tea for... other stuff.
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