That was really good, I loved the internal conflict. I'm looking forward to Arc 2.
Alphakoka said
WHOOO, GO FLOTSAM, SHOW HANK WHAT YOU'RE MADE OF! how much hurt is Zed going to get?
Jorick said
Chapter 10 is great. RIP story Jorick. T_TFlotsam was awesome. I wanted him to survive forever after defying Hank like a boss.
Jorick said Flotsam was awesome. I wanted him to survive forever after defying Hank like a boss.
Elendra said
Yeah there really wasn't a reasonable set of circumstances for him to live. Besides, as with Jetsam, his departure from the story is appropriately timed.
Azarthes said
I caught up on this story. Fuck these chapters get long =|
Elendra said
Longest chapter was chapter 4 :c if the other chapters feel long then that is a bad sign for me.
Elendra said
Longest chapter was chapter 4 :c if the other chapters feel long then that is a bad sign for me.