We can discuss seting and time. You wanted to use Ness right? I'm thinking of using Darth Sidious from star wars

Oh sorry I posted on the wrong one I ment to do the interest check ill repost there

Alright I'll start working on Ness' cs

Awesome. I will work on Darth Sidious

Ok ness is almost finished. I'm just adding his psi attacks

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Ok here it is. This will be my first fight so I'm not sure if I added enough detail or made him overpowered or something. So if there's anything I should change or improve, just tell me.

Name: Ness

Age: 13

Appearance:
16 bit

3d version


Race: Human

Gender: Male

Personality: He doesn't talk much and likes playing baseball.

Handheld weapons:
A baseball bat
A slingshot
1 small rock he uses with the slingshot.
Psychokinesis:
(I have edited the amount of PP each one uses so it doesn't use a too little amount or too large amount for what the attack does. I have also slightly modified a few of the powers to make sense outside of earthbound. The success rates are the chances of the power actually working.)
I will give Ness a maximum amount of PP to 60. Every time he uses a psychic attack it goes down. Here are the amounts for each attack:

Defense down(8 PP)-- it lowers the defense of an enemy to a low or high rate. Can target one to three enemies. It appears as a hard to see, translucent stream of energy that will go from ness into the enemy within 2-7 seconds depending on distance. High success rate.

Healing (5 PP)-- Cures debuffs such as poison, paralysis etc.

Hypnosis (7 PP)-- confuses and makes the enemy sleepy. Appears as a ball of yellow energy that is thrown at the enemy.

Lifeup(8 PP) -- Heals Ness.

Offense up (7 PP) -- Makes Ness stronger with melee combat.

Paralysis--(9 PP) -- Paralyzes the enemy. Sometimes fully and sometimes minimally

Teleport --(4 PP) Can teleport Ness a short distance. (maximum of 20 feet)

PSI Fire (7 PP) -- A stream of fire that shoots out of Ness' hands. Has a maximum range of about 10 feet.

PSI Flash (5 PP) -- Confuses the enemy. Not as powerful as hypnosis but there is a better chance of it working.

PSI Freeze (12 PP) -- An elemental ability that can freeze part of the enemy in ice.

PSI Magnet (5 PP)-- It steals a minimum amount of energy from the enemy and turns it into PP. (takes 7 PP from the enemy)

PSI Rockin (10 PP) -- A wide plasma based attack. Does good damage to enemies.

PSI Shield (6 PP) -- shields or reduces damage of most attacks. Effective when stacked. Can be used to one or all allies.

PSI Starstorm (25 PP)-- One of the strongest Offense PSI abilities. Sends meteors to fall from the sky everywhere. Deals major damage with a direct hit.

PSI Thunder (10 PP) -- Offense PSI, an elemental ability that can inflict numbness, as well as very high damage. Targets a random nearby life form.

Awesome and I'm sure sidious can handle Palpatine.
Name Palpatine
Age unknown
Human
Personality: ruthless, power hungry , shows little mercy, manipulative,
Weapons
Light saber
Also a blaster(but barely uses it)
Powers (I will give Palpatine 60 pp. is that ok? You can raise yours too)
Force lightening simple use uses 5 pp full charge uses 10
Telekinesis strong enough to move several heavy objects (7 pp )
Force flight- levitation (5pp)
Force speed-increase speed to super human levels(3 pp)
Force rage-user uses innermost fears, hate and sadnes to a intense rage. The rage increases all abilities strength speed and ferocity, but when done the user is tired (7 pp)
Static barrier-electric shield(6 pp)
Force storm -a skill he made himself. A powerful storm of force lightening, enough power to destroy a entire fleet or even a planet but it's very hard to control (30 pp)
Force push -a push if the force, it can have enough force to push back a squad of droids (7 pp)
Shatter point- add pressure with the force to a wound or scar to cause the wound or scar to open more (10pp)
Force pull-can use the force to pull a object to him (5 pp)
Mind control- has manipulated several people this way but won work on those with string will or strong connection with the force(10 pp )

Alright sounds good. I'll set Ness' to 60 also. Do you have an idea for setting?

I'm thinking Onett. Sidious is there to take over and ness tries to stop him

Awesome, should we start?

Hmm sure. You can have ness defeat storm troopers and then see sidious on a ship

Alright. So I'm doing the first post then?

I can if You want.

Out of curiosity how are you liking this battle?

It's fun. My internet was down this week which is why I haven't been posting. I'll do another post now

Ok and that sucks dude. After this battle want to try another one?

Sure

You win I think. Good job! Ness was no match for the force storm.

Ok I will make a new occ for us in a minute