Well to be fair most nations would have their own name for the ocean in their language, so I don't think it really matters that you have a name for it. After all, we do need a single name to refer to it, even if it's OOC. But it looks good.

As for Allies and Enemies, Anishar's people are fairly docile and keep to themselves for the most part, but I assume there would be reliant trade with the Empire of Ullanor, seeing as it has the most interaction with the ocean geographically.
And we'd probs stay the frick away from all y'all scary bloody and fiery guys.

But all's to be developed I suppose.

For the Clans, pretty much everyone falls into either "They could join us is they reformed a bit," or "Burn it down and scatter the ashes."

Iliogis has an alliance with the dwarves and... I am not completely sure how to refer to GS's elves but them too.

As for enemies, well... people who do bad stuff aren't going to be looked to fondly upon by the Amazons at least.

Sorry about not fixing it up, had another project

I think the Ibishians would at least be on friendly terms with Iliogis and Khazukan Ankor.

Arashens. Larue N'hen. Or 'Those Weird Elves' would work for my elves. XD

OOC edited,

Otrea would like talks of alliances with any nations who come forth

Oh right, um... Connection has been, to put it bluntly, really really shitty lately so... Yeah. Hopefully I'll get stuff worked out tomorrow if it's not as bad then, but we'll see.

I am sure the Empire of Ullanor is actively trading and building friendships with all other nations possessing the capability of commerce and diplomacy. Let's all be best friends, eh?

SillyGoy said
I am sure the Empire of Ullanor is actively trading and building friendships with all other nations possessing the capability of commerce and diplomacy. Let's all be best friends, eh?

Sorry I only roll with people who have greased hair and do synchronized snapping routines.

jk The Flotilla would be pretty good trading buddies with the Empire. They would trade friendship bracelets.

Sovi3t said
OOC edited, Otrea would like talks of alliances with any nations who come forth

Reading your personal history of your god, you might want to check The Creation hider in the first post. It explains how the gods came to be. I think Lucian had in mind for that section to be more of a what have they been doing since they were here and less of a creation myth of your god.

VitaVitaAR said
I am not completely sure how to refer to GS's elves but them too.

I thought about that issue for my race as well.
Mine are fairly average humans just with slight variations such as blue scales and black bones. Other than slang, I can't really think of what other races would call them! I guess it would just be known that the sea folk have scales and black teeth?? Since they're not seen very often other than trade and diplomacy, they're not your average elf, human, or dwarf running around.

Sovi3t said
OOC edited

In addressing your God's vagueness problem, you've created a new one. Firstly, as stated before, I wanted to leave out any sort of souls or afterlife worlds out, so this Goddess of the Undead character is a bit iffy for me. Worse than that, however, is the fact that she was able to turn a mortal into a God. I've gotta' say no to that. The God's are pieces of Melkaia, and wouldn't be able to do that.

I hate to tear into you like this, but while I'm at it, I have a bit of an issue with your nation's inhabitants. You've got literally one of each of the high-fantasy generic races. Your nation has elves, dwarves, humans, and orcs. I'm not sure I like that idea. There's already a nation of elves, and a nation of dwarves, and a nation of orcs. So, having a sort of melting-pot nation of all of those races just seems strange. You're free to create your own race, or a derivative of some already-made race, but I don't want you to have all of those.

So, basically, Uldir's origins are still not quite where I'd want them to be, and your nation's inhabitants should be switched up.

Psithurism said

You're accepted, by the way. Just announcing that formally. Speaking thus,

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I'm working on an accepted player roster right now. Once that's completed, I'll be writing Malag's opening post. If I've accepted your nation/God already, you may begin posting. Let's not get too far though, since Rin's having some connection issues and Tatsua's not quite finished with their sheet.

As to referring to the "country" inhabitants as a whole, I'm going with Anarian for my people, as they hail from Anah originally before the sea. Put into the the CS under 'other'.

And thanks for accepting by the way. xoxo

If it helps, I purposely made my elves a subrace so that people who want to pull off elves can do so. ^^.

Grey Star said

Grey Star, you might want to edit your god CS and your nation CS onto the same post! So Lucian can put it into the accepted list easier.

Grey Star said

Thanks a ton, that makes it much easier to add you to the roster now.

Finished Helfie's CS, I'll finish work on the NS ASAP.

Gah, I won't be able to do this rp sadly

Not because of the criticism, I appreciate that but because I got a few projects lined up

Sorry in advance

Would NPC nations and deities be possibilities? Just so the Clans have a nation or two to steamroll without upsetting any players.