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How's that? I'll change the katanas in a bit into something else... maybe she could just be trained to use a variety of weapons. Swords, daggers, knives, etc. Or maybe a pure martial artist, no weapons? Her powers come from the Red Laces, which are long laces you tie on your wrists to unlock those powers.

That phasing power might would allow her to teleport her teammates through barriers in the future... or even 'phase' them through time itself.
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Hmm it's coming a little close to cliche territory but I'll wait and see. I think Lee is a chinese surname though :P

EDIT: More versatility in weapons would be better yeah. So her phasing is like blink in Dishonored? Any kind of time travel is too OP, at least in this stage of the story. And it makes as little sense as it did in Days of Future Past xD

I've had a suggestion for power levels and I'll post it here for your thoughts.

Strength classes
Human
Olympian
1 ton
5 ton
10 ton
50 ton

And speed classes
Human
Olympian
50 mph
100 mph
Mach 1
Mach 5

Or something in that ballpark. I might work up a general Power Tier system later, but maybe not.
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MrDidact said
Hmm it's coming a little close to cliche territory but I'll wait and see. I think Lee is a chinese surname though :PEDIT: More versatility in weapons would be better yeah. So her phasing is like blink in Dishonored? Any kind of time travel is too OP, at least in this stage of the story. I've had a suggestion for power levels and I'll post it here for your thoughts.Strength classesHumanOlympian1 ton 5 ton10 ton50 tonAnd speed classesHumanOlympian50 mph100 mphMach 1Mach 5Or something in that ballpark. I might work up a general Power Tier system later, but maybe not.


Lee wasn't suppose to relate to a Japanese surname anyway, I just thought it went good with Lacey... 'Lacey Lee'.

Never played Dishonored. Time Travel is something far, far, far off, like if it was going to be a very special event (last resort sort of thing).

I'll have to rethink this though, it's looking a lot like a character named Elektra. Let me think on this for a while.

EDIT: And Lacey's not Asian. I sort of want to go with my standard hero... an assassin-like guy who relies on stealth and gadgets.
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Well it'd just come off as strange if a asian-motif character wasn't asian. And honestly, this thread could use more women and nonwhite characters.
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Re-read the bio.

Lacey Lee is now a Chinese female belonging to the Red Assassins, an ancient order of (exclusively) female assassins who spread across Europe to Asia. The Grandmaster wore the Red Laces and acquired legendary powers, but the Red Assassins are no more and now Lacey has the Laces. She is using her newfound powers to take revenge to the people who killed her sisters.

So she's not a Ninja and does not use katanas, is female, and is Asian (Chinese).

It as written rather quickly, and the descriptions are lackluster for now but I will fix it later. On a schedule.
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Well it'd just come off as strange if a asian-motif character wasn't asian. And honestly, this thread could use more women and nonwhite characters.


Casimir is actually Latin American if you couldn't tell by his description. But yeah, I see where you're coming from in both regards.
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What if Lacey was a Chinese orphan who was suppose to be a Red Assassin, but she was adopted by an American man. The Red Assassins later kill this man, so Lacey goes bats*** crazy, kills the Grandmaster, steals the Red Laces, and is out to f*** s**** up. Maybe she has a sister that is in the Red Assassins and is on a relentless quest to 'rescue' her from that life. She doesn't care about anyone else, and doesn't care who lives or dies.

Anyone can take up the mantle of Red Lace if they acquire the Red Laces.
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Huh. Are these Red Laces magic then?
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Legit question: if you cut off one of her hands while she's wearing the Laces, what happens
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Krein said
Seriously, were like males the only people affected by the Awakening? OP says to have a blance of male and female characters, but literally every application is a male.


The very first character listed in this thread is female.
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Hm... Alright Mr. D, I'll try to explain Light's powers better, or how they flow together. Right now, shes following the formula of Offense = Super Strength, Defense = Regeneration, Mobility = Kinetic Combat + Air Jump, Unique power = Atrophy, Ultimate Ability = Fusion Punch, Useless power = water breathing. Or vaguely how things worked n City of Heroes. She'd pretty much be a Street Justice(or super strength if that was possible)/Regen scrapper, if you ever remember that game.If I could state numbers, I'd have numbers set and she wouldn't look so bad.

Atrophy is more of a slow acting teleport I suppose. since its just slowly bringing whatever is affecting into the void. And Yeah, shes very difficult to kill. Not hard to knock out, but mucho difficult to kill. Just like deadpool or Wolverine. And she'll act roughly the same as Deadpool, just with less 4th walling and being more grounded.

MC.. Well, the idea is that since he is pretty much literally living magical energy, and thus he has an exceptionally easy time learning magic, and since he sees magical energy instead of physical realm things, he can learn the intricacies of spells that way. He wont learn them right away, he'll probably have to practice them a bit and I can fix that power to be that, but thats the idea behind it. OR I could make it so that he studies the last spell used by a person and he can temporarily use that or something.

Chaos Magic is there to spice up posts. It does almost no damage, the point is to cause the other person to have to 'spice up' their post and show what their character can do/how intelligent they are. Or they can just say the chaos magic made them sneeze if they wanna cop out of it. Plus they can always dodge it.

As for the logistics, even amateurs can make a demonic summoning circle, and said circle has a good chance of backfiring since they are amateurs, thus, easy ritual summoning of these two. As for the league, maybe I'm thinking more on the marvel side of things, but if two relatively harrmless super beings popped up that you could easily convince to fight for good, wouldn't you take that chance and scoop them up? Batman would at least. Actually... could say they appeared in gothem and that would be that. What are your ideas on that? Also I should mention that while they have combat related powers, they'll be mostly sources of comedy more than anything. After all, thats what Deadpool does :P.

And if you have problems with some powers after this, I'll change them. And for the moving around town sorta thing, I can always give MC an illusion based ability that others can use.
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TJ, Looking fine so far. I don't fire really counts as a weakness since every normal person would burn :P

Poly, True but it's like Wondy being the only one on the Justice League

Archmage, Well it's not just power levels though those could be more specific. What I'm wondering is how those powers exist? You don't have to make an elaborate explanation but some kind of explanation for any of those powers should be fine. How would one regenerate from having no nervous system? How does one jump on air? This being slightly more realistic than the comics there has to be some kind of justification. Atrophy needs an explanation seeing as how it implies she has a constant connection to the void which universally speaking would be problematic.

Temporary use would be better, otherwise he'd get too powerful too fast. And there's no PvP at this stage in the RP because everyone is associated with the League and as such they wouldn't be fighting, unless something stupid happened *cough* Avengers *cough*. And I clearly listed in the initial post that there shouldn't be any attack that is unblock-able. I'm not saying that it would bounce off of kevlar or something, just that any sufficient magical barrier should stop it if the Sorcerer is strong or skilled enough.

Well this doesn't take place in the DC or Marvel Universes. It's merely our world after it's been messed up by the Awakening. The problem isn't that they were summoning demons. Demons are from Hell which exists near our own world. Light and MC are from Outside the very fabric of our reality based on what you wrote in the bio. Ripping a hole in reality... not really something a novice can do. The problem would just be solved if they came from some parallel magical world or some such or hell maybe they're rebellious demons? :P
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OK, give me a sec and I'll touch that all up. Also thinking about giving MC some more non combat abilities if thats ok.

Wait, that demon thing, whos to say that some demons don't come from the void as well? I remember the Bartholomeus trilogy did that.
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What *IS* the Void? I see it thrown around this site SO often. And its always the same thing. The Void. Void this and Void that, and I know for a *fact* everyone has a different thought of what their particular Void is, so can we get some explanations? Also, I dont want to sound rude, but it really bugs me when people have listed "Super Strength" or "Super Speed" and leave it at that. That seems kind of bogus because then you can just extrapolate that to anything. Can we get some more concrete numbers on powers like that? I always try to give some, and I saw Mr.Didact give a suggestion of a power tier list earlier, can we all start using that or edit our sheets to use it? Ive encountered situations like this in previous roleplays, and sometimes it seems a bit unfair to people who give numbers and then have them lowered and set there, while other people dont actually have technical limits. I trust you all, so I wont say you'd do it, but I've seen it where, because they dont have limits in the sheet, they play without limits and it really screws some people over.
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Oh well for my vision of this RP, there's a realm beyond ours and all the parallel dimensions linked to us, where all the really nasty Eldritch Abominations of the Cthulhu Mythos and the like reside. It's called a lot of things but Void can be applied to it. It's mentioned in the Codex and as I've been saying breaking into it is a Big Deal.

I'd like everyone to put specifics for their powers yes as I've been saying.

EDIT: Archmage, The sheets are better and MCs powers can be readily explained but there's really no reason why Light can regenerate like that. And regeneration doesn't mean you wouldn't need to breathe or wouldn't be affected by toxins. You could just say it's part of some bizarre physiology but as of now there's nothing. Also I'm not sure why hitting specifically would increase her speed it seems like a videogame mechanic or something. And like I've been saying I'd prefer if the two of them were just from some bizarre magical world like the Fifth Dimension. (Narnia, Wonderland, Oz, and other magical lands actually exist in this universe) Biddz is right on the money when he saws Void is thrown around a lot.
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Oh, my view on the void is that its the space between worlds, sort of like Space for dimensions if you will. That sort of 'darkness' thats talked about a lot in most world origin stories and all that fun stuff or whatever.

And yeah, thats not a bad idea. But do we list it on lbs lifted, or do we list which superhero its roughly equiv to?

EDIT. Mr. D, I like you, your trying to get the very articulates of everything. Alrighty, I changed those things.
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A space between worlds would imply nothing existed there. Anything that came from there, if existing in nothing was possible, would be even more bizarrely surreal than MC and Light. See my above post for my thoughts on other dimensions. MC and Light's personalities and powers don't really fit with supposedly coming from a realm of nothing. They'd be much better off coming from somewhere else. Also because void energy is a bit too handwavey.

Ibs lifted is preferable. And for Light she shouldn't be that superhumanly strong, maybe between 500 and a thousand pounds.
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i'm just tired of female characters often being wimpy when it comes to the super strength department or being an inferior clone of their male counterpart. Starfire is the only decent one, and shes only good in the animated version of teen titans. the crappy comic book one is just... eurgh. Thats why that little seems too low. But that wont be bad if she can lift more and more, unlike Superman who has plateued. I'd be ok with that.

Though if you hate the void energy thing, that sorta ties most of her powers together minus Super strength/super regen, which are standard powers. I'd need an energy type that siphons then, besides magic. (God I hate the spell Magic Missile, so bland.)

I should also point out that 500 lbs isn't that super strong. Deadpool can lift 4 kilos before his body will stop lifting things due to his bones snapping, and batman can lift 500 easy.
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I actually made Olympia to be a strong female that way. I don't know much about Starfire in the comics but I have heard unfavorable stuff. I just don't want too many pure physically based characters in general, if everyone had durability, regen, and strength It'd get boring.

Well you can just say it's a form of pure magic energy from her home plane that ties all of her powers together and has unique properties. I've never played D&D so I can't really comment :P

I'm not really familiar with the metric system being a Yank but aren't kilos, kilograms? Hmm. Well I just don't want her to be like Maxwell as an unstoppable powerhouse. I'm thinking she should max out at a ton or two to keep everything balanced. Plus that's like gorilla strength and everyone knows gorillas are awesome.

But the changes are good enough for me to accept the characters just gotta get the cosmetics for their birthplace and stuff like that. Making up a name for a magical world might be fun :P

And from now on let's try to tone down on the amount of physical characters.
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