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Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Wired
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My internet has been off for the last day or so, I missed the opening for the golem thing. Edward shall jump at the next chance of rushing towards chaotic happenings.
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@Wired No worries. Minor issue and I still managed to use it for a foreshadow so it served a purpose.
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I posted. I'm not very happy with what I wrote (I think there's a lot of problems with it), but I wanted to get something posted to help the story move along since I may not be on for the next few days. I'll be visiting some relatives and while I should have access to internet, there's a possibility I won't be able to post again in the IC until Tuesday.
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Let me be clear. I do not care about profanity at all. I hate censorship. The problem with 'what the fuck' is that it is an anachronism. It's a modern phrase and, though I could be wrong, I don't think I've ever heard anyone say anything like it in this setting. 'By Andraste's Tits' yes but 'what the fuck' no.

Other than that the post is written fine. The only problem you might encounter now is that you've thrown your character into a scene with two others when you might not be able to post for a while which means you might bottleneck the scene. I would have tried to hand her off to another PC or an NPC healer, but it's not that big of a problem. We can wait.
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Should I wait for everyone to post about the golem before I make a post about him getting up and saying sorry?.
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Automaton said
Should I wait for everyone to post about the golem before I make a post about him getting up and saying sorry?.


I don't see why you would need to do this.
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Too Old 4 This said
Let me be clear. I do not care about profanity at all. I hate censorship. The problem with 'what the fuck' is that it is an anachronism. It's a modern phrase and, though I could be wrong, I don't think I've ever heard anyone say anything like it in this setting. 'By Andraste's Tits' yes but 'what the fuck' no. Other than that the post is written fine. The only problem you might encounter now is that you've thrown your character into a scene with two others when you might not be able to post for a while which means you might bottleneck the scene. I would have tried to hand her off to another PC or an NPC healer, but it's not that big of a problem. We can wait.


Just tested internet out and it's working fine! The 'not posting until Tuesday' was a worst case scenario, but I just wanted to let everyone know just in case I was internetless and couldn't respond to anything.

I understand the problem with "What the fuck", so I changed it something more befitting the setting (but still in line with Joras's character, and properly offensive to the priests).
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@rpg101 Looks good, thanks. Poor Andraste, always the target for profanity.
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Well, if she didn't make it so easy and so catchy, I mean who wants to say "by the makers world creating Genitals!". It doesn't have a ring to it.
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Sorry for the delay/absence. I work a lot in the summer, most of the times all day, but if I'm lucky I'll get one up today or tonight.
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Too Old 4 This said
It's all good, steady pace in the IC is better than a rapid pace into a sudden burn out.


I absolutely intend to write a post tonight. I'm so sorry for the delay you guys.
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@Zordon Okay, so that ship with the golem had kind of sailed and there was really enough going on in that scene as is. Now it's kind of a trainwreck, but no matter. Also mind that Warden recruits who have not even undergone the joining do not generally bark orders at their senior Wardens. There is somewhat of an in-character hierarchy among players at this point. When the group becomes more integrated, this may disolve, but currently Joras outranks most of you and in a wartime environment people tend to take rank seriously.
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Waiting on Automaton. You have four PCs WTFing in your general direction.
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Posted, sorry for the delay, problems.
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@auto No problem, just trying to make sure we keep a pace.

@All Hang in there, the group is starting to take shape and once that happens the game generally flows more smoothly.
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I'll have my post up tomorrow afternoon!
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Too Old 4 This said
@Zordon Okay, so that ship with the golem had kind of sailed and there was really enough going on in that scene as is. Now it's kind of a trainwreck, but no matter. Also mind that Warden recruits who have not even undergone the joining do not generally bark orders at their senior Wardens. There is somewhat of an in-character hierarchy among players at this point. When the group becomes more integrated, this may disolve, but currently Joras outranks most of you and in a wartime environment people tend to take rank seriously.


Joras can point that out then. I realize there was a lot going on already. I just tried to get her over there and focused on one character. Plus, she doesn't like it when people discriminate against magic, and that can take over her sense of judgment.
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...I think I killed it

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Zordon said
...I think I killed it:(


Nice Job Breaking It Hero

I'm still here, but I'd like another post or two in front of mine before I have write a response.
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rpg101 said
I'm still here, but I'd like another post or two in front of mine before I have write a response.


We could always do a collaborative post for some character conversation/development if you like?
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