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That was really good, I loved the internal conflict. I'm looking forward to Arc 2.
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Arc 2 begins.

Welcome to the Long Night.
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WHOOO, GO FLOTSAM, SHOW HANK WHAT YOU'RE MADE OF!

how much hurt is Zed going to get?
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WHOOO, GO FLOTSAM, SHOW HANK WHAT YOU'RE MADE OF! how much hurt is Zed going to get?


Flotsam, badass normal extraordinaire.
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Awh. Awh man. Right in the feels. D:
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Did not see that coming.
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I've been expecting Jorick's death for a while now, but the tragedy of some of the other characters' deaths moved me a little. Mostly Flotsam, Vogel, and the cops in the car that they were forced to shoot.
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Totally lol'd at the 'Hank monologuing' part.

Keep it up, Ele!
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Chapter 10 is great. RIP story Jorick. T_T

Flotsam was awesome. I wanted him to survive forever after defying Hank like a boss.
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Chapter 10 is great. RIP story Jorick. T_TFlotsam was awesome. I wanted him to survive forever after defying Hank like a boss.


He'd probably go to Valhalla.
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Jorick said Flotsam was awesome. I wanted him to survive forever after defying Hank like a boss.


Yeah there really wasn't a reasonable set of circumstances for him to live. Besides, as with Jetsam, his departure from the story is appropriately timed.
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Yeah there really wasn't a reasonable set of circumstances for him to live. Besides, as with Jetsam, his departure from the story is appropriately timed.


Huh, was their Boss name mentioned? Or can we expect an associate of theirs called Ursula to visit?
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What's that? Another Chapter? Why of course!
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Well about time.

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I swear to god that I wrote that before I opened the chapter and ctrl+f'd a certain name. :)

Can't wait to read.
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I caught up on this story.
Fuck these chapters get long =|
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I caught up on this story. Fuck these chapters get long =|


Longest chapter was chapter 4 :c if the other chapters feel long then that is a bad sign for me.
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Longest chapter was chapter 4 :c if the other chapters feel long then that is a bad sign for me.


You have to understand how little I read on this site :D
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Longest chapter was chapter 4 :c if the other chapters feel long then that is a bad sign for me.


Noooo, they're long enough.
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